{Western Fantasy}{Sword and Magic}{Unsystematic}{Slow Burn} Lin Du traveled to a different world and was sold as a slave because of his unique appearance. He spent three difficult years in the slave shop. He became the cheapest commodity in the slave shop. Finally, a poor country woman bought him. What he didn't know was that the country woman who bought him was a "witch" and was an outlaw in this kingdom of another world. A thrilling journey of survival and adventure was about to begin.
Reader comments
It's a very special book. I thought it was the kind of story about a slave surviving a life with a beautiful witch, but it turned out to be a story about how to survive at the hands of a terrifying dissector. It can be seen that it is very difficult to survive.
Do you think you are the slave of the fragrant and soft witch? In fact, the protagonist is facing a terrifying anatomy wizard, who has almost no emotions and treats the protagonist purely as a tool. The protagonist lives like the one in the 19th century.
If the protagonist is allowed to destroy the world, how many floors can a bag of rice carry?
I thought it was a slave turning over and singing, but it turned out to be Myanmar [laughing and crying]
Actually the story is okay. If it doesn't work, there is no need to write it as a long article. It's okay to write it as a short story. The broad description could be simplified a bit. Too much makes me sleepy, and it is easy to persuade me to quit. After using AI, I can delete and delete it myself.
Although the previous writing is very verbose, it is very enjoyable to read. The author's xp matched mine.
A very good novel, written very carefully, not "meticulous" but "delicate" [laughing evilly] It is really well written, especially in Tomato, you need to read it slowly. The plot is like cutting through a wall, and the light of survival shines into the protagonist's world bit by bit. From the despair of the plot at the beginning, it slowly changes to a dull daily life, looking forward to tomorrow's little surprise.
Kids, I found a book that tortures the main character. It's kind of interesting.
It's beautiful, and the emotion of trying your best to survive is great
I still hope it can reduce all kinds of meaningless psychological descriptions. The surprises are really not in line with the high IQ setting.
Slow-burning stories, I think many people will read them for a longer time. Currently, there is nothing exciting about them and they are not very attractive. Especially the slow-burning Tomato stories are not very popular, but for now, the current setting is very interesting and novel.
The novel is very well written, the emotions are very delicate, and the rhythm is well grasped. This is the first time I have seen a novel of this kind. Come on, author, the writing is really good. If you can finish it successfully, you will definitely be the originator of this type of novel.
The more you write, the better. Come on.
The writing is very slow and delicate, which is a rare article. If you can calm down and read it, it is still very good. The pace is slightly slow but still acceptable, and the plot unfolds slowly step by step. I hope the author can stick to his original intention and narrate this story bit by bit.
The pet in the introduction made me laugh. It's quite real. I hope to see the protagonist's reaction to escaping from the witch. What the hell is this slow-burning thing about?
Is the following story about the protagonist using modern wisdom to rise up? If it is just a torture of the main text, I feel that the article will be dull.
It's so scary. When will the protagonist escape?
In the early stages, the pace was a bit slow, and the writing style was strange, but that changed later on. Although the writing style was still average, the story attracted me very much.
You must survive and escape from the witch's hands.
As long as I belong to your family, that's fine. You mean this is a happy decision, okay, okay, okay. The Typhoon website is talking [cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool]
[Cool][Admiration]
Okay, okay, please add more updates, author
Very logical, not bad
Hope it's a long article
The world view is quite attractive. Is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, is it a single female protagonist? What does slow heat mean here?
Rare Wen Qingfeng different world novel
It's a bit slow to warm up, but I can see that I'm writing it seriously. It's the way the protagonist and the witch get along, I feel like the author xp.
The initial structure of the story is good and quite attractive, but there are too many descriptions of expressions. When you are not familiar with the characters, you can use them more as characters. After the characters are clear, you can reduce them appropriately.
