[Yuri, gender-bender romance]
Me, an overworked office drone, pull an all-nighter and die suddenly.
The reincarnation official tells me: “We got your gender wrong. You can only be a woman.”
I say no. He says, “Then be a slug.”
I say I guess being a woman isn't so bad.
After reincarnating, I bind myself to a busted System that “nobody wants.”
It says: “You have to grant the wishes of four girls.”
To avoid giving myself away, I have no choice but to throw myself into playing a maid, an artist, a race car driver, and a sweet little sister.
I switch between several personalities every day just to complete the missions.
I thought my disguise was perfect, but…
Why have all four of them shown up at my door?!
Seriously, when will us working stiffs finally be able to stop working overtime?!
The yarn captured by gravity carries the emotional entanglements of the girls. Rin and Michiko alone are enough to make her anxious. I wonder what it will be like when the other two contestants join (laughs) But I want to complain about it. In the article, "Shaori's voice", "what the system said", "online conversations" and narration are all mixed together without any special markings. Sometimes it creates an abrupt feeling and makes it difficult to tell who said what. At the same time, before Chapter 30, the author's connection and transformation between the character dialogue, the protagonist's voice, and the off-site description are a bit stiff, and it feels like a hammer here and there. I don't know what other readers think, but for someone like me who likes to render character dialogue scenes in my mind, it feels like the storyboards are incoherent. Overall, it's a good work, keep up the good work, author🍉
I feel good. The writing is quite interesting. Can they put a "" or [ ] symbol when sending a message?
Not bad. Not bad. What the system says is to make it more obvious. There are hidden words. Sometimes it's hard to tell clearly. No, this is not the daily campus romance novel I want 😢 😢 Why are they all heavy on girls? I was so scared that I cried … Why haven't you unbuttoned it😡
I have seriously admitted it, and I can't hold my tongue when I think about what kind of entanglements the five women will have in the future.
It looks good, the author should keep it up
It looks good, I think you can try it [Blow Kiss]
Good author, you win. I wanted to go to bed before 12 o'clock. It's almost two o'clock now.
I really like my sister, meow [sending heart]
I feel like the main character is so soft and waxy. Maybe he's been assimilated into the body of a beautiful girl. He's so cute.
Oh Niubi, it's so well written.