It's Just a Love Letter, I'm Really Not a Great Writer!

It's okay, it has a youthful atmosphere and lacks some of the cruelty of reality It's not good at dealing with family ties. In my opinion, a family should be harmonious rather than fighting over interests.

This is a "best fantasy" book, emm... It's pretty good, pretty and interesting. "The author's writing style is very tasteful and is absolutely top-notch among online articles. Let me predict that this book will be a hit!"

Let me give a brief review. The comment section has been polarizing and even severely derogatory. The main reason is that I can't understand what I want to write. It is obviously a hero protagonist. You can't look at Jiahao with all kinds of faults, because you don't understand that many people can't see the point of Jiahao at all. The literary club was obviously a ploy, and many people said it was a failure. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. In addition to the normal amount of updates to the underworld, there are some logic problems. Secondly, the explanations in some places are not clear. There are not enough depictions of the current female characters. The campus has been out of the circle before it is fully written. The one who lives together has basically no description. In the latest chapter, you already have a girlfriend but the poem you gave is someone else's. It is not clearly stated whether the male protagonist is Aquaman or Pure Love. The advantage is that the author is very literary, the writing style can be seen as literate, the author has accumulated a lot of texts, and the protagonist is portrayed as a beauty. The second is the heroic value. My evaluation is that it is not heroic enough. Later, I forgot my roots and mainly went to interact with female characters. Although the writing is good, how can I not continue to be bold? Some suggestions: You can write about football, but don't always write it like a savior. Readers may be sensitive to the recent World Cup. After all, you are not a football novel. The update time at 3 or 4 in the morning is a little more earthly. The protagonist can be heroic, but you don't have to create heroic literature at night. I really can't stand it anymore. I won't mention the word count of the update. Also, we can add more stuff from Jiaxin. The younger sisters from several literary clubs can add more pictures. There is no need to add more female characters to the current ones, they are enough, otherwise they will easily become rotten and you will not be able to take on the roles. The main characters that appear are obviously not NPCs, so don't just throw them away after writing them. And the female teacher is really cute. The protagonist has never watched a football match with her. She doesn't even watch the World Cup. It seems that she doesn't love football that much. This leads to the fact that your protagonist plays football just to be a hero. Being a hero is not the purpose. Being a hero is a natural manifestation of life.

I specifically asked AI I also searched for information It turned out that those sentences looked like they were telling It's really poetry… This novel broke my impression of "poetry". Although it feels like the filter has been dropped all over the place, it is good to break the impression.

It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, come and see, come and see, come and see, come and see, come and see [crying]

When I read Chapter 69, I found the previous writing to be quite good. Some of the toxic parts would have been discarded in other novels, but they are still acceptable in this novel. The plot is quite coherent and the writing is good, but the pace is very slow. The plot of Wenzhao Gong is too heavy on daily descriptions, of course. I don't mean to say bad, but I don't like it very much. I like the more compact Wenzhao Gong type. At least I think the plot with the female character is okay. I don't comment on it. I mainly read Wenzhao Gong. The pace is too slow. I don't want to read it. Maybe it will be good to wait for Shuhuang to read it.

It's okay, just enough food to pass the time.

It's not a strong love story, it's fantasy literature, but the pace is too fast, so I probably won't be able to write it long. Just throw your mind away and read for a while, don't have high expectations, it's still good. I have to be more diligent and diligent. I hope the author will work hard and write well, and he will always make progress. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's very good, although there are a lot of loopholes, but what I want is a feeling, a bit like the feeling of I am a big star, the kind of fun without thinking, the main thing is the atmosphere.

There may be some fragmentation at the beginning, but after reading four or five chapters, there will be fewer excerpts. Overall, it's quite interesting. I wanted to give it four and a half stars but didn't. I'll give it five stars. The current score is a bit too low.

It's okay. I said I didn't give full marks before, so why did I give it full marks again? Is it AI-assisted? Write the memory well.

The writing style is excellent, and the description of the scenery is outstanding. It is a work that is understandable but still literary and artistic. The emotional description is not delicate but does not have too many flaws. It is an excellent work among similar online articles on Tomato and is worth reading.

Really, there are so few, author, who do you show it to?

It is true that the male protagonist did not look like much in the early stage, and even a bit petty, but later on he really enriched the image of the male protagonist, quoting Shi Tiesheng's concept of "the flow of the night". The article did not directly describe the inner feelings of the male protagonist, but everything he did and thought expressed a person's feelings. Growth amidst contradictions is the theme of this book, and I think it's really good.

It's very good, relaxed, the pace is very slow, the relationship development between the male and female protagonists is not very good, other things are okay

This book is okay, but does it contain too many female characters? How to solve it later?

Super invincible and beautiful

Very interesting novel

Good, good, good, good

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Well, he helped me add some novels that I haven't heard of before.

I don't know why I'm reading less and less, and my points seem to have been reduced, but I really think this book is very well written, and I hope that one day I'll be able to rejuvenate myself. Come on.

A refreshing piece of literature, with detailed character descriptions and foreshadowing.

Interesting setting, can watch it

Although the overall plot is a bit classic, it is still very good and enjoyable to watch.

The narrative is smooth and the overall feeling is very good

It's really cool to read a cool article

I won't comment on whether it's good or bad, and I don't have the cultural literacy, but can there be more love letters or add a love letter or literary phrase at the end of each chapter? ?

It's too little. I can spend a lifetime writing novels on it.

I just started reading this book, and then it came out that Keigo Higashino passed away [crying]