There Are Too Many Dark and Crippled Magical Girls!

Yes, but the aspect of the magical girl cultivator is not what I want to see, and there is a feeling that I want to expand the world view, but I don't. Generally The kind of trainer I want is the kind who can truly teach magical girls to fight and change the inherent path of becoming a magical girl, thereby changing the existing system of magical girls and allowing more beautiful girls full of beautiful spirit, love and justice to join magical girls. It is the kind of existence that is similar to a guide, a mother, and a godfather. And because the crystals in the bodies of those magical girls that I cultivated are all given by myself, when they fight against the whole world at the end, and when they fight the final BOSS, they directly combine the power of all the magical girls that they cultivated into one, and with the beautiful, firm and hopeful beliefs of all magical girls, they will blow up the whole world! ! Magical girls are characters who convey love and justice, and are full of hope and vitality!

How should I put it, although the background of this world is relatively dark and dark, the protagonist is still full of positive energy. So far, it seems that none of the protagonist's friends have ever been stabbed. After all, his profile says he is happy. Of course, if he is a friend of the main character behind him, then I can't tell.

It's okay, overall it's pretty good, but the plot is a bit slow. Although I know that the plot is advancing, I feel a sense of anxiety when I see the big meal coming but I can't eat it in front of my eyes, and I have to speed up.

The author who plays Border Bus usually writes well because there is an example of Xiao Jin. Drawing lessons from his games, it is a very good setting, but the overall story and development will be quite different. As long as there are ideas, it is better than many Tomato books. I think the biggest problem with this book is the problem of expression. The expressions in some places cannot be quickly understood or are too general. Is this a difference in the language expression style or the way of understanding? I think we can compare the writing of the deepseekv3.2 Model to see the difference.

The protagonist works hard little by little to correct the beautiful world view of magical girls. This is what I want to see. His combat power is not compromised online, he beats up the mascots and villains of Hei Can Shen, he is a wife (?) And he is a piece of wood at the same time, I love him so much. The only problem is that I think organizing the factions is too complicated. Sometimes there is a feeling of "why are they fighting?" And it is not clear who is good, who is bad, and who is being fooled. I don't know what the motive for hostility is other than a cult, maybe there are too many Riddlers.

Magical Girl Training Plan (Confirmed) [smile][smile]

When I saw the ages of the characters in the book, I knew why not many people had read such a good novel [smile]

It seems there is still a long way to go [full]

It can be seen that the author really understands and really likes magical girls. The protagonist is really charming and is a mother-level figure [cool]

It looks good, author, please don't keep it private.

There are many types of magical girls [blowing kiss]

Not bad, quite interesting

Why did you let me meet this book at chapter 68😭, why not chapter 680😭

Eden × Garden of Eden × Kindergarten✓

It looks good, I hope the author will work hard and don't stop updating [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Shy][Shy]

Gold, it's gold! The giraffe is here [Admiration], I eat, I eat, I eat, eat, eat, hee, it's delicious, Arigado😋 It's super delicious, and the world view is also very interesting. After watching it, the most charming character is the protagonist😋

Beautiful, delicious

[Shy] (left some compliments and left)

Very good [blowing kiss] but updates are a bit slow

The most powerful mascot in ancient times! ! ! Vs the strongest mascot in modern times! ! ! "I want to say something in advance, you are the challenger." "Come on, let me show you the magical girl I raised." "Transform!!!" "Transform!!!"

I can see it, but it's average. I want to describe the worldview in a big way but I can't expand it. There are a lot of borrowed settings and lots of jokes. I can see a lot of hallucinations.

The pace of the novel is very comfortable, and the overall appearance is not laggy. The characters are also very distinctive and easy to distinguish. I feel that the score is too low now, 8.0. I feel that it is definitely there.

All in all, it is very delicious [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

The low rating is unusual. In fact, this site is considered to be very good at writing about magical girls.

Oh no no no, I am undoubtedly excited [shy]

It was okay, but I didn't see the black and deep residuals that I wanted to see. I hope the author will get better and better [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Absolute magic, the resulting harem (?) Teaches you to be single-minded...

This looks great, the author will update it soon

Beautiful magical girl

It looks good, and the world view pokes me! !