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The writing skills are insufficient, the characterization is blunt, and the depressing atmosphere that Cthulhu should have is not fully written out. The background worldview is quite attractive. Compared with the traditional type, adding a Cthulhu style will make it more competitive. The plot is traditional but still quite interesting. Let's talk about some more ideas (objective suggestions, but you may not adopt them): The Cthulhu style should be used to broaden the writing space. The article only packages Cthulhu as a monster, and the essence is still a traditional survival assembly line. When fighting against different train player camps, don't marginalize passers-by. I actually don't really want you to follow the traditional cool writing routine of repeatedly brushing the map, killing monsters and stocking up on goods (you must bring it, but it's best to know the scale). This style is already evident in Chapter 48, and this traditional plot will be weak in the later stages. You don't need to follow so fast in the early stage. When writing a long novel, you need to lay down the framework first. I can't give you too much advice, that's all [please update]

If you want to read a cool novel, you don't have to read it, because there is one person who is always better than the protagonist.

It looked pretty good, but at first I looked at him and doubted whether the protagonist was the protagonist, which is different from most other train novels. Most other train novels start with the protagonist being strong all the way to the end. After all, he didn't get any of the first promotions three times, and then I added up the bones later? Isn't this undead? Another late-stage Undead Scourge? It's interesting. The author needs to update it quickly. Don't give up. Come on and support you.

It's a pretty good book, and it's most likely a lone wolf genre, but my suggestion is to retain a dozen more common characters. You can't just say that a bunch of characters will all die in one incident, right? So who do you rely on to advance your story? At the same time, I hope that the author can practice his real writing skills and create more original ones. The appearance of film and television animation characters can indeed resonate with readers. However, when there are too many characters of this type, it is really easy to get tired, and it is difficult to watch some original ones. Hope the author can do it.

The book is quite good, the setting is good, the plot is okay, the character description is a bit iffy and a bit OOC, but the book is free, the author is also a novice, and the writing style is relatively immature, so there is nothing wrong with it. I can go to Al and refine it. Based on the current level, the final book review is about 8.8 Points. I want to read it. Upgrade, it depends on the performance after reading. It is not recommended to raise a new book, it is easy to raise to death. If you raise it after 200 chapters, it is not easy to raise to death. This book is considered a good book in the tomato survival category in terms of the current setting. It has a train survival setting, plus a sequence setting. It is suspected that there is a multi-world setting. The body shape is quite novel. I recommend reading it.

I have read Chapter 48 so far, and there is no big problem. The minor problems are mainly in the data description and the beginning is a bit awkward, but it gets much better later on. There are only a few protagonists who are not double-standard, not stallion, can last hit, and will not waste resources. It would be better if the author's productivity could be higher.

After the tasting, it's okay. I marked chapter 38 to see if there are any poisonous points in it. You can check whether it's okay or not.

So well written! I have only seen 3 such good books

Ask an author to pay attention

It's very interesting that in the first 10 chapters, when the protagonist was infected, and when the protagonist was not the first to upgrade the train, and the protagonist's career was very interesting, but it was a little too ideal, and the flaws could not be covered up.

It's quite nice, take your time, don't rush the train cannon, laser cannons and more are coming! !

It's well written, but it's not enough to watch now. Judging from the setting, the author's world view is relatively large, and the plot rhythm is also good [Chigua]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Looking good so far

Good idea but too few chapters

Not bad, speed update,

So far it's pretty good

I've caught up with the main force, and my senses are fine so far.

Okay, okay, beating the boss is really fun.

Finally found a normal development book

I haven't been reading for too long. This book looks quite interesting. It attracted me from the beginning to the latest chapters. I personally think it suits my taste.

The subject matter is good, and the plot is not cliched. I will give you five stars for encouragement first, and I will change it if there are any changes in the future.

It's a very good book. The world background and other aspects are quite good. As for the writing style, it will naturally improve as the author writes more.

I saw the end of the first team formation. Overall it was pretty good. It didn't drag on. It's a good book.

It looks good, support it

Come on, author! Come on!

Average to above average.

It's okay, you can eat it, and it's not poisonous yet.

This book is so silly, so silly, so silly, so silly

The basics are a little worse, but it doesn't affect the look and feel. So far, it looks pretty good. It's a piece of daily food.