Xiangshao Wasteland, After Farming, Everyone Fell in Love with Me Crazily

Only for the elder brother of the twins in the introduction In Chapter 17, Lan Mingfeng pinched the heroine again. They were punished for pinching her neck before, but they didn't feel it because they felt that the punishment didn't hurt, they didn't have a sense of existence, and they didn't remember it long. In Chapter 17, they pinched the heroine again. Come on, where did the person in front of me die? His mouth was torn off, but he didn't seem to apologize. If he did, why did he still pinch the heroine in Chapter 17? This one is not well portrayed. I left. I feel that the male protagonist portrayed later will not be very interesting. Also, in novels like this, the heroine is always a nymphomaniac, isn't it said that the heroine is pretty? Have you never seen a good-looking person? Don't look in the mirror🪞, always write that the other person looks good and then agree to whatever the other person asks. She herself would not ask for others just because she looks good. Why did she think the heroine would agree to his request? Why would the heroine agree? According to her personality, she shouldn't agree. If she's good-looking, she should have learned to protect herself long ago. It's okay to give me a premonition of crisis. This heroine doesn't seem to be a stupid beauty. A person like her who loves to be alone should be sensitive to others. Why should she make the other person go into heat and act stupidly? Are the front and back aligned?

My suggestion is, if you really want to, rewrite the first few pictures, because you have a look for yourself, as a guide. In the female video, in the first 30 pictures, you write the image of the heroine as a fool, and then she is whipped by the sentry inside, who wants to crush her to death. You feel that the value of the heroine is to guide, there is no other. The value of her is just to use her as a tool. How do you think your readers, who are women, can read such an article? And at the moment she was about to be whipped, a sentry came in and said that this woman is suitable for my brother and must be combined to help him resolve the current situation. In the first five chapters, the role of the heroine is defined to a The image of a tool man, and then the man's brother was still clinging to the heroine, and a group of people tested the heroine, and performed a scene to test whether the heroine really stayed, and at the same time, the man hurt the heroine a second time. Under the circumstances, the man's brother went to find the heroine again, and after seeing the introduction, both of them should be The heroine's harem later, do you think this is possible in this case, and they only punished the second injury. No one apologized for what they did the first time, and no one felt regretful. That is, you portrayed the heroine as a fool, so she was willing to stay in that place, but no normal person would be able to stay in that place.

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