The Grudge-Fueled God System

I would like to give you five stars for encouragement first. After all, Eastern fantasy themes are quite rare in 🍅furry novels. Next, I will give a little evaluation. After reading it for a short time, I have a few feelings after reading it: The first is that the plot advances too fast and is not very coherent. It is probably a state where the author can understand it but the readers are a little confused when reading it. Secondly, there is a lack of some detailed descriptions, and a large number of characters appear in a short period of time, which makes it difficult to establish people. In addition, when reading the first article together, I did not understand what each character did and what its significance was. But I like this subject very much. The author's writing style doesn't feel childish or AI-like, so overall I like you, keep up the good workつ♡⊂ I'm afraid you can't understand what I'm writing. Let me explain. For example, I have read Chapter 7 now. If someone else had written it, I might have just communicated with Ashes in the guest room after the first rebirth, showing the characters of Ashes and the protagonist through details such as dialogue, action, demeanor, and introducing the world view in a little detail, but by this time the protagonist has been reborn three times. And this led to me not understanding the way the protagonist and Ashes think when they face problems. For example, why did Ashes self-destruct inexplicably after the protagonist was cut in half? Because I didn't feel how important the protagonist was to him. Is it important enough to make a nothingness become nothingness directly??? And judging from such combat power, Ashes is quite powerful, and it can build a city at once, but such a strong man not only cannot see through the bad intentions of the dragon-headed boy, but cannot save the protagonist when he is in danger, and cannot defeat a newly promoted grudge. But author, don't be sad, I just sincerely raise questions and suggestions. If you write it for your own pleasure, then just be happy ((つ✧ω✧)つ

I give myself a five stars.

Haha, it's a bit embarrassing. I always thought the protagonist was a gray wolf. I thought I really didn't understand. How should I put it? It's not good-looking, there are too many things that I skipped, and the protagonist is also a god.

Very pretty, so sweet. Abuse? No feeling

Good looking… Although it is cruel (cross out), there will always be he. Will win (fog

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