Adventures in Another World, Starting as a Baby

The first part was good, but it was different from what I expected. The second part turned into a strange adventure for a child 🍉

The early stage was good, but then the author got sick and asked the protagonist to start surviving in the wilderness + neurotic goddess. However, the immortality and human shield style of the goddess in the later stage are not bad. At least there is no problem in being "useful". It is much better than a bunch of civil war fantasy gods in re0.

I'll give it five stars. The pace of reading is okay, and the content is familiar, so I won't say much more. …I cannot be the only one, the author is quite miserable 🍉

Although there is a clichéd aristocratic young man who is missing, but he is corrected in time, the survival plot is very tiring to watch. Another thing worthy of praise is that he is willing to write about magic technology instead of playing black powder in the wizarding world.

It looks good, but the sudden transformation from daily routine to adventure in the early stage is too abrupt.

Yes, the only drawback is that I was teleported away by a book in the middle. It felt weird, and then I always felt that something was wrong afterward? I always feel that this transmission is of little significance. There is no transition in the middle. I always feel that something is wrong. I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind. Except for this one blocking point, everything else is good.

The writing is a bit immature, but I have no more books to read. I don't know why the authors of Tomato seem to have run away, so they say I can't do it without you, and I don't want to be Shennong anymore. But the content of the article is still good. Although the story is classic, at least the author is very careful.

I think it looks good

It's too slow. I want to write a lot, but the progress is too slow.

Write as much as possible