Reborn as a Tacet Discord, I Shine from Jinzhou Onward

I've written almost 200,000 words, so I'll give myself a book review. This book is also the first one that Lao Zuo has written, so I am quite satisfied with it. Lao Zuo's writing level is also slowly improving. The Lahiro chapter is coming to an end. I hope Lina Sita and the New Federation will be better in the future! There are many readers who are curious about the protagonist's abilities, and may think that the protagonist is a bit weak. Let me tell you the truth, the protagonist is not Solaris's Naru Shiki, nor is he a Space Naru Shiki. The Heart Domain is just his method.

It's a good book to watch, there's nothing wrong with the plot, it's well connected, and there are no pitfalls overall. It's a book with potential, but it's a little inferior to Babel Belt. (Every author deserves a five-star rating. There are more people who can write a book than many others. Big boost for the author! Five stars for you!)

Let me talk about the problem first, that is, the protagonist's Naru-shiki characteristics were not well reflected until Chapter 80. The presence of this setting is not very strong. Then the emotional changes of the characters are actually quite sudden, such as sworn sworn relationship with the Drifter at the beginning, or quickly gaining recognition from others, or being named King of Jinzhou, etc. If we want to pursue a comedy style, we should stick to this style, which is Lao Mo's Mingchao world view. But the overall feeling is that the feelings inexplicably heat up, or other people's attitudes towards the protagonist have changed or improved a lot. It can be said that it is due to the lack of psychological description of the supporting characters. For example, why does the principal think highly of the protagonist and trust him; and why does Dania suddenly like the protagonist? (On the day they met, there was no special incident. The protagonist, as a stranger, just took him shopping and eating; I think normal people would first take a vigilant attitude when encountering this kind of situation.) I hope the author will keep up the good work!

Overall, it can be considered a high-quality film with a single female protagonist. It is also better to spread sweetness every day. Anyway, it is highly recommended. What follows are all my guesses, so you don't have to read it. I'm curious about one thing right now, is the protagonist human or Naru-shiki? After becoming Mingshi, is it really him??? And if Mingshi is him, there is He Civilization (Tianwai Civilization). According to my understanding, He Civilization is a civilization with very powerful technology, that is, a "pre-civilization". And how did the He civilization collapse? Moreover, the protagonist is Ming Shi of He Civilization. Based on the characteristics of Ming Shi in the plot, there is a high probability that the protagonist destroyed He Civilization. Moreover, Ming style is often a mixture of pain, guilt, despair, arrogance, sarcasm, indifference, and various negative emotions. Under the current circumstances, the protagonist does not show any physical expression of contempt, hatred, or disgust for human beings. Then we can conclude that the real Naru Shiki is sleeping in the protagonist's body. Moreover, the Drifter did not prevent the destruction of He Civilization (Extraterrestrial Civilization). Either the Drifter and the protagonist were allies, or the Drifter in his heyday could not defeat the protagonist at all. If the Naru Shiki in the protagonist's body really recovers, even if everyone joins in to add a drifter whose strength has not returned to its peak. Can't even last dozens of rounds. Then a sacrifice is needed to awaken Naru Shiki's sub-personality (protagonist). Then, this sacrifice must be Yaya. Based on the emotional line written by the current author, Yaya likes the protagonist very much. The protagonist also likes Yaya very much. Therefore, the probability of Yaya sacrificing for the protagonist is extremely high and terrifying. Let's talk about the other two possibilities. Type 1: All of this is the protagonist's hallucination before his death. What time travel? What Yaya? What system? They are all automatically imagined in the mind before death. (Worst case scenario) The second type: the protagonist is Naru Shiki, and Naru Shiki is the protagonist. The protagonist loves Yaya very much, and it is very likely that Yaya will become the protagonist's sympathetic partner later on. Although the protagonist is Naru Shiki, in Yaya's eyes he is a somewhat cute lover. Another vest, and I'm suffering from knife paranoia again. So when I read the very sweet plot, I always thought that the author was going to give me an invincible blow. 😄

Okay, okay. I have read more than 20 chapters so far. The writing is great. It has a single heroine Yaya. If you like it, click here to support the author.

Overall, I don't see any problems so far, and the direction is very clear. If possible, the author can add some foreshadowing (metaphor)

The writing is very sweet, good luck to the author 😄

Like, like, love watching Yaya

Good looking, the evil peach is so cute [lick screen]

It's perfectly fine, as long as you don't change the setting of the heroine later like a certain full-timer.