HP English Oak and Holly

The writing is very good. Although the male protagonist is Harry, most of the stories are about the female protagonist. I occasionally bump into Harry a few times (unlike some novels where I bump into him at every turn, which is very deliberate). Women are not men. Good reviews. Although it was demolished in autumn, there were no female competitors who praised it. The text is better than the introduction. Praying for an if extra chapter, because Harry's emotional line hasn't started yet, which makes me really upset with the heroine, George, and Seid. Each chapter has a lot of words and is very interesting to read. No AI smell. I think the characters are not OOC, they fit the characters very well, and the plot is logical. The heroine is also very charming. The author writes well, and some changes from the original work will be added at the end of the chapter, which is very rigorous.

The plot so far has been smooth and the writing is not awkward or immature. It's great that the heroine has her own original plot line instead of a story that always revolves around Harry. Although the love lines are only hints, I hope the heroine will talk about it!

I was attracted by the title of the book. Every time I click on it, BGM will automatically play in my mind. Hahaha, do you understand me? It has been tied. The plot is very smooth and vivid. There is nothing unreasonable. The original work tells us that we like you🫶. The story revolves around the heroine. She has her own growth line. She gets along with her friends and it makes people feel heart-warming. Lysa is a very good girl. She is smart and brave and loves the people around her. Anyone who has been with her will fall in love with her. I look forward to Lysa's career path and her first date with Harry~

The plot is very smooth and smooth, and the heroine and Ced are easier to read. The writing style is more everyday, and it all revolves around the heroine's life. It's not as painful as the original. It's almost the Goblet of Fire! Looking forward to the plot of the Goblet of Fire [asking for more updates] [asking for more updates] [top post]

The title of the book sounds like a sweet novel, but after reading the text, I found that it is completely in the style of a drama. The author's writing style is very good! Moreover, the writing is very close to the original work, whether it is the British humor or the vicious tongue. The writing is very good. The personal settings are also very reasonable and consistent with the original work. There are also many foreshadowings and settings. It is really a very good book! ! ! The heroine is really very good, determined, studious, principled and has a bottom line. Who said that we Slytherins are all dark wizards! ! Big boost, author. This book will definitely become more popular! (I feel like the teacher can change the introduction)

So pretty. All I can say is that my wife is so nice. Opened accidentally. I didn't expect it to be completely to my liking. I tied it all in one afternoon. In fact, I feel that it is very consistent with the original work. The personalities of some characters are very good. For example, Draco Malfoy did not adopt the movie version of Tom. Rather, it is completely in line with the arrogant and pure-blooded little adult image of Xiaolong in the original work. What I like most is that he doesn't describe the appearance in such a long way, but it makes people feel that the character's image is three-dimensional. I often open some fanfics, and he likes to use a lot of words, hundreds of words, to describe how beautiful the heroine is and how handsome the hero is. Sometimes the language is too colorful and can make people feel very unreadable. In this article, his literary talent is mediocre, but it does not make people feel that he is boring at all. Anyway, I strongly recommend giving him 5 stars.

CP is written by Harry, which is quite difficult to find, and I also like this setting very much. It is a micro-millionaire, which makes me feel very excited. I really like Harry. Moreover, the article has a light sense of humor, but Harry's role is a bit limited now. I hope to be able to describe them more in the future. I have to keep updating it. It's not easy to find a good and unread article about Harry [please update] [please update]

Very pretty! Although the cp is HP, the heroine is more focused on herself. Although HP has few scenes at present, it is still very interesting, and the intersection with other people is also very interesting, and it is finally not the kind of story about Snake Yard with the people in Snake Yard. I look forward to the follow-up! My wife wrote very well

I've been reading a lot of hp fanfics recently. I was attracted by the title of the book and accidentally clicked in. Fortunately, I have a good habit of reading the introduction, otherwise I would have missed it. What should I say? I didn't see or feel that the heroine likes Harry in the Astronomy Tower. I feel that the "like" is inexplicable and a bit abrupt. Is it my problem or because it is too unnatural? It seems a bit weird to me. George Seid seems to have more feelings than Harry? I'll wait and see. I hope the heroine's journey of how she fell in love with Harry will be written later. Otherwise, I really don't know. Anyway, this is really good food. Highly recommended.

