Five States Broken

The early stage is meticulously prepared, with a natural transition from daily life in the village to a long journey to escape. The crisis scenes are full of tension, and the climaxes of the breakout in the forest and the refuge in the cave are written cleanly and neatly. The foreshadowing is cleverly laid, and the conflict between the forces of all parties is logical. There is no forced conflict, no brainless crushing scenes, and the overall rhythm is tight and appropriate.

"One river is white with white waves, two stars are bright, three mountains are green, and Sichuan is flat. The five mountains are ascending, and the six mountains are riding on saddles. The seven suns and eight wastes are all drinking together, and ten buckets of drunkenness are the name of a young man." "Ten years of mist and rain, nine floating trees, eight bitter joys, seven emotions. Six gods are desolate, and the wind and snow have stopped at the fifth watch. There is no one around, three leaks are gone, two temples are full of stars, and one lamp is green." First of all, I want to praise the author's writing style. A small poem and a few words can describe the ups and downs of Lao Xu's life. The delicate writing style can be seen. The reading experience of the whole work is very smooth, the logic is rigorous, and the plots are interlocking. The characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the details are laid out to make it easy to immerse yourself in it. The rhythm of daily life and climax is well controlled, and almost all the content has meaning. As the story progresses, the huge worldview does not pour out all at once, but unfolds step by step. There is no sense of stagnation when reading. It makes people look forward to the true full picture of this world. How many surprises are there waiting to be revealed?

Not bad, not bad, okay, I have the desire to pursue it [thinking]

The opening chapter is very gripping, describing the daily life of a low-level boy and the sudden changes in his fate very realistically. The construction of the worldview is very unique. The settings of Hunyuan Ruins and Yuanshi Sacrifice are gradually spread out, and they will not be piled up all at once. The rhythm of the story is relaxed and moderate, with both village fireworks and tense scenes of escape and fighting. The characters are vivid and can make people follow the protagonist's situation and make people feel worried and immersed.

The plot logic is clearly organized and there are no messy loopholes. The setting of the coexistence of the protagonist's two souls is interesting. The two lines of intrigue and cultivation are well balanced, and the foreshadowing is natural, making it very comfortable to watch.

Emmmm, it's okay, come on, author [I'll be blessed soon]

It's rare to see traditional fantasy that doesn't use cheats or quick upgrades. The protagonist starts out as a low-class tax slave in an abandoned state, and lives a new life with the regrets of his past life. The supporting characters all have complete lives, and there are no tool people. The Yuanli system and sacrificial rules of the five states are completely set, and the foreshadowing is very detailed. The daily labor, prison confrontation, and mountain escape are both warm and heavy. The pace is slow, but the more you read, the more you will remember. It is suitable for readers who are willing to calm down and sort out the clues.