One Piece: The Shepherd Who Began Among the Shichibukai

The first problem is that the protagonist's name is a bit too abrupt. Even if you change from Levi to Lee Weiss, this problem is that there is no sense of substitution. The second question is about the character design. The characters' responses are too bland and have a human-machine feel. Did you use AI to write them? The third question: Since you have decided to write a novel, you must know that the golden three chapters are for authors with a foundation in writing. For novice authors, sometimes the cover and introduction are a key factor in deciding whether readers are willing to stay and click on it. After clicking on it, the content of the first chapter must be fully explained, and it must make people want to continue reading. You have not occupied even one of them.

The plot is blunt, the writing is rough, and the plot is awkward

I can't understand it, it's unattractive, and I don't even explain the ability system. Those who haven't watched Lord of Mysteries won't know what it is.