The Entertainment Industry Is Eating Melon Online, Eating Melon Is Delicious

I give it four stars for the author's writing style, although it's a bit literate. But there is indeed something in the text, especially when it comes to playing the role of Murong Fu. Everything is done as you please and very thoughtful. I would like to make some comments. It is important to note this. The protagonist's golden finger must be updated in real time, otherwise readers will not know whether the protagonist is making progress. The protagonist must be given a bigger hook, preferably a rule-based one, and at least one that can protect himself. Otherwise, if the protagonist looks like this, he will be eaten soon, and it will be eaten by a man. The background of the protagonist is too thin. Now it can be said that he has no father or mother, and has no worries. He has been floating in the sky.

I have caught up with the latest chapter 145, let me know your thoughts. Although it is a Chinese entertainment novel, the beginning is mainly about gossip, supplemented by piling plot. Use Bagua combined with the butterfly effect of the protagonist to describe the protagonist's promotion path. The filming of conventional entertainment articles is briefly described, which is different from other ordinary entertainment articles and has new ideas. Although because of the river crab, the reading experience at the beginning is not very good... But in the last few dozen chapters, my own filming has been a bit back to the traditional entertainment style, and I haven't written the feeling of the beginning. I don't know if the river crab is showing strength again... However, the piling part is still strong, and overall it is good. I hope that the writing method at the beginning can be continued in the future.

Overall, it's okay. There aren't too many bad points. I'd like to make a small suggestion. Every time the protagonist gets along with people or talks about projects, it always feels a bit too smooth. There are too few conflicts in the interaction of interests. It's more satisfying for the enemy to set up obstacles and trick the protagonist and then cross over. There are also some issues where the timeline is a bit too fast. It could be interspersed with more daily life, the development of other parties, and Gong telling the protagonist 500 to be honest. It is a bit unrealistic. I feel that even though he has been in the circle for so long, he still only cares about his interests. There can also be some intrigues between the protagonist and the woman. When the movie is released, some feedback from the audience can be interspersed to prove that the movie's good looks reflect the box office and enhance some excitement. Try to write more about the interaction of the interests of all parties. I don't know how many words the author will prepare to finish it. I still hope it can be longer. I will always support it. It's well written. Come on! @ My days in the world are filled with numbers

It looks good, and the writing is very interesting. The protagonist has a clear goal and climbs up step by step. He eats meat when he should, and be careful where he should be careful. It is crisp and clear, but too many details have been reviewed and deleted, and the meaning is still unfinished.

Full marks for recommendation. I haven't skipped a chapter so far. It's very well written. The male protagonist has a good career and picks up girls. It's a normal entertainment story and has a lot of fun. There are definitely people who are criticizing it now that the rating is so low. Let me declare that I'm not a bastard [laughs]

There's a little something Most people dare to write their material, but Liu doesn't dare. Let's taste it.

It's closer to reality, the writing is good, the protagonist is a little character who has been struggling to develop, it's good that there is a system and it doesn't happen every second.

Except for the fact that there are a little too many couples in the crew, things can easily go wrong, and there is no backstage, making it easier for them to be killed to scare the monkeys, everything else is pretty good.

Personally, I think it's okay, the melon is a bit old, the protagonist's character is okay, and the plot development is also good! You can see a little bit!

Very well written, the rating is too low. It feels like he is on the same level as Shen Lang. And it's more down to earth! I hope more young people who have the fantasy of becoming famous overnight can see it. It's also educational [face covering]

Quick update, write about Huang Shu's uncle

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I've read more than a dozen chapters, so far it's pretty good. There are no literary conventions, and the language is humorous. I occasionally drive a car at a relatively fast speed, and it's easy to get sideways [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The rhythm is smooth, and it fills in the pits relatively perfectly.

Not bad, not bad, really good, I learned.

Okay, it's very well written. It's been a week, how can we update nine chapters? Get up and work for me quickly

There are so many things I don't know, people who simply don't care about the entertainment industry

Must give a five-star rating! ! ! The personality of each character is vividly displayed.

The entertainment articles are pretty good.

It just looks good, awesome

It's okay. They should be written by people with life experience, unlike many urban writings where everyone is like a horror movie dummy.

The writing is not bad, but the role of Akane Ushiko can be reduced. The name on her "American-Japanese mixed race" ID card, Niu Qianmiko, has not changed a word. Ever since the film and television industry asked for real-name appearances, it has not been filming. Is it because it doesn't want to film? I'm afraid my real name will be revealed. It shouldn't be difficult to change your name now!

It's well written, and the male protagonist is a bit like a little teddy. Everything else is good

Nice entertaining and entertaining article. It's not pretentious, it's not too rambling, it's not word count.

It's better than most entertainment so far.

Well written, recommended, no stressful plot

Not bad, a rare quality piece of entertainment literature

The writing is very good, and once you get into it, you won't be able to put it down.

The book is good, the pace, paragraphing, writing style, plot, and the feeling of enjoyment are not bad at all.

How should I put it? It's a very restrained entertainment novel. Pay attention to the key word "restraint"!