The writing is very detailed, as if all the details and feelings that the reader can see are laid out on the surface. The style is okay, but it will feel very cumbersome after reading for a long time. You can try to hide part of the emotions you want to write.
I have never seen a book like this, and I hope it won't be bad or eunuch. I also want to ask, will this witch be the heroine? [Thinking]
It's a very special book. I thought it was the kind of story about a slave surviving a life with a beautiful witch, but it turned out to be a story about how to survive at the hands of a terrifying dissector. It can be seen that it is very difficult to survive.
Do you think you are the slave of the fragrant and soft witch? In fact, the protagonist is facing a terrifying anatomy wizard, who has almost no emotions and treats the protagonist purely as a tool. The protagonist lives like the one in the 19th century.
If the protagonist is allowed to destroy the world, how many floors can a bag of rice carry?
I thought it was a slave turning over and singing, but it turned out to be Myanmar [laughing and crying]
Actually the story is okay. If it doesn't work, there is no need to write it as a long article. It's okay to write it as a short story. The broad description could be simplified a bit. Too much makes me sleepy, and it is easy to persuade me to quit. After using AI, I can delete and delete it myself. Although the previous writing is very verbose, it is very enjoyable to read. The author's xp matched mine.
A very good novel, written very carefully, not "meticulous" but "delicate" [laughing evilly] It is really well written, especially in Tomato, you need to read it slowly. The plot is like cutting through a wall, and the light of survival shines into the protagonist's world bit by bit. From the despair of the plot at the beginning, it slowly changes to a dull daily life, looking forward to tomorrow's little surprise.
Kids, I found a book that tortures the main character. It's kind of interesting.
It's beautiful, and the emotion of trying your best to survive is great I still hope it can reduce all kinds of meaningless psychological descriptions. The surprises are really not in line with the high IQ setting.
Slow-burning stories, I think many people will read them for a longer time. Currently, there is nothing exciting about them and they are not very attractive. Especially the slow-burning Tomato stories are not very popular, but for now, the current setting is very interesting and novel.
The novel is very well written, the emotions are very delicate, and the rhythm is well grasped. This is the first time I have seen a novel of this kind. Come on, author, the writing is really good. If you can finish it successfully, you will definitely be the originator of this type of novel. The more you write, the better. Come on.
The writing is very slow and delicate, which is a rare article. If you can calm down and read it, it is still very good. The pace is slightly slow but still acceptable, and the plot unfolds slowly step by step. I hope the author can stick to his original intention and narrate this story bit by bit.
The pet in the introduction made me laugh. It's quite real. I hope to see the protagonist's reaction to escaping from the witch. What the hell is this slow-burning thing about? Is the following story about the protagonist using modern wisdom to rise up? If it is just a torture of the main text, I feel that the article will be dull.
It's so scary. When will the protagonist escape? In the early stages, the pace was a bit slow, and the writing style was strange, but that changed later on. Although the writing style was still average, the story attracted me very much.
You must survive and escape from the witch's hands.
As long as I belong to your family, that's fine. You mean this is a happy decision, okay, okay, okay. The Typhoon website is talking [cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool] [Cool][Admiration]
Okay, okay, please add more updates, author
Very logical, not bad
Hope it's a long article
The world view is quite attractive. Is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, is it a single female protagonist? What does slow heat mean here?
Rare Wen Qingfeng different world novel
It's a bit slow to warm up, but I can see that I'm writing it seriously. It's the way the protagonist and the witch get along, I feel like the author xp.
The initial structure of the story is good and quite attractive, but there are too many descriptions of expressions. When you are not familiar with the characters, you can use them more as characters. After the characters are clear, you can reduce them appropriately.
The writing is very detailed, as if all the details and feelings that the reader can see are laid out on the surface. The style is okay, but it will feel very cumbersome after reading for a long time. You can try to hide part of the emotions you want to write.
I have never seen a book like this, and I hope it won't be bad or eunuch. I also want to ask, will this witch be the heroine? [Thinking]