KO One: From the Start, I Pulled a Heavenly Demon Lord

I think it's pretty good. Except for the beginning, which is a bit frustrating, the writing at the end is quite good. He also wrote some new jokes about those in the Ultimate Series. I hope and look forward to finishing that break as soon as possible.

Sometimes there is really the ultimate nonsensical and funny style. Although it is still invincible, it is invincible in a funny style without the feeling of forced pretentiousness.

For the time being, I found it okay, with some comedy, some combat details, and emotional scenes that were not obtrusive. Most of them were average to above average, and I didn't see any bad points. Maybe I listened to the advice and skipped the first three chapters. The comment section said that other people's novels have three golden chapters, and this should be the three most poisonous chapters. Oh, it's still a little bit toxic, that is, some conversational idioms or homophones don't make sense.

Well written, keep going, keep writing.

The plot of this ultimate series is very complete and it is the best book I have ever read.

I have read many fan fictions of the Ultimate series, and this one is the best and most interesting.

I'm looking forward to the protagonist arriving in Silver Time. After all, one of the twins from the last curse is still there. I'm curious about what will happen.

I give you five-star praise. Can you change Dongting to Donghan?

It's like a magic pill, and the content written inside is really quite interesting [Adore][Adore]

Ideas Clear and good looking