HP: I Can't Resist

Why. But what I am most looking forward to is the daily life of the heroine studying at Hogwarts, but there is very little, after all... Forget it, it would be better if the author gave more ink to the heroine. As the heroine, I think the heroine's portrayal... Is a bit weak (not that she is weak, but the heroine's role is not strong enough). There's nothing surprising about it, but... When I read it earlier, I felt that the heroine's transition into school was too shallow. Because she hated her dad very much, and even bs came later. But! The writing here is not strong enough, (this cp book is about generating electricity for love, but this... Still...) A lot of the heroine's experiences have been omitted in order to transition to the child age and become a professor (cp line). Many of them are even said by others, what the heroine has done, what controversies the heroine has, and what famous things the heroine has done. I'm not the female protagonist, but I am the protagonist.

It is rare to see fan fiction that has its own thoughts and rich characters. I've read too many articles on Tomato that are stereotyped, mindless and cool, and the protagonist still acts as a nanny for me no matter how strong she is. When I came across this book, my eyes lit up. The heroine is so lifelike, from being slightly innocent as a child to her personal charm when she matures, it really feels like watching a child grow into a reliable adult. The Sri Lankan teaching is also very lively, but there is no OOC. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. You must continue writing, and I am waiting to be fed.

One word, ram👍. This is the novel that I have read that is most in line with the character of the original Snape. The author is really good at grasping the Snape's venomous tongue and writing well. The heroine is very human, and the interactions in it are also very humorous. She says funny things in a serious manner. The heroine is really a very normal person. There are very few heroines with normal personalities in the Snape fan fiction. She is not extreme in handling things. I really like the heroine. She is a weed-type heroine who will fall in love with everyone who reads it. She is tough, tenacious and brave. The emotional line is also quite natural, just like the last sentence of the author's introduction, it's just that you happened to appear in my life. It's exactly the same. In some of the previous scenes where the behavior was a little more ambiguous, the male and female protagonists didn't have any charming feelings in their hearts. It was super enjoyable to read. The few scenes where the male and female protagonists are equal are only a little bit different. The author must not give up. I will keep chasing after this book. I hope I will continue to write Sijiao fanfics. Wow, your writing is so awesome. I love you so much💋[Blow kiss]

Teacher, this is a fairy tale. It's beautiful. The writing is sophisticated and not a noob. The logic is fluent and the three views are correct. I saw an upright and charming Hufflepuff. God knows how difficult it is to meet the Hufflepuff heroine in Tomato and have such fighting ability.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! Avella is really cool and awesome [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] The interaction between Sijiao and Sri Lanka is so good [love] [love] I think the two of them are two-way redemptions. Professor Si helped Avella in the first grade and everything in the school later, and Avella also brought light to Professor Si when he just lost Lily (someone was even worse than him [face covering]) P. S. I finally saw a copy of Gryffindor in third grade! ! ! I always felt that the trio was too reckless and even attacked the professor. Avella really pleased me [laughing] Evelyn Evelyn Evelyn! ! ! ! ! ! I typed my baby girl's name wrong! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author, why did you still like it? [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Damn it, you can't modify the comment [crazy]

To be honest, I am quite harsh on HP fanfics. The writing is particularly bad and I just leave. But this one fully describes the charm and characteristics of each person. I can deeply feel why S. S likes the heroine. Why the heroine likes S. S. It includes other people's personalities and character arcs. It is very good. It is really a rare article. Among HP fanfics (except for the fact that I destroyed the original plot in the big structure and used goldfinger), I followed the original plot and the original characters and slowly and delicately portrayed them. It ranks in the top three for me. Really.

