Hunting Live Room: Start Hunting Bigfoot

So far, the plot is okay, and the level of detail is sufficient. However, there are occasional discrepancies. For example, when discussing the plan with Danmu in Chapter 28, he accidentally mentioned the kill value. Of course, the author did not handle this well. It has little impact on the perception, so just ignore it. Also The only thing is that the author will occasionally say one thing repeatedly, such as the Magnum pistol is out of bullets. Maybe after a few chapters, he will take it out and say it again. I hope the author will pay attention to this aspect. Others are okay, and the plot has a strong sense of immersion. How can I say it? The main plot is very good when written, but the transitional plot is not detailed enough, and the excessive plot is a bit watery. Overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and it is worth watching. Of course, when I posted this comment, I just read Chapter 30. If there are problems with the subsequent plots or good writing, I will review them again. By the way, there is another problem. I ran out of Magnum bullets on the first night. The bullets were actually in the car instead of being carried with me. After you buy the equipment, there should be a portable pocket no matter where you go. Then the bullets will be placed in the backpack later. , And then lost it together with the backpack. This is not a big poisonous point. If you want this kind of plot next time, just put less bullets or put them in a portable pocket, and then get scraped off by the Bigfoot claws during the fight instead of forcibly losing it like this. To be honest, it quite affected the perception. Then I looked at the other comments in the comment area, and a large part of them were also talking about this area. I hope the author will pay attention next time. This comment is for chapters 0-60. The following is what I want to say when revising my book review for the first time. I found several problems. The first is that the length is too short. There are 4 creatures in 156 pictures. Counting daily life and transitional chapters, the average number of pictures for each creature is only 30. It feels like the foreshadowing also has the feeling of being like a castle in the air at times. Secondly, tone it down a bit later. As for the comments in the live broadcast, some of them are very weird when written, and they are explained in the third person. It is very dramatic, which is equivalent to others fighting for life and death here. Then suddenly a few words from people in the live broadcast appear, which creates a bad atmosphere. Moreover, the words spoken in the live broadcast sometimes feel very brainless. OK, that's all for now. I will post more if there are any questions in the future. This comment is for chapters 60-160.

I've long wanted to read articles about live broadcasts and hunting, with readable writing and non-toxic barrages. Unfortunately, there are still a few of them, and I won't be able to read them for a long time. But the AI smell is quite strong

I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in their work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, and the trees are covered with all directions. The eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps. He is heroic and majestic. He is in a commanding position. He is benevolent and moral. He is charming and suave. He is selfless. He looks like Pan An. He is more talented than Song Yu. A pear tree weighs more than a begonia. , You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a beautiful heart, and you have a lot of good things. , A man of lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the cloud, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, one of a kind, a branch of Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

Yes, the rhythm of the plot is quite good, and the tension is very good. If you are interested, you can read it. Don't read too many books [face covering] too many books have been read to death.

The subject matter is very suitable to my taste, but there are some small mistakes, but it can also be seen that it is made by hand, that is, the protagonist is constantly genetically enhanced or something, which feels a bit uncomfortable. Compared with these, I prefer thrilling sneak attack fights, rather than the various superpowers that form a crushing style in the later stage.

To be honest, Bigfoot gave me a really amazing feeling at first, but then the taste changed. Well, it was different from what I expected at the beginning. I have a little suggestion. The author can start a new book without a system, and just write a story about the growth of a legendary hunter. I think it will definitely be a big hit.

So far it's still very interesting (I've read more than 80 chapters so far). Personally, I feel that the writing technique is a bit like a narrative. The fighting is not particularly exaggerated but gives me a sense of urgency. The preparation stage and the travel stage are generally calm and warm. If I can keep it up, 8 points is not a problem, and 9 points can be rushed.

To be honest, I have never come across novels with this theme before, because I am personally quite scared and timid, so to speak. When I read this, I really felt like I was there. I would feel my heart beat faster because of the mistakes of the protagonist or the dangers I encountered. It was quite exciting. The plot was really immersive and in line with reality. I can say that overall it is a very good book. I hope the author will be faster. It is not enough to read.

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This is the cool story I want to read. A mortal battle of wits and courage with Bigfoot (rather than my Daji 231 tricks) [laughs]

The author has his own characteristics in writing books. He uses a lot of environmental descriptions and uses them quite skillfully, which is worthy of praise. There are very few high-quality and detailed words in all the books I have read, which can make you immerse yourself in it well. I always feel that this feeling has been felt somewhere, like when I watched Daogui. The plot is intertwined and the protagonist has a very high IQ. It is completely consistent with or relatively close to reality. I don't understand it very well. I only know that these good books should be written with high scores in Tomato. It's a bit overkill. The author continues to work hard and it's good to see

It would be unreasonable for this book not to be popular. The description is delicate, the writing is excellent, and the emotions are real. I gave it five stars because the highest possible number is five stars. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel on Tomatoes. I hope the author can persevere, come on👏

It's very good, it's like I've struck gold in history. I've just finished reading 5 chapters, and I'm already much better than those people who are looking for the Loch Ness Monster and the wild men in Shennongjia [The God of Bird Eaters] [The God of Bird Eaters] [The God of Bird Eaters] [The Grass Has Been Planted]

This is the first time I have seen this kind of documentary writing. The subject matter is very novel. When I watched it, I felt like it was chilly around me and I had a strong sense of immersion. It's a pity that it's not easy to get out of the circle, and the data will inevitably be poor. However, I still hope that the author can persevere and earn to become a leader in this genre.

I feel that this book is acceptable and worth recommending. I am sure it is a good book. [Note][Laughing] Anyone who is interested can come and see it. [Like] [Blow kiss] There is one more thing, that is, come on! Great author! ! !

Although I have only read more than 20 chapters, the novel is very immersive and the subject matter is also very novel. It can be classified as a small masterpiece [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Big boost for the author There are still few people rating it.

A few years later, when people mentioned this legend again, people commented on him like this, the only dawn of horror stories, the ultimate nightmare among monsters, that is, the legendary killer

It is extremely beautiful, and that is not limited to the fact that there are many uma mysterious creatures appearing in it. It is extremely beautiful, and that is not limited to this. There are also many uma mysterious creatures appearing in it. I hope the author will continue to follow it, and I hope the author will update more [laughs] [smile] [grievance] ][grievance][almost crying][almost crying][almost crying][laughing and crying][almost crying][sent heart][laughing][smile][smile][smile][admiration][admiration][admiration][admiration][admiration][admiration][what][admiration][admiration]

Although there are some problems caused by AI polishing, the author is already here, the plot is good, and I look forward to the follow-up plot [Thoughts] [Sneaky smile]

Now that I see it, it feels okay

Needless to say, this is the best for me

Okay, okay, I like this theme

It's really good, just for me, it's just to my liking

The writing is quite good, but I have a question about Chapter 31 or Chapter 32. I forgot. Anyway, there is a line that says the barrage lowers its sound. I don't quite understand that the barrage has a sound? There is a bit of AI in the back. I didn't write the live broadcast in the front, but directly wrote the barrage in the back.

This book is generally good so far. I hope that the follow-up work can bring us a good sense. Please pay attention to your health and work hard [Like]

It's awesome. I've been wanting to find a hunter-themed book like this for a long time. The fairy tale hunter's prison book didn't quite suit my taste. This one is perfect.

The author must work hard and update it. This book is really well written.

A very good hunter novel

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such pure writing in a long time.

It looks very good now, I hope you can continue to do so😁😁 The author has a suggestion for you. If you feel that your speed is too fast now, you won't have to write anymore. You can slow down a little. The author can listen. It's okay if you don't listen. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]