Locks's Group of Six Paths Immortals Defeated the Four Emperors of Later Generations.

The best thing about this work is that the protagonist changes the atmosphere of getting along with the Rocks Pirates. He is not invisible, and he will not be like other fans. The protagonist becomes the group's favorite, through the protagonist's childish and ugly change, or the change of the original character, or simply the possession of Long Aotian. He taught Kaido the Eight Gates, and formed a bond with Kaido by virtue of their status as interns. He cheated on Kaido by playing the mouth-slapping game. On the one hand, he promoted friendship, and on the other hand, Silver Ax gave the Golden Lion a big mouth, and gained Silver Ax's recognition. His friendship with Kaido made Whitebeard feel like "family" and gained Whitebeard's approval. This is actually a rare point in Tomato fan fiction. Five stars is my subjective rating. The only thing that might affect the perception is probably Fenmao's original character, right? But I feel like it's also to gain Gurelliosa's approval?

Have listened to Chapter 45, Overall experience: It starts in the old era, and the writing is quite interesting. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power. It's a cool article. At the beginning, my soul travels to the time period of the old era, and my strength is not bad. I skip the new stage, and then join the Rocks Pirates, and my goal is to live well. When others show their swords, I have the strength to suppress others [eating melon]... The battle strength is not suppressed later on, and by the 30th chapter, the strength is almost invincible. I wonder if the Valley of the Gods is over, is it going to follow the original plot? Or an original plot [what]? This is a big problem [eat melon], Goldfinger is a devil fruit in exchange for a chance to win a lottery. It shows the size of the prize. The author is completely ignorant. The first 45 chapters have a score of 8, which is quite interesting. I will wait and see how the author writes the follow-up, which is the best choice.

Yes, worth watching, Naruto is the coolest

Okay, okay, it's fun to dip the beans in. You can write as you like, the author. Don't worry about those little sugar-coated people who post random posts and give seven-star reviews. I'll put it bluntly, that kind of person sits at the same table as Roger. Rave reviews[like][like][like]

This book about integrating Naruto's power system into the world of One Piece is really well written. It neither magically changes the character of the original character nor weakens the original power level of the world of One Piece. The game process between the protagonist and the Roger Pirates and the navy is also closely linked.

The subject matter is not new, but the writing is pretty good, and the starting combat power is not bad. However, judging from the introduction, it is estimated that it will be temporarily offline or behind the scenes in a reasonable way (probably?), And the number of words is still relatively small. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's okay, Ron is still [like] semi-invincible. You can read Shuhuang, but the pace feels a bit full.

As of Chapter 66: This is a good book It's well written and has no logical problems. The good thing is that the changes in the supporting characters' mentality and behavior are natural and reasonable. The protagonist's combat power is online, and he can now fight against Roger and Rayleigh alone. From time to time there will be some clown characters that act as a speed bump. The revenue share of fandom on Tomato is average, and the same 100,000 original readers are much higher. Now this amount of data can only be determined by whether the subsequent plot development can generate some traffic. I was recommended from the homepage

First of all, it seems that the author has written the interaction between the characters very vividly and delicately, and everyone's character is not OOC. I praise it! Secondly, at first glance, the content is clearly created by the author himself, without any technology. After reading it, I feel like I have returned to the previous Tomato novels, which I miss very much. In short, it is highly recommended even if you don't like AI writing!

Chapter fifty-five is quite interesting. In addition to being a bit hasty in joining the team earlier, the main reason was that after being rejected by Roger, it was a bit difficult to express confusion. The rest of the story is pretty good, not bad at all, but the character from the Land of Women is a little awkward, but that's acceptable.

It's pretty cool. The Rocks Pirates seem to be much better than Roger and Luffy behind them. Especially in the group, it feels more reasonable to fight the World Government. (Luffy is the protagonist of One Piece, I'm talking about the novel, don't criticize if you don't like it) [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

I have read 80 chapters so far. The previous stories are well arranged, mixed with poisonous tongues and companions, which is quite to my liking, and the protagonist obviously has his own ideas (this is very important). However, in the latest chapters, it gradually starts to feel a little empty. It is above 4 points, less than 5 points, but 5 points support it. My personal suggestion is that if the protagonist has nothing to write about, then make a group portrait, just like the original unit stories with a small number of characters, but it is not easy to write. Once it is written, it will be Robin of Justice Island. , If it's not written well, it's Oden of Wano. Please be careful. I have two fan-fiction recommendations. One has the protagonist Geer (the shining point is that the protagonist's thoughts are well integrated into the story through the prophet). The other is Hu Lingling at the beginning. She gave birth to a group of children. The early stage is wretched, and the later stage focuses on describing the children's growth and adventure to conquer the world. There is enough plot to write, and the father is responsible for invincible disclosure (don't pay attention to the writing of the book, mainly the interesting ideas). Personal preference, for reference only.

It's really well written. I don't know why the rating is low. Is it because the protagonist is against the clown Roger? [Hold face][Hold face] I like this plot very much, I hope the author will work hard to update it [Like][Like]

This book is very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very beautiful to read.

The book is very interesting and the battles are fun. I didn't read it when it was recommended a few times before. After all, you suddenly got a setting of the Four Gods. But when I went in and took a look, I found that it was quite interesting.

It's very appetizing. It's really good-looking, but the update is a bit stretched [grievance]

Good-looking, love to watch, more updates [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

I have read dozens of chapters. The characters are vivid and the descriptions are very good. I have a score of 9.2.

It's quite interesting, quite interesting, not abrupt, the emotional changes and descriptions are very clean and clear, and it's very smooth to read.

The whole story is basically just fighting, fighting, fighting, there is no other development, and the story is a bit weak. Then the final boss appeared too early. The character descriptions are pretty good.

It's so cool, but I can't think of how the protagonist will write about the new era at the moment. I feel like I'll be kicked to death in just a few chapters.

I must give you five stars. I really like your character design.

Little author, I will definitely give you rave reviews

It looks good and has a very stylish rating of 7.8

The writing is indeed good, but why do I see so many people giving it low marks? My colleagues see that the writing is good, so they give it low marks, right? In my opinion, it is completely malicious competition.

The goods have been received. The child loves to eat. After eating, he lay on the floor and danced. It can be seen that the portion is very large. The child can no longer eat and started spitting. 5-Star praise.

It's fun to write, please support me

It's pretty good-looking, and it's a funny route

This is the only Pirates book that has appeared on my homepage in recent months. It will win, [crying]

A book worth reading