Qi Practitioner and Jiehai Hongyu

I just treat it as an online game to some extent. The core disciples of the powerful sect are in reserve? The only flaw is that it is too bland. It is all about daily playing games and dungeons, plots, details, and fights. One person and one dog, bah, a bull, walking sideways. The heroine does not exist, the partners, and the subordinates do not exist. I woke up too early today and opened the copy on my computer. I finished the copy in a few moments. At night, I took a shower and went to bed. Basically this is the tone, it's too general. The excitement is minimal, and there is not much sense of immersion. After watching about two-thirds of it, I just left the Novice Village, ah no, the Novice Kingdom. When I arrived at the next kingdom, I was selected by the prince of the kingdom as a target for harvesting. . . . . The reason is similar to that I like it and I am willing to do it, so I am willing to kill the protagonist in a few times. . It's pretty good in Tomato. With my more than 20 years of experience in writing online, I think it's passable. If it is carefully polished, with a lot of cool points added, and the writing is detailed and not too sloppy, it will still be very interesting.

The combination of western fantasy, classical fairy tales and infinite flow is very good, but there is too little. It's at least 500,000 words long enough to be enjoyable. I hope the author doesn't have too much supervision. Tomato has many good books, but unfortunately they are all out of date, 😩 By the way, the author can change the introduction. This introduction is not very attractive.

Overall, it looks very good. First, the number of words in your piece is quite sufficient, with an average of five to six thousand words. This is great. Then, if I see it here, the advantage is that you sewed it well, but you did it well. The main prominent ones are the characters who cultivated immortality and prehistoric times. ➕The plot of Zongwang. ➕Warhammer➕Opening up all the worlds, one of the obvious things is that the protagonist has obtained something, which is the original body of Warhammer. A template. An object. It was directly reduced to an object like a ginseng doll by the powerful one. Then the protagonist's skill is shapeshifting. You can absorb some special items and then directly transform into this thing. Then you can absorb its characteristics and strengthen yourself. When stitched like this, the writing is quite good, and there is no sense of dissonance. I have only read this point now, because I have only read about 20 chapters. I read it very slowly. It is a pretty good novel. Then, if you can change the name, try to change the name. This name is a bit inconspicuous. When I saw this name at first, I didn't even enter it. I didn't read it until I read no novels. Because you, the name was not good at the beginning, and the second one is you, you only have more than 40 chapters. I thought you haven't updated it much, and it might be out of date, so I won't click in at the first time or click in and take a look. The name is not good and there are not many chapters, so I will subconsciously abandon it. The author can pay attention to this. But you wrote a lot of words in each piece, which is good. [Please update]

It's a pretty good novel, but it has a relatively slow pace and setting. The main plot is relatively weak, mostly related to the experience on the journey. The back part is a bit wordy but not too much. If you can accept it, it's just a piece of food.

The author is full of ideas, has a big world view, and writes some traditional fairy tales. Each chapter has an average of 5,000 words, which is very satisfying. This kind of long novel with some traditional fairy tale flavor reminds me of Dao Zhidong. It is considered a high-quality product on Tomato, but it is a pity that not many people read it [crazy]

The more I write, the better. The protagonist is really firm in his Taoism, and everything he does is the Dao. He still has no rival among his peers. The setting is also good. At the beginning, you join one of the strongest Taoist traditions. There is no need for the protagonist to collect skills and magical powers every day. Now the most powerful Taoist ancestor in the background is also a person of supreme benevolence, so now all the Taoists in the Heavenly Court also act with morality, and higher cultivators cannot kill lower cultivators without incident. The most powerful force, Tianting, is also invisible in the heavens, giving other paths opportunities to develop. It looks very comfortable

The writing is quite good, not like a newbie. Where are the old books

It's unexpectedly good-looking. I really like the character of the protagonist. Each chapter is several thousand words long, so it's very comfortable to read.

The logic so far is clear and organized, and it looks great.

After reading it, it felt like it had been a long time. When I looked back, there were only about sixty chapters. Each chapter has four to five thousand words. It's been a long time since I've seen such a comfortable classical cultivation of immortality. Come on, author.

Writing well so far

Nothing to say, it looks good.

Very well written, not impetuous It's a bit boring as of now

It's quite good. It's not easy to find a novel that I can read. Come on [laughs]

It is my destiny to follow serials, ah ah ah ah, it looks good, update it soon, I really like this type of series, it gives me a sense of satisfaction, update it soon, [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Not bad, well written

It's a very good article written by a human being.

Very interesting book, nice to read

Well written, please update more

Not bad, keep it up later

The variant of Zongwang has found its own way, which is quite good.

So far, it seems that the writing is very good, but there is too little.

How can I say it's very good? I feel very comfortable watching it. What cultivates Taoism is not the accumulation of energy

Good looking Shinhwa Qi training

Very good, ai tastes little

Like it, like it, it looks great, it flows smoothly

Come on, the Qi training system is very well written, be sure not to stop updating it.

It looks good. There is a sense of comfort that I felt when I watched "I'm Happy" back then.

The background is Western fantasy, the protagonist cultivates immortality, the stories are mostly Eastern, and the author's imagination is very modern!

Nice! The infinite multiple combinations of Western Fantasy and Immortality are quite novel. The protagonist is also a genius immortal species, and the resources behind him are also huge. It's just that the word count is a bit short at the moment, so I'm looking forward to more updates!