Lost City 2: Gears of Destiny

The overall writing is quite restorative and the writing style is also good. The only drawback is that the emotional description is a bit too casual and blunt. The article does not describe the process of Lin Xingyue's heart-beating for the male protagonist. Is it too casual to directly describe it as "shy"? It can be said that it is love at first sight or something else because the hero saves the beauty and adds a little appearance buff. However, we cannot directly develop the emotional line without any foreshadowing, because this makes me feel more disconnected the more I see it later. I hope the author can make some modifications. The description of emotions in the original book is very delicate. Whether it is Gao Yang's childhood sweetheart or his deskmate, they are all very important in Gao Yang's heart. Therefore, whether it is like or secret love, it is traceable and justified. Li Weiwei's incident has such a great impact on Gao Yang and promotes his growth. As for Officer Huang's portrayal, I think it's a little off: I just finished the second update recently. As an old detective, Officer Huang in the original text gave people the impression of being a very calm and reliable person in the early stage. However, the portrayal of Officer Huang in the recording section made people feel a little emotionally unstable and restless. Also, the section on the police car made Uncle Huang a villain for me.) The above are just some superficial understandings and suggestions from a reader who loves to read. I will continue to follow this book. Thank you to the author!

It's high quality, and it fills in some surging holes. It was fine in the early stage, but it was over in the later stage. It doesn't feel like it was written by one person.

Finally, I have a book. I am so excited. Who knows, I have finished reading Alien Beasts and my withdrawal reaction has been cured. Finally, I have a high-quality fanfic. Keep it up, I will always follow the author and be loyal! ! ! !

It can be seen that the author has really read the original work. As a fan of the original work, I still feel very satisfied after reading the first ten chapters. I want to make up for the regrets in the original work, but the later chapters always feel weird. Will the increase in talent given to the protagonist after 200 be too big and too fast? In addition, such an improvement is not reflected in the change of the protagonist's ability. The value in the latest chapter is almost three times that of the previous one. Fans of the original novel can still take a look at this feeling, but it is really boring without a sense of satisfaction. And it's a bit delayed. The audience is familiar with the original work, and new characters appear immediately. In addition, the plot is a bit messy, and the emotional line is a bit abrupt. Regardless of the input, I am very grateful to the author for his willingness to write. Alien Beasts is no longer just a cool article. The foreshadowing and revelations, coupled with various complex and precise settings, are definitely the most difficult type of fan fiction to write, just like adding a part to a precise mortise and tenon joint. I would like to make a small suggestion. First of all, it's fun to write, and the pace should be fast, so as to pass the original plot. Come on, the author.

How should I put it? It feels very similar to the style of the original work. Every time I read this book, I feel like I am reading a The Paper novel. The plot is also okay, it hooked me, and it has strength. The further I read, the more I feel that the author's strength is gradually exposed. A mediocre online novel can't compare to top writers like The Paper. Moreover, the author loves to modify his writing style. The plot becomes more and more awkward as it goes on, and I feel that many of the characters' personalities are inconsistent with the original work.

I hope the author can contact The Paper to talk about this copyright-related issue. After reading some of the chapters so far, the writing is really good. I don't want it to be removed from the shelves due to some copyrights.

It's really good. Whether it's the new talents, the creation of new characters or the restoration of old characters, they are all perfect. Also, Chuxue must be resurrected [Like]

The continuation of "The Lost City of Beasts" is great, the best fan fiction I've ever read.

I read Chapter 92 on June 26, 2026. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas. Although the writing is young, the settings he added can still be well integrated with the original work. But I personally think that the protagonist's emotional scenes are out of nowhere, and the heroine's feelings for the hero are also inexplicable, as she suddenly falls in love at first sight. In order to write more plots about the heroine, the author currently has the heroine participate in every event, but for now, the heroine's role is just a buff. She is always injured in the process of participating in the event, like a vase. I think if the emotional drama is difficult to write, Xu Xutuzhi can do it without imposing a "love at first sight" setting for the heroine. The sense of disobedience is especially obvious in Chapter 92. The heroine suddenly died without any foreshadowing (the previous sentence said that her hand was touched, which immediately reminded people of the person with explosive power, but this person was recovered in just one chapter and had not even appeared before.) The death made the protagonist's emotional expression like a clown's show, there was really no sense of substitution, and it was very out of place. The character of the protagonist changed very quickly. At first, he had a sense of invincibility after seeing through the script. Later, he found that it was not as expected, and he started to panic. This is normal. Then he seemed to calm down all of a sudden, and suddenly he had leadership. He was calm but had no leadership. Where did the leadership come from? In terms of combat power, the protagonist, an untrained person, has been able to fight with high-level beasts and command battles in just a few days. In short, there are still shortcomings, but I still hope that the author can continue writing. After all, there is really no fanfic about alien beasts. Five-star support

When I saw the name, I thought it was a continuation. After reading it, it turned out to be a fanfic, but it's really good, but three chapters a day is not enough. Can I read 10 chapters a day? [Laughs]

Ah, I finally saw the sequel, I've been waiting for so many years

The writing is quite good. Come on, the author will update quickly.

It's okay, I've seen more than 50 chapters so far. Well, in the early stage, I feel that the foreshadowing is very deep. Well, the setting is a bit unclear. You can learn from The Paper and make it simpler and easier to understand.

There are not many fans of Alien Beasts, and even fewer of them are of good quality. Come on, author!

The best alien fanfic I've ever seen

It's well written, and it's novel from another perspective.

In my opinion, this book can be said to be the best among all the alien beast fanfics. The author would like to add more chapters. ᔦ ° ꒳ ° ᔨ ̖́-

I really like your work, more than the original author, and I understand your difficulties. After all, not everyone can do things without worries. I will be entering my first year of high school in September, and I have made a three-year agreement. After the college entrance examination is over in three years, I will come back to catch up! Hope you come on! Let me take a photo of my puppy now as a souvenir.

I hope the author won't stop adding more crappy parts. Come on, it's really good.

As an 8-year-old bookworm, I would like to make a sharp comment. First of all, there is no need to always emphasize that fate cannot be changed. Then there was just too little, and the pace wasn't as fast as I wanted.

I can only say that the writing is very good, at least the setting and plot are pretty good.

It's so beautiful, the most restorative style of writing

Ok ok ok

I do feel like it's a bit of a statement. Although it's not as good as the original text, it's still edible.

Give your new book five-star reviews to support it. Next is my evaluation: A panda once said to a cow, "Long Li, long time, long time, long time."

This is the most naughty second creation I have ever seen. Really, if you are a fan of alien beasts, you should check it out.

Very nice, brothers. The author is very strong.

It's very well written and is very realistic. Unfortunately, most people are looking forward to the real second season.

It's quite creative and the plot has ups and downs.

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