Horror Game: Hell Inc.

So far, it seems quite satisfactory, and the rhythm of the plot is well grasped. The protagonist of this book does not have the same protagonist template as many other novels of the same type. He is obviously a novice who has just entered the dungeon at the beginning, but he is extremely calm, like a veteran who has cleared the dungeon many times. The protagonist of this book has been there since the first dungeon. When learning how to survive, you can clearly see that the protagonist has a growth process, and the most important thing is that the protagonist currently does not have a golden finger, and basically relies solely on wisdom. The plot reasoning of the copy is not boring. I have recently found a lot of horror infinite streams, and finally there is another one that can make me personally want to read it. Finished reading the chapter and updated it now~

Surprisingly, it's not bad, and the writing is very comfortable. [Chigua] doesn't have the main character lose his memory like most novels, or have special abilities. It's about an ordinary person getting involved in a horror game and growing up step by step. The highlights of the first copy mostly focus on the side characters, shaping the image, and highlighting the growth process of the protagonist (emm, it is a bit like a group portrait, each character has his own story). The score is about 8 points, (after reading Ghost Eye, Nightmare, and Ghost House, you can try it, it is a good meal replacement). Then there are some small flaws and loopholes (maybe pitfalls), it depends on whether the author will fill them in later. If it's a little worse, it will be tasteless and it will be a pity to throw it away.

Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. If you have any opinions, you can leave them in this comment. I will modify it as appropriate. As for giving low scores, of course, that is everyone's right, and I have no objection. But please allow me to sell it for a small price [Thinking] My daily Hegao fee, not to mention eating, drinking two extra bottles of water is enough, and I can't get it with perfect attendance. Although I never thought about making a living from this line of work, I just wrote out of pure addiction and out of interest. But I also ask all the viewers to hold your hands high and comment as appropriate. I would like to thank you all here (bow) [blowing kiss] By the way, one more thing. According to my outline, this book has a heroine, a heroine, a heroine! ! ! (Say important things three times) After the second copy is written, a vote will be held. As long as the result is not outrageous to 1:9 or 2:8, it probably won't be changed [shy] Some people may think that my book is poorly written and that it is a classic. If you really don't like it, you can leave a negative review, you can even point at my nose and scold me if you feel unhappy with me. I will not use my authority to ban any readers who speak normally. I smiled and the matter passed away and I didn't take it to heart. But to trouble some people, please don't bite other readers in the comment area. I will always stand by my dear readers. [Blowing kiss] Anyone who attacks my readers in the comment area will be banned. [Laughing awkwardly]

It's pretty good, a little bit like when I was a kid watching Hell Apartment while nestled in bed. However, the writing style is a bit immature. For example, I wrote the sentence "supported by experience" several times to describe the character Li Guodong. The rhythm is well controlled, and I think the difficulty of the copy is relatively low. The author can work harder to write more difficult and exciting copy later. The protagonist is not like some other novels where he just pretends to have a golden finger or the thunder is loud and the rain is light. The impression is good.

This book is well written, but the chapters are too short. The new book next door is the Horror Elevator. The chapters are very quick, but not as good as yours. The horror book has a lot of sensational chapters in it. It's so annoying. . Your horror atmosphere is okay, but I don't know if there are any successful cases of becoming a treacherous house and ghost smell. . . .

I'm surprised that there is a female protagonist. I actually don't really like horror stories with emotional scenes. The first is that it distracts from the scary atmosphere. Knowing clearly that the girl will not die reduces the tension of having to worry about the player for the sake of the player. The second is that the emotional scenes are very abrupt in this type of escape novel. , I can't stand it, horror should be scary, but because the second copy is well written and better than the other copies, I gave it four stars. If you think about it, I recommend reading the second copy. I think this is a better opening chapter, because it is exciting to attract readers. Comparison

How to say it? I have read many novels of this type. The male protagonist does not have a golden finger, nor is he particularly unusual in calmness and analytical skills. The first copy is basically about doing less, reading more, and learning more. It is very rigorous. The second copy is the real climax. If you are a reading friend, I recommend you to read Chapter 84, which is absolutely wonderful [lick the screen]. If it is not wonderful, you must not come back to scold me. You scold me, I have a weak heart, and I will delete the comment [crying]

As a new writer, I can only say that it is top-notch. I really like the plot design after entering the dungeon in the current chapter and the ghost rules hunting plot. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] From my personal standards, I think the plot the author has written so far has just reached what I think is a very good place. In addition, the few ghost hunting books I have read feel a bit over the top. I feel that the ghost writing is more like the omnipresent GM, with global God's perspective and creative mode enabled. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you. I think this book is promising in the future.

