Overturned at the Start? I Relied on the Popularity of My Drama to Reach the Top.

The writing is very good, the plot is well arranged, the excitement is spot on, and the writing style is also good. A pure-blood wizard novel. It is still in the early stages, and we have reached a small breaking point, which will test the author's skills later. As a bookworm who has been on multiple platforms for more than 10 years, this review After the protagonist's sister appeared on the scene, the solid foundation laid by this book was completely destroyed. This role was completely added temporarily. Her power made the protagonist look like a clown. After a long time, she was still a caged bird.

It's a good read, with an excellent world view and good writing. I haven't found such a good-looking novel in a long time! ! The shortcoming is that the introduction and cover are not done well, and it doesn't feel attractive at all. If I hadn't come here to dig for gold, I wouldn't have clicked in to see it! ! No, no, that's the right name. This title completely fails to express the excellent setting and other strengths of this book. Instead, it behaves like a low-quality novel

No problem, Shennong has already tried it. The character of the Liangcao-level protagonist reminds me of Victor in "The Evil God", but it is more humane and the male and female protagonists are easy to relate to. The appearance of the male protagonist's sister was quite unexpected at first, but later I thought it was pretty good. After reading it patiently, I felt that it was top-notch. Now as long as the subsequent plot is not too boring, it will be perfect. Victor's book was a bit boring in the later stages. In short, it is very important to remember to do this when changing the sugar distribution! ! ! ! !

Very good, quite novel wizard novel, I look forward to seeing Vivian severely punish the protagonist [angry]

It's delicious😋, yes, but can the author develop the emotional line of the male and female protagonists more? I always feel that the emotional line is advancing too slowly now. I want to eat sweets. Also, I can stab the male protagonist [laughing evilly] to let the female protagonist know, hahaha [laughing evilly], I can't help but think about it. I want to see the reaction of the male protagonist being stabbed by the female protagonist [Like] [Like] [Like], and there can be more barrage during the movie. As long as it does not affect the progress of the plot, it is not a masterpiece. Can the barrage be less human-machine? It feels like a human-machine. Finally, the author, please give it a big boost! [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love]

So far, the world view construction and plot are very good. I am still curious whether it is a single female protagonist or a harem story. The switching of perspectives is not abrupt. The perspective ratio of the two is probably 55 or 64. However, it is worth mentioning that the system inside is basically a tool for providing spell equipment, so don't worry, too many barrages will affect the look and feel. Also, at the moment, it's like the invincible flow. I think there is currently no opponent at the same level, and the strength is very high. But I don't know what it will be like in the later stage. In short, I love watching Pure Love, which is a bit invincible. Both of them have improved their IQs.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋

It's better than I thought. It's not a simple exposure article. The two writing methods of occupying a dominant position and increasing friendship give a sense of refreshment. Moreover, this 1V1 mode makes the plot more compact. The camera always only rotates between the two of them. The early impression is very good. Come on.

①The interaction between the male and female protagonists and the subsequent plot are attractive to me; but in the original work, Cavendish was connected by the minions into something (forgot), but later it was added that the background was very big, and his sister was very powerful (although she seemed to be a demon or something, so she didn't care about him that much), but it just felt like such a person was directly refined, which is very strange. I'm looking forward to the subsequent fake death plot. ②The worldview is not fully developed yet. It looks like the world of immortality. The big world is set in the middle ages, the middle world is set in the small world, and the small world is set in the small world. I don't know if the combat power will be compromised later. ③I feel like Cavendish's sister is a bit difficult to evaluate. ④The author interacts with the readers. If there are any questions, there is a high probability that they will receive timely feedback after @. It would be nice to send an emoticon from time to time ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧. ⑤The update time is a bit shady (stuck before midnight, have you seen it?) [Face covering] [face covering] [face covering] However, considering that the author is not a full-timer, the results of this book are not very good, which is understandable (why do you feel that I am superior) ⑥ Overall, I personally think it's pretty good. Those who are interested in this subject can take a look. ⑦After reading other comments, I really feel that the cover and the title of the book would be better if they were beautified.

Tsundere is very interesting to write. The heroine is 2 points arrogant and 8 points tsundere, and the male protagonist is 7 points arrogant and 3 points coquettish. There's nothing poisonous about it, the author's writing is excellent, and the plot is quite interesting. The author will update soon, I want to see how desperate Cavendish is under Vivian's gravity🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤.

