Li Wei traveled through Zongwu Jiuzhou, became the dandy prince of Xiliang, and was bound to the Jiujianxian system. Huang Rong was stunned: This is not a prodigal son, he is clearly a swordsman coming to the world! Li Wei traveled through Zongwu Jiuzhou, became the dandy prince of Xiliang, and was bound to the Jiujianxian system. Huang Rong was stunned: This is not a prodigal son, he is clearly a swordsman coming to the world!
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The article is too watery: it should only be one chapter, but it takes two or three chapters; describing a plot, written upside down, makes people tired to read.
Repetition of characterization: I know you want a sense of immersion, and you want to show the strength of the male protagonist and his peerless appearance, but there is no need to say the same character once every time he fights. This is going too far and makes people boring to watch.
The article is too watery: it should only be one chapter, but it takes two or three chapters; describing a plot, written upside down, makes people tired to read. Repetition of characterization: I know you want a sense of immersion, and you want to show the strength of the male protagonist and his peerless appearance, but there is no need to say the same character once every time he fights. This is going too far and makes people boring to watch.