[One heroine: a nine-tailed fox; rebellious disciple who seduces his master; pure sweetness, no angst]
[Slow-paced, everyday-life focus, with a later role reversal and mutual devotion]
[Part power fantasy: the male lead is no pushover, repays every grudge, and is decisive and ruthless]
Wang Chen spent four years in a cultivation world before finally activating his System, obtaining a Pure Yang Sacred Body, and embarking on the path of cultivation.
At the disciple-choosing ceremony, Shen Qingli inexplicably took him as her disciple. Little did they know that this single act would reshuffle the balance of power across the entire cultivation world.
A year later, the Demon Emperor went back on his word and tried to make Shen Qingli his cultivation cauldron.
Just as Shen Qingli was losing all hope, her disciple Wang Chen came to save her.
Standing at the gates of the Demon Emperor's palace, he shouted, “Whoever dares lay a hand on my master, I'll wipe out their entire clan!”
“Rebellious disciple, how dare you take liberties with me!”
“Apprentice, we're master and disciple... We can't do this.”
“Chen'er, you're all I have now. You have to treat me well.”
“Husband, is this really cultivation?”
The cultivators of the world watched as their Dao hearts shattered on the spot. Was this really the peerless immortal ranked first on the beauty list, the one who was aloof and free of desire, devoted to cultivation?
Everyone cried, “Fairy Shen, just say you were forced into it!”
Later on...
“The Heavenly Dao forbids cultivators from becoming saints? Simple. I'll kill the Heavenly Dao and take its place. Problem solved.”
(The male lead needs time to grow stronger early on, but he won't be kept down. The fun really kicks off later.)
The only shortcoming may be that the plot is relatively simple, but these are not important. The author clearly knows what we readers want to see, what we readers like to see, and then writes the details in place. It is true that the one who wins the hearts of the people wins the world [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]
It's not bad. The writing can be practiced more. The plot is common and you can guess the subsequent development. However, the author does understand what the readers are looking for. Not bad, keep up the good work 😘
After all, I am a new writer. I hope my writing will improve in the future.
He is worthy of being a master of flushing. Now I seriously suspect that what you wrote is Xiaohuangwen
The treasure book 😏 fits me very well x p😏 Great support to the author [I learned it]
It's beautiful, especially among the readers [smile][smile]
Pay attention to the comments at the end of Chapter 73 [laughing]
Yes, it must be five stars
The standard master who is cold on the outside and cool on the inside 🥺 It's a pity that I came at a bad time
It's very sweet and pretty. I don't see anything toxic at all.