! ! ! Let me express my feelings first, it's so beautiful! Read 130 chapters in one go. The character creation in this book is simply the best among all the HPs I have read. The portrayal of Dumbledore, McGonagall, Snape, Black, and Lupin is very full, and it is not a wholehearted favor or belittlement. And the heroine is really attractive, really, she has a unique charm. When she faced the death of her father, when she and Teacher Si met in the bar before she started teaching, and when she carried out unique growth education for the girls, I really liked these, (including Qingjie who is now bringing 6 little ones to save Black, but the author hasn't finished updating it yet! Update it soon!) There are also descriptions of the Herbal Medicine Professor and the Charms Professor. Although there are not many, they are really exciting and the characters are very three-dimensional. The rhythm of the storyline is great. I have read more than 30 HP fanfics at least. In my impression, there is no image conflict with the heroine in this one (I mean: the heroine's image is super unique and charming). Finally, I want to talk about the relationship between Sri Lankan teacher and the heroine. It is really so touching. There are no deliberate contacts, everything is a natural feeling, which is great. Sri Lanka's teachings during the ambiguous period are so bewitching! !

Oh my god, it's a good-looking, high-quality article. It made me cry and laugh at the same time. The Sijiao in the article is exactly what I thought it was. The heroine's character is super cute and her force value is high. It's still being serialized. In the future, I beg the author to stop the knife and torture. I beg [crying]

It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality HP article. The author's portrayal of the professor is very rare and there is no condescending pity. The relationship between the heroine and the professor is natural, and it is the kind of equal relationship that can support each other. This is the best HP article I have read this year!

It's good-looking, the emotional progression is steady and smooth, not abrupt, the teachings are not stereotyped and cold-faced, and there are no stereotypes about the teachings. The common surprises have not been discovered so far. The heroine is undoubtedly strong, and her growth is also full of twists and turns. These motivations have made her a feminist. Her education is student-oriented and she pays attention to students... Forget it, it is very good-looking!

Boss... I feel so happy🥹🥹🥹 An indigenous heroine, no golden fingers, no "precognition" plot, living in the HP world, and she was just an ordinary girl who was domestically abused by her father at the beginning and couldn't even use a magic shower. She didn't accept her fate. She didn't accept her fate when she couldn't understand the textbooks. She didn't accept her fate when she was cheated by her father's "blood debt". She didn't accept her fate when she became an Auror and was insulted and slandered with all kinds of words. She is honest - she will say "I want money" when faced with Voldemort's question, and she will calmly reply "because I want to step on you to the podium" when faced with Lupine's "Why did Snape think of improving the werewolf potion". She is tenacious, courteous, and very purposeful. She never loses her direction or becomes too obsessed with her negative emotions. And when such a person appears next to Snape, it is not for the purpose of "redeeming" him. The existence of such a person will make Snape feel that he should not be immersed in self-pity and self-sorrow. She is not so much light as a plant, a towering tree - you see her, she is standing there, doing nothing, but her mere presence makes people feel a kind of power. Just like Snape saw her as a prefect taking care of a Hufflepuff girl who was staying at school on Halloween, she used her own way to protect the people she cared about.

I really like this book because it makes me feel that the author really loves the characters he writes, and does not just create some flat and stereotyped characters. Some people may think that the heroine was too miserable when she was a child, but only in this way can she grow and excel. This is completely consistent with Si's experience. It is because they have struggled in the dark that they can understand each other. And Si is also a flesh-and-blood existence in this book. He is not a cold and gloomy character with only guilt in his heart. He really has the sense of a living person in the original work. This kind of living feeling is not OOC at all. I understand that Si has a very subtle initiative towards the people he cares about. You will see that the relationship between the two people develops slowly. You feel that it is only a matter of time and inevitable that two people will fall in love with each other. It really fits the name of this book. It is completely irresistible to fall in love with each other! ! ! After reading this, I only have one awesome idea. I really feel that the author has created a parallel universe, and in this universe, Evelyn and Snape have an intersection... [Crying]

Super pretty! ! ! This is my first time to read Sri Lanka's work. I read it all night long. It's not enough.—— It feels like the heroine has realized her feelings a little now, she seems to be the type who can hit the ball straight! Oh, I'm so looking forward to it. Author, don't be tired, but don't rest either [laughs]

It's so beautiful, I finished it in one go! Roman has been growing up and living very hard. He is the little sun🔆. The rice is really delicious. I want to eat it🤤 Even though he encountered darkness in his childhood, he still maintains his good moral character, is brave and firm, is really beautiful, sassy, super handsome, and extremely smart [get it] (clear thinking) Sijiao feels full of life when he meets Roman (=^▽^=) The description of dressing Mandrake in winter is so cute. It feels like the magical world comes alive (oh, I can't describe it). Anyway, I can imagine the scene as I read it🥰 Big cheers for the author! 😘