The first dungeon is a bit immature, and the second dungeon is a bit similar to Tuanshan Temple in Nightmare, but it has indeed found its own way. Whether it is the rhythm control or the connection of the plot, it can be said that the writing is very good, but we still need to wait and see the situation of the third dungeon. If you can grasp it well, it will definitely be a good book as good as Nightmare.

After staying up late to read the second story, I felt that the protagonist, like most people, also panics, which is very real. But I will try my best to find a way out, there is no golden finger. I will keep reading, thank you so much for the author! Because I finally found a book I like

It feels pretty good. The writing and character design are also okay. It doesn't have that kind of male tone. It's just that the first dungeon ended too hastily and some parts are not very logical. I haven't started reading the second dungeon yet. I'll give you four stars for encouragement first [shy]

I feel that the atmosphere is pretty good. It seems that the protagonist is miserable without a golden finger. One star is deducted because there is a female protagonist. Because having a female protagonist means that both of them have golden fingers. The scary and suffocating atmosphere suddenly disappears... There is no fear of the protagonist trying to survive alone and his teammates around him not knowing when they will die. The horror has been directly reduced...

It smells like an apartment in hell, very scary! It is better-looking than most of the "very popular" articles on the market, especially the first two copies, which are not too cold for people in the hospital. Anyway, please give it a try, the author, it's so scary that I don't even dare to go to the toilet.

It's still very good. The first copy is very nice. Come on, author.

The quality is quite high, and I struck gold. Creative, smooth writing, no nonsense. I feel comfortable looking at it. Gui is a bit sinister, but the strength of the second copy is relatively high. Gui is very cunning. To reveal a little bit, there are also tricks in reality, and it is easy to get bumped on the way to the dungeon. There are roadblocks in front of the dungeon. There are basically no problems with the logic of the reasoning and story. Come on, author! Hurry up! [Laugh]

The overall pacing is okay, but I still don't know how to win the ghost in reality and have a happy ending. In a plot like this with infinite flow, the ghost cannot be defeated, unless the protagonist has passed countless levels before and has his memory erased.

It's really good. It's getting better and better since the first copy.

At present, the rhythm is well controlled. The horror level and logic of the copy are all online. Come on, update. The last priority is to improve the update speed.

I read the latest chapter in one go. It's good to read and has many twists and turns. I'm willing to kill the characters hahh

It's not bad, it's outstanding among its kind. I laughed angrily. Did the author not want to write it because the data was so bad? Is the sudden reversal interesting? I seem to have seen a Fujimoto tree going crazy. Everything is false. Where is your outline, author? Didn't I say that the emotional line has been decided? Why didn't I write it down? How dare you play tricks on me

Not bad, it feels like a ghost elevator

The dungeon is cleverly designed, and I feel very immersive when reading it. The battle of wits and courage with ghosts can adjust my emotions very well. The reversal of the rules of true and false and the living dead make me look forward to the next development. After reading the second dungeon, I just want to say, the main character is so miserable, I have to hold back, and the male protagonist is really a little lucky star. These two copies are over.

This book is good, the plot is not bad, and the writing gets better and better. In Tomato, you have already surpassed 95% of the authors. Come on, keep writing.

I saw the second dungeon. It had a bit of a scary atmosphere, but it was still not scary [cool] enough. The dungeon was very fast-paced and didn't drag on for too long to make people impatient. The writing is pretty good, but there are still some minor flaws in some places.

Well written, logical and in line with my taste

The sense of immersion is very strong, but it's very uncomfortable to be out of context.

Not bad. Very pretty.

It's pretty good and worth seeing.

Well written, keep up the good work

The second copy is good