It's very interesting. It seems to be an excellent novel on Tomato. There are no big problems in terms of character portrayal, plot development, or writing style. I hope the author can keep it up (*^o^*)

It can be given to me. There are currently no poisonous points. The number and rhythm of the barrages are also controlled appropriately. What I am saying is that it is not limited to a single female protagonist. There is no problem in including one more.

The writing is good, not bad. Although there is nothing too outstanding, there is basically no poisonous point. It is watchable. Although the routine is a bit old, the look and feel of the wizarding world is not bad.

It's good to say, I'm looking forward to seeing Vivian's daughter-centric plot, it will definitely be very delicious っ•̀.̫•́)っ Xiu~

Overall, it's good. For me, the point of deducting points is the sudden introduction of his sister in the plot. The key is that an alien void creature forcibly raises the combat power setting. It introduces an invincible combat power all of a sudden, which makes people feel uncomfortable. For me, it's quite a big deal. I originally liked it.

The male protagonist is connected to the "popularity system", his IQ is online, and the villain is not too brainless; the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also quite interesting. Spells, planes, and causal tampering settings are intertwined. The later stage of the system is more tool-oriented, but this is a common problem with this type of article and is understandable. Summary: This book is of high quality on Tomato and is worth reading.

Not bad, not bad. It can be seen that the author wanted to write something. Whether it is the development of the world view or the handling of several events, it can be seen that the story has a skeleton. This alone beats at least 60% of the western fantasy stories on Tomatoes. The proportion of the male and female protagonists is well controlled. It does not let the female protagonist's perspective take over the main role, but also gives a lot of roles to the female protagonist, and does not reduce the female protagonist to a vase. This is really great. Bonus points, this aspect alone can be said to be 20% better than Tomato's western fantasy works. The only drawback is that there is a little bit of foreshadowing for the appearance of the protagonist's sister, the all-powerful devil. There is only one scene in the early stage to give the protagonist a farewell gift. After the appearance, he starts to control the protagonist here and there, but it is not bad. After all, many things have not yet begun to unfold, and there is still a lot of space that can be filled. All in all, the book is very good, go for the author!

This paragraph is really interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are also in place!

╭◜◝ ͡ ◜ ͡ ╮ (Hmm...) ╰◟◞ ͜ ╭◜◝ ͡ ◜◝ ͡ ◝ ͡ ╮ (Such an awesome performance) I also want to use love...)  ╰◟◞ ͜ ◟◞ ͜ ◟◞ ╯ __ ᐝ (TT) Oค้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้O しーＪ Shocking and delicious

The plot of this book is really good. Whether it is the character of the heroine or the plot of the story, I feel that the expressiveness is quite good. Except for some characters that are slightly imperfect, I think others are quite excellent.

Dejin, I can give you a lot here😋. It's right to have less descriptions in the series, which avoids the problem of plot duplication. I haven't read this kind of article since the fourth chapter of Tiandao Si Ming Bao 4 at the starting point. The combat power here is not overwhelming, the development is refreshing, and the description is strong. The current development is still very interesting, and the updates are stable. There are about two chapters every day at noon, and it is rated as fairy grass😋

I must write it down. Author, I have been reading books for so long, which has led to the longest book shortage period in history. Only you and a few other books have become my light. Just think of it as for Tiga, and keep writing this book, okay? Ultraman Dyna who loves pudding😀

It's quite novel here on Tomato. It's a genre that became popular a few years ago. The writing is pretty good, too.

How shameless, you must keep writing.

It's okay. In other novels of this type, the heroine turns into a vase dependent on the male protagonist. So far in this book, the heroine still has her own highlights. I hope that the heroine will not become a vase in the future. It's a pity that the update is too slow [blowing kiss]

All in all, all in all, I said it plainly, I said it in vain, the situation is like this, but the specific situation depends on the situation. The key to this problem is to find the key issue. In short, it is very beautiful.

There is no doubt that it is shockingly delicious and fragrant on the tongue and teeth. It's so good-looking, but it's so damning that it's not good enough at all [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The male and female protagonists have online IQs, the plot is reasonable, the author's writing is very good, and the world view is okay. In summary, it is a dark love-like witch poem with a comic cover.

It's good-looking, although the routine is a bit old, but so far it doesn't have any poisonous points, which is already very good in Tomato.

AI article, but I can take a look and see if I can reduce those descriptors by more than half. The look and feel can be better