I pushed it to the homepage and clicked on it. I like to read articles with original content and focus on career lines. The heroine is very good. It is normal to fall in love with her. The description of Harry is detailed, and the heroine's heartbeat for Harry is traceable. Everyone's love for Harry makes me shed tears and melt softly... Please, this is the savior😭... It feels so warm. I went back to read the introduction and found out that it was Harry 1v1🥺Oh... A good meal from heaven🤲🏻 The horror story is getting better. After I found out that there are only 8 unread chapters... Why did I click on the serialized article!

It's beautiful, this setting really touched my heart [Sending my heart to you] The author's writing style is also very good, it's a treasure novel, come and read it [Coming soon]

It's really, really, really beautiful. I really like the heroine. The heroine does not revolve around the hero alone, but has her own things to do. She is very charming. I hope you will never stop updating. I will always follow you! What you wrote is really great!

Originally I wasn't interested in the heartthrob theme, but this book is very good. The best part is that it is consistent with the original work, and it does not glorify some people inexplicably. In particular, I like the detail that the heroine and Dumbledore have basically no interaction, because I have read too many books where you have to ask Dumbledore for instructions on everything, and this one seems very fresh. Omg Could it be that Said survived on his own? This is so novel, a way of unfolding that has never been seen before. In addition, I am glad to see that the heroine does not revolve around the protagonist, and the professors do not revolve around these children.

The plot line of this book is quite smooth. It does not follow the main line directly. The heroine has her own personal plot line, her own competition and goals. Overall, it is very comfortable to watch. The emotional line is also good, there is no embarrassing plot, it can be regarded as an embellishment of the plot line, and it is well received. Despite the fact that this book only has less than fifty chapters, each chapter is actually 4k+, and one chapter is worth more than two chapters on average, so it is considered fat enough to be slaughtered. Looking forward to the plot of Goblet of Fire~

It's equal, it's very interesting, the heroine has her own life and career line, it's the first time I see an organization that protects Squibs in a fanfic, I'm looking forward to the heroine's follow-up development The writing is very smooth and the rhythm is good. The female protagonist did not participate much in the main plot in the early stage, but the content is also very rich. I will update it soon! Looking forward to a wave of if lines from other CPs, which are also very fragrant

Very cool! Lysa's character really pokes me! The plot is well written and I can't get enough of it.

The writing style is very good, but I personally feel that Harry's line is still a bit abrupt. There is not much friendship in the early stage, and I prefer Cedric and George. The heroine in the author's works is very charming, but I don't know if there will be an if extra chapter later. Will you write some sweet little daily routines after being with Harry? Xiao Ha's dark flavor is also very enjoyable. Please update it soon.

How to say it? I like the character of the heroine very much, and she is not the kind of person who favors the heroine, and will give her a little setback, so that the heroine can grow better. The author's writing is very good. Although I have only read half of it, I swear that as long as the author updates it, I will follow this book until I grow old.

It's very beautiful and reads smoothly.

The plot is as smooth as a piano piece. The charm of the heroine is not a rigid description of her appearance, but is revealed in her behavior and the fragrant rice.

It still fits the original work very well. Many articles about Slytherin heroines have to whitewash Snape and Draco, which makes people uncomfortable. This one is in line with the original work.

Good looking, I like the original work

The heroine snake courtyard lion heart

Beautiful, exciting and not obtrusive

It's really, really beautiful! ! ! !

Delicious, first time encountering this type😋😋😋😋

I am very happy every time I find a good HP book. Even if the novel is still very young, I support the author and keep reading.

Please update the author quickly. I really want to see Harry get upset when he sees the heroine dating someone else.

The heroine is a pure-blooded heir to the Rozier family, and her writing is very fluent. Go to school at Hogwarts, cp Harry, Harry doesn't have many early scenes. There are single arrows for George and Cedric, which I actually don't like very much. It would be fine if it were all, but I've decided that CP doesn't like the arrows. We are currently progressing to the Goblet of Fire, looking forward to the next article.

The writing style is not green at all, and the image of the heroine Slytherin is particularly well created [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I really can't wait to finish it right away.