[Beng Tie] + [Original God] + [Beng San] + [Dead Zone Zero] +...
Occasionally daily life, occasionally fighting, with an original world view, not a serious fanfiction.
Mu Feng is trapped in a strange world, which is connected to other worlds.
As people from different worlds visited one after another, he had various stories with them and at the same time, he also took the opportunity to find a way to return home.
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"Everyone who comes to the cabin has made some mistakes.
Section Chief Ya wants to steal honeydew melons every day. Lord Columbia often goes to eat the World Tree secretly when there are few people around. Bai E burned more than one wheat field... However, it seems that he has never seen Nicole make any mistakes? "
"On her first day here, Nicole smashed a very expensive mirror owned by Ms. Heita. She has 249 years, 11 months and 26 days left in her sentence."
"Can I ask how expensive it is?"
"It is said that the entire New Eridu, including the No. 0 Hole, must be packaged and sold to barely pay the compensation."
"Look on the bright side, Nicole, Mufeng will not let you die until you are released after serving your sentence."
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Reader comments
In my opinion, the normal rating of this book should be around 8.9.
The author still made the mistake of a newcomer when writing. Some contents were not prepared at all before leaving the factory. Many supplementary explanations were even supplemented by the author's comments.
But at least when the author writes, he speaks human words, instead of being like many fans I have read recently.
So my evaluation of this book is that I can read it, but I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss]
The book is good, and the content is also quite good, but it feels too fragmented. Most of it is at the level of a newcomer, but it is not full of water. It is a good review. It is food and can be eaten. I have read Chapter 15 so far, and I plan to read the description later.
The story is very good, and the setting is relatively novel, but the author's narrative technique is a bit abstract, and there are no signs of changes in the timeline. Many times, it takes more than half a chapter to realize that the timeline jumps.
I see! Every time the protagonist disappears or appears, he should be viewed as a blank protagonist and an unknown time period.
Time is incoherent, and memory is also incoherent, so each short story is discrete, especially in World Tree. Space is also discrete, and it is possible for a person's past and future to exist at the same time.
After losing strength, the perception plummets, and the ability gained is the same as pdd.
Quietly give yourself a five-star rating.
This book is really well written, both the writing style and the plot are pretty good.
There doesn't seem to be any big problem so far
Very good, very pretty [eating melon]
Maybe it's too fragmented, but the rest is fine.
Very good. I like this kind of hodgepodge.
It has a different flavor. It's a pity that I don't like to see this kind of feeling similar to a herd of elephants.
Very good, I stayed up late to read it. Very personal radio waves
The characters are very delicate and overall quite interesting.
It's nice to watch and has a lot of whimsy, but the message is too tight.
In my opinion, the normal rating of this book should be around 8.9. The author still made the mistake of a newcomer when writing. Some contents were not prepared at all before leaving the factory. Many supplementary explanations were even supplemented by the author's comments. But at least when the author writes, he speaks human words, instead of being like many fans I have read recently. So my evaluation of this book is that I can read it, but I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss]
The book is good, and the content is also quite good, but it feels too fragmented. Most of it is at the level of a newcomer, but it is not full of water. It is a good review. It is food and can be eaten. I have read Chapter 15 so far, and I plan to read the description later.
The story is very good, and the setting is relatively novel, but the author's narrative technique is a bit abstract, and there are no signs of changes in the timeline. Many times, it takes more than half a chapter to realize that the timeline jumps.
I see! Every time the protagonist disappears or appears, he should be viewed as a blank protagonist and an unknown time period. Time is incoherent, and memory is also incoherent, so each short story is discrete, especially in World Tree. Space is also discrete, and it is possible for a person's past and future to exist at the same time.
After losing strength, the perception plummets, and the ability gained is the same as pdd.
Quietly give yourself a five-star rating.
This book is really well written, both the writing style and the plot are pretty good.
There doesn't seem to be any big problem so far
Very good, very pretty [eating melon]
Maybe it's too fragmented, but the rest is fine.
Very good. I like this kind of hodgepodge.
It has a different flavor. It's a pity that I don't like to see this kind of feeling similar to a herd of elephants.
Very good, I stayed up late to read it. Very personal radio waves
The characters are very delicate and overall quite interesting.
It's nice to watch and has a lot of whimsy, but the message is too tight.