It's so beautiful! The heroine's unique way of doing things is so attractive! He is extremely charming and considerate of the overall situation. He is a professional Auror and a stern yet interesting professor. Some scenes are so interestingly written that you can't help but smile. Please type more when you have nothing to do! Love to watch👀

It's good-looking~ Although there are no comments from readers, it is unexpectedly good-looking. Come on, the author. [Blow a kiss] The characters are not described in stereotypes. You can vaguely recognize his character and personality. The long-term contact with Snape is not a plot of suddenly jumping out of the cracks of the stone to offend, then inexplicably tolerating, then stabbing each other, and finally making up with both eyes. It still looks good. Don't be tired, author. Just relax while typing when you have time.

It seems like my first book review. Marvelous. First of all, the male protagonist: he does not follow stereotypes such as splendens and little troll. Instead of flattening Snape into a single image of poisonous tongue and regret, the author made Snape's character more full-bodied based on the original work. He can laugh and has many small expressions... Sometimes you will really be amused by his interaction with the heroine. Secondly, the heroine: She has a very charming personality, whether it is the heroine's growth line, her frank and loyal character, or the heroine's persuasion to the girls, and her caring attention to everyone. Moreover, the heroine is not a traditional "perfect good person". She will perform black magic on her dead father. She may not like Harry Potter's recklessness but still admires his courage. She didn't favor everything about Snape, but she would still point out his little flaws. The heroine is so powerful that she is not overwhelmed by Snape's brilliance. Instead, they work side by side, and the two achieve each other's success. Especially the heroine completely rewrites the fate of the werewolf. I was really moved after reading this section. It was the first time I saw a complete rewrite. And it's also the first time I've seen a female protagonist become an Auror. I think... If the heroine really existed, Snape would really fall in love with her. The two of them are a perfect match, so perfect. After reading the article, no one can fall in love with the heroine without abide by their obligations... Madam, please go ahead, madam, please update soon! ! (Ps: Everyone in Harry Potter, I guarantee you are angels!) It's tied again, please, madam, don't give up, don't stop updating, don't run away [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] If someone scolds you, I will fight them. Os: Boss, boss, can you write a movie-going extra? You can just write the original novel or a movie version... I really like your portrayal of Snape and other characters. Let the current Potters and the others see Snape in the original book, let them feel guilt and love and hate intertwined, and let Harry personally praise Snape: You may be the bravest person I have ever seen.

I have read many ss male protagonist fanfics. Each author has his own ideas about the emotional lines. I also love to take a look at each one. As an adult who rarely receives kindness, it is actually quite difficult for SS to develop romantic feelings. How can someone who has never been loved love someone else? I have seen SS who were moved by the gentle and tolerant heroine, and SS who were stunned by the love that was like a home invasion. They were all very reasonable and impressive. But Evelyn is so eye-catching. Compared with being "impressed", the SS in this article is more like being "attracted". He was extremely reluctant to face the fact that he was attracted at first, but now he has become irresistible to himself, and he probably has no choice... Author, you have been away from me for ten days. Do you know how I have spent these ten days? I want to watch updates during the day, cry at night, and dream...

The teacher's writing style is very delicate. The heroine is also well written. The staff's writing is great. Teacher, I have another aspect of describing Sri Lankan education. Finally, it is no longer the popular template of bitterness, hatred and hatred. Come on, teacher! I will always support you

Severus in this fanfic did not open or close his mouth to taunt others, he could communicate with others normally, and he did not use stereotypical words like "splenden" or "troll" on his lips. It is really rare to find this kind of book. The heroine is also well portrayed, and the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not abrupt. The plot is very attractive [Like] Someone finally stood up for Severus in many things.

It's beautiful. The heroine has her own pursuits and true character. She is strong, cute, righteous, sassy, ​​courageous, smart, calm, generous and... Perfect! I like it so much [KISS] Sijiao's character design is also very charming, the little expressions and other details are very vivid, and he is very flirtatious when he realizes his feelings, without any OOC.

