[Slice of Life + Slow Burn + Character Growth + Reborn + The Outcast + Righting Regrets + Ensemble Cast]
As a new author, I welcome your suggestions. If there are unnecessary passages, or if you have better wording to replace them, feel free to leave a comment explaining your edits. If the suggestions are good, I’ll revise the story accordingly.
In his previous life, Zhang Lingxiao worked himself to death. His one last wish was simple: In his next life, let someone else do the grinding. He was going to lie flat.
When he opened his eyes again, he was an abandoned infant in the aftermath of the Jiashen Rebellion. Zhang Zhiwei, still a young man, found him and brought him back to Mount Longhu, where Old Celestial Master Zhang Jingqing took him as his final disciple.
He thought he would spend this life cultivating in seclusion and training hard. Who knew he would awaken the Lie Flat to Immortality System?
Sleeping increased his qi. Sunbathing made him stronger. Even daydreaming earned rewards. The longer he lazed around, the better the rewards.
And so Mount Longhu gained its most outrageous junior granduncle.
Most of the time, he lay in the sun. But when it mattered, he saved Tian Jinzhong, prolonged Zhang Jingqing’s life, broke the deadlock surrounding the Celestial Master’s succession, and painstakingly set right one regret after another across the mountain.
While others practiced martial arts, he cultivated immortality on Mount Longhu.
While others worked themselves to the bone, he lazed his way to immortality.
By the time Zhang Lingyu joined the sect and Zhang Chulan came up the mountain, they would learn one thing:
The person you must never provoke on Mount Longhu isn’t the Old Celestial Master. It’s the laziest-looking junior granduncle.
I think it is novel and very interesting. Normally this kind of article should rewrite that the old master is Zhang Zhiwei, but this one is different, and the middle description of the relationship with master Zhang Jingqing, senior brother, and second senior brother is very warm. It would be great if it can be updated soon. I hope to write the part of saving the master soon, giving the master a massage, visiting the master, and then hurting the soul, so he fell asleep on the master's shoulder. It is very warm. Oh, I would like to clarify that my previous comment about giving the master a massage was a plot written in the book. I hope it will be written soon.
Newbie authors, please support me and give me feedback!
Listening to the book sounds like an AI comic drama, the plot is pretty good
The previous writing is indeed not good, it is a bit watery, but as you read on, the story line is quite attractive, and the author's writing skills are getting better and better. It can be seen that the author is also growing. Come on!
The pace is a bit slow, but this way of cheating is very different from other stories. It is very comfortable to read. I really like the setting of the whole mountain of Longhu Mountain becoming stronger together. I look forward to the author writing slowly.
That's it, how can I read it? Please update it soon.
The first novel I reviewed, and also the first novel I gave as a gift, haha, not bad, not bad.
Good job for a newbie to write like this.
The author is a genius. The elders taught a child less than two years old how to practice the rules, and he still answered the conversations fluently. He is awesome, and the heifer flies into the sky. He is so awesome.
It's not the kind of cool novel, it's quite suitable for people with a slow temper. The story line is very novel. Isn't the author secretly practicing in that mountain den? [Start]