He Said He Would Practice Revenge, so What Are You Going to Do as a Teacher?

As proud as I am! Sure enough, the emotions were mobilized in place. Many babies have gone out of their way to give negative reviews after watching it for so long. I also saw some people tell me that they were withdrawing their negative reviews and even promoted the book in panic... It proves that this book is actually good. I came here at a certain point and am still getting used to it. In short, I used to write paid books, but now I write free books, so be loyal!

The plot of King Red vs. Ultraman in this book is very exciting, especially the scenes of Snow White vs. Belial are very beautiful and worth watching😍😍😍😍

After looking at the comments section, the most toxic point is probably the part where the male protagonist's two apprentices were snatched away. I think it can be rounded off. The male protagonist was weak at the time, and the previous plot stated that S-level geniuses were not protected and had a high mortality rate, so the female protagonist was taken away, which led to the subsequent main plot. But the description in the comment area gives people the feeling that the two wives who were finally raised were snatched away. The female protagonist was taken away by the military zone and other schools without doing anything. The male protagonist can be snatched back if his growth rate is less than a hundred pictures. I think the transition period in the middle is quite refreshing (the two female protagonists just sent the male protagonist away and then arrived at the new school, and then accepted the new female protagonist, and began to exercise their own strength. The growth rate is very fast and there is no feeling of embarrassment) At present, it seems that there is only one poisonous point. I have high poison resistance. People with low poison resistance may leave immediately after seeing the comments. It will also affect the score. The author can revise it and add some daily life of the two heroines going to the military zone and other schools. It means that the heroine was taken away because the country can better protect them and put in some patches. But there is another point I feel that as a novel with multiple female protagonists, there is too little description of the female protagonist's appearance and clothing. I can't imagine the appearance of the female protagonist in my mind, which leads to a bias in the sense of substitution. The description of the heroine's personality is still relatively clear. After that, the heroine should be as few and precise as possible. The male protagonist has grown to the fifth level in less than a hundred photos. According to this progress, he will probably reach the ninth level by chapter 250. I wonder if he will enter a new stage after the ninth level like Swallowing the Starry Sky (in this way, some parts of this novel are a bit like Swallowing the Starry Sky) The author seems to have come from a starting point, and his writing skills are still guaranteed. He can withstand the poisonous points, and it will be very comfortable to read without thinking.

I really like this novel. I really want to read the chapter where the male protagonist and his apprentice reunite after a long separation. I hope the author can keep reading more. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Let me go, the author, I came here to read a cool article, but you only let your apprentice be snatched away after only ten or twenty chapters (dagger, knife, knife). Full of anger, the protagonist also vowed to defy heaven and surpass the inspector. Oh My God! ! ! It feels like I just read a Hongguo novel. The main character is lost in the mortal world and the heroine is found only in the fairy world. The plot is very cliched and annoying.

Code! A classic is still a classic! I love watching it. There is no extraneous content. The plot is stable, but it is too slow and not enough to watch. It is high-level but has a sense of daily life. It has a natural motivation to continue watching.

Why is Shuangwen not happy at all_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__

So far it seems pretty good. As the plot unfolds, there are not many exciting points. Generally speaking, I feel more frustrated than happy. If it were more than ten years ago, like the era of Dou Po, it might be a good novel. But nowadays, when people read novels, they often read them for fun.

The most important problem for the author now is not the writing style, nor the style of painting, nor the structure. It is just to look at the two apprentices. How to write after they are found, because if you don't write well, it is very easy to become the kind of person who eats the public's food and smashes the public's bowl. This is a big minefield. I hope the author can write it well.

Come and take a look, it's so beautiful. If you don't score high, you won't come in to see it.

It felt okay. It was too frustrating in the front but the restaurant accepted it quickly. However, it was too poisonous for the apprentice to be forcibly taken away.

There are many flaws. If I could collect the energy of complaining, I would stop eating beef. But I can only say that it has flaws, not poisonous points. Not bad, come on author

It's well written, but the protagonist's growth is a bit slow. I'll give it four stars first. Come on, author.

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist Goldfinger's abilities are novel, and the overall structure of the novel is also good. It's worth Amway [laughs]

It's okay, but it lowered IQ in the front

Can you improve the protagonist faster, and what about the halo? I already want to see the patrol officer beaten up.

It's quite interesting, but the main character grows up too slowly.

I've read too many cool articles. I feel a little bored now and then, and grow slowly instead of being blinded by anger. I feel okay.

The writing is really good, but there are a lot of trolls who like to use their imaginations, which shows that the author is very successful. I hope that the more I write, the better I get and not be influenced by some inexplicable people.

Okay, it looks great, but the main character is too five.

It looks good, come on, it's not enough

It's okay, the protagonist is not brainless and happy

Okay, not bad.

The hardships in the front will come later...

Very well written and awesome

It's okay, I like to watch the development category

It's okay, come on

A little defective, but nothing serious

Still no need to say anything

The writing is very good, but could the author be faster?