It's really beautiful! This is one of the few HP fanfics that I can continue to read. I hope you can continue to update it and not be affected by bad words. Your writing is really good! ! ! Come on! ! ! Looking forward to updates [love]

To be honest, I haven't read a book with Professor Snape as the male protagonist in HP for a long time. I always felt that the emotional line was weird and I didn't have the desire to read it. But this book is different. The more I read it, the more I wanted to read it. The interaction between the heroine and Snape is very natural and makes people feel that it should be like this. Just like the title of the book, this book makes me irresistible and can't put it down.

Nice! The character creation is very three-dimensional, and I would like to say that if you are in a shortage of HP fan books, you can read this one. Si Jiao is very cute. I really look forward to the follow-up plot. I hope it can fill up the regrets of Si Jiao in the original work. Come on, author!

It's unexpectedly good-looking. The author's Severus is very lively, cute and venomous (what am I talking about), very Snape. Eveline is not a flat heroine, she has her own charm. The young couple is a perfect match! ! The writing is also very good and the plot is very smooth. I read it in one sitting and said it was too little and not enough. Like it very much.

This book is really in line with my imagination of long-term love in shared adversity. I think that only pain and sorrow can make a person like Si Jiao realize what he cares about and be willing to show his tenderness for Evelyn. Years of Occlumency forced him to keep his emotions bottled up in his heart, and the weakness after torture made the feelings come to his mind. The emotional line is neither urgent nor slow, and the heroine is resolute and humorous. Highly recommended.

It's very interesting to watch, the writing is good, the character setting is stable, the plot development is reasonable, and the connection with the original plot is not abrupt. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are developed step by step and have a process. They are not written for the purpose of falling in love. The heroine is a character created with great care. Si Jiao was treated with gentleness.

It's so beautiful, the characters are not stereotyped, and there is no extreme criticism of other people just because the male protagonist is Snape. The female protagonist is strong and honest, and she is also very cute because of her love for food. I can't help but get along with the two of them. The female protagonist is also very mature. This is the charm given to her by the author. I like it very much. I am very happy that I can read this article. The only uncomfortable thing is that I went to bed too early and had to wait for the update the next day, which made me feel itchy [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

First of all, the setting is very delicious. There is currently no meal replacement in 🍅. Secondly, the plots are very reasonable and not as cookie-cutter as some other HP articles. The writing style is also light and realistic. The relationship between Evelyn and Zucchini didn't get close all of a sudden. It's not that " "Love at first sight" or how you feel your heart flutter after meeting you for the first time. The relationship between the two people in this article is of the kind that is gradual and slow, with the feeling that it comes naturally after being together for a long time. Moreover, the character design is also good. Evelyn is a strong, brave, loyal and kind-hearted badger! Let's talk about some descriptions of predators in the article. This article only states the facts or reacts based on the characters' personalities. It does not say that they hate each other just because they are colleagues (Eveline doesn't know about the conflict between Zucchini and predators). Evelyn's behavior is based on her own character. I think it is written correctly. Objectively speaking, Evelyn has no conflicts with those people, so communication and other things are normal. Later, those people violently It's normal for Evelyn to say and do something to fight back after revealing her own badness. Just because Evelyn didn't kick the predator in this article doesn't mean it's not well written. Evelyn is herself first, and she has her own character and code of conduct. Some readers may be dissatisfied with Evelyn's behavior because they like Sri Lanka and hate predators (actually I also hate predators). However, Evelyn is not an extension of the reader's will, she is free. And I am dissatisfied with the predators, but in fact these plot descriptions are unavoidable. When I read it, I felt angry, which means that the author wrote it very well, which means that it is very consistent with the image of the predators. At this time, it is enough to curse in the comments. This can show that the author understands these characters. Finally, don't scold the cook, the author wrote it very well!

The most lively and lovely Sri Lankan teaching, the wording is completely different from the bad "old professor" and "splendens" used in the street. Anyway, it's cute and natural, and the least OOC.