Help, I Became the Uncle of Twenty Primarchs

Compared with the unreliable yellow-skinned dad, of course my uncle is more reliable. I hope that the originally rare family background will bring new hope to Warhammer.

Some chapters have a strong AI flavor, but I have to say that the author's post-processing details are very good, the pseudo-human feeling is almost invisible, and the plot is very delicate. Among similar books with an AI feel, this one is considered top-notch. The logic is clear and it doesn't jump around. It has a good look and feel. I give it a five-star rating and hope the author will continue to work hard.

I have used AI, but it is still an AI that has not been trained. [Hold face][Hold face] While I was watching, I kept scrolling down, but it didn't affect the viewing [laughing and crying]

Let me make a suggestion. According to the setting, among the seven evil god-level powerhouses in the 40k universe, the Four Gods and Huang Pizi are divided into 18 legions. Since the second one corresponds to the Great Devourer's Hive Will, the eleventh one should correspond to the second brother Ga Mao's Sincerity and Spirit (flesh and flesh mutation is only the primary manifestation of ability, the next step is to find black technology), after all The Yellow Skins have all stolen the power of the Four Gods. There is no reason not to have thoughts about these two strongest races in this game. The influence of Tyranids and Greenskins will naturally cause them to be incompatible with other legions. The disappearance of these two can be explained by the fact that like the "Dragonborn" and other humans in the original game after the unification of Terra, they went to an extragalactic galaxy to play with the stars.

Because Ersad has solved the happy HE ending, no one will rebel, so we decided to introduce apocryphal threads to fight against the canon. It's so right. This is what I want to see! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

A good fanfic. I have tasted so many Warhammer fanfics. This one is considered good. There are not too many gods. The author is also very honest, especially the main characters such as the original body. The writing is very vivid, and there are also great innovations. It makes up for the regrets and perfectly combines the meaning of the fanfic. It is not sloppy at all.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's rare for an emperor to have some affectionate feelings. No, why did you get another imperial princess? It looked pretty good at first, why did you change it like this? [Cry][cry]

It's a very calm narration that I haven't seen in a long time. The writing is very good and there are no loopholes in the plot. But to clarify, the protagonist only laid a good emotional foundation in the early stage and didn't use it. The later part is good😈

Although it seems to be a calm trend now, I was able to write about the grand world view of Warhammer before. The author feels that he has a good foundation. It's great. Come on, keep working! It's best to give me ten pictures a day, Chapter 20 [blowing kisses]

The plot is pretty good, but the description of the environment could be a little less detailed? Sometimes I feel very tired while watching [face covering]

Generally speaking, Yunzhui is very friendly to me. Many things are explained very clearly. Apart from the stiff feeling that the author uses AI for assistance throughout the novel, it is okay. The new chapter I saw recently turned a primal into a female. I felt a little weird here.

There will be a feeling of AI in the early stage, but this is the first time the author has no experience in writing articles, so I am here to help. It will be fine in the later stage! You can take a look! [Love] Most of the regrets have been made up, and it fits the introduction. The center is roughly on the heart-warming relationship with the original body. I like this kind of thing better. Come on, author, keep updating~

Let the sea of ​​stars boil! ! ! ! Let the galaxy burn! ! ! ! Fill the galaxy with pain! ! ! Let the universe turn into nothingness! ! ! Let every planet be filled with war! ! ! Let every corner be filled with blood! ! ! ! The war will not stop until there is only pain in the entire galaxy! ! ! [Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry]

This is so good. I came here just to see the ending where everyone is loyal to make up for the regret😊

Not bad, good to watch, worth watching as a second-generation Warhammer movie

Some chapters have a strong AI flavor, but later on when the author is not busy it's fine. The biggest problem with the plot of this novel so far is that transportation is too convenient. The inconvenience of transportation only exists in the setting. The transportation shown in the plot is very convenient. Oops, the plot these days has been so boring. It's not that it's a big deal, or that there's anything wrong with the plot. It's just... So boring [face covering] You have to work harder from now on and bring your novel level back up [face covering]

It feels much better than some of the current Warhammer fan fiction.

I don't know what to say, it just looks good.

Correct the previous mistakes and it will look much better.

So far, it is very comfortable to read, there are no surprises, and each chapter is full of content. I look forward to subsequent updates!

Fast forward to 103 when to get married

Very beautiful and interesting

I don't care about anything else. This author actually wrote the sex-changing Angron that I've always wanted to see. Oh, author, we love you. I want to see Angron become a mother.

This is what I want to see!

It looks ok so far. Let's give it a 5-star rating first.

The book is good, but there are some areas that need improvement. Seriously, can't we have some family fun? [Face covering]

It's still good now. Fulgen ascended the devil's writing is still good, but the sense of oppression of the four gods and the twisted feeling of being an evil god is still a bit weak.

After reading the introduction, I thought I wanted to change it to Apocrypha, but it turned out that my parents are both alive and the original body is also here, which makes me very happy. [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

There are a few flaws, but overall it's good.

The rest is really good to be honest, but... Angron turning into a girl... Is not acceptable