The Shura Field Between the School Beauty Qingmei and Her Brother Controlling Her Sister!

The heroine refuses or agrees to be confessed by the male co-star, and hangs others as a licking dog. There is also another female protagonist who clearly likes the male protagonist and lies to the male protagonist that she has a boyfriend. There is also a very sacred plot. This female protagonist said that she likes her boyfriend when shopping. As a result, the male protagonist heard that the female protagonist likes her boyfriend. This boyfriend does not exist and the male protagonist does not know about it. Then he turned around and left after hearing this. There are so many powerful plots in just 100,000 words, an invincible author [laughing and crying]

It's okay. There really aren't any bad points at the moment. A passerby confessed to the heroine, but simply rejected it in the next two chapters. There is no protracted plot, but the role of the male protagonist is added between the confession and rejection. Is this considered an advantage to me? Generally speaking, except for the sister's gravity plot, there are no other highlights, and it is not a sweet story... Maybe it is because there are several female protagonists, so the plot develops slowly, but the female protagonists are really good in their portrayal, and they are all very memorable... I hope the author can keep writing... The sister plot gkd

The emotional description is delicate, and it belongs to the general public as a love story. Most of the things mentioned in the likes actually have no impact. Currently no green, no tea, no licking It's a pity that the superpower line is very average There is absolutely no need to add this setting. Really, the superpower line is good... But the love line is pretty good. It feels like eating a mixture of cheese and chocolate It's a pity, love story plus super powers The heroine also has the physique to attract villains The key villain is an ancient facial villain If it is a daily novel or if the main character only has his own way, this book must have at least a 4-star food level. At present, I really can't stand the supernatural line anymore.

I've finished it, I've finished it, I've finished it. It's really well written. At first, I thought it was an urban love redemption story. The female protagonists in it were all portrayed so pitifully and miserably [facepalm] [facepalm] It was really heart-wrenching in the early stages, but then the sudden change from daily urban love to supernatural urban love made me feel a bit disconnected. But overall, it is still very good. The heroine is very distinctive, so I suggest you read it as an urban superpower romance novel at first, otherwise it will feel a bit fragmented later on, but overall it is still very good. There are no major issues in the novel as a whole. I recommend it! ! !

Listen to the book on a different account and write a long review. With such a small number of words, so much reading, and so many comments, you know that the quality of the plot of this book will not be low. If it can match your preferences, it will definitely become a front-row work in the hearts of many people. Then let's talk about the plot. There are two heroines who have been criticized by many people. Wen Wan was confessed and did not refuse completely. This plot is there, but combined with the subsequent supplement of Wen Wan's plot to the character, this character is a god among gods, and with the offensive after solving the suicide mystery, the follow-up is absolutely sweet, and will definitely become a key role in promoting the harmony of the harem. In fact, it is already progressing, and Gu Yao's three views are shocked and shattered. There is also a plot where Su Li Dana says that she has a boyfriend. In the plot, her friend Gu Yao also likes the male protagonist. The first-come, first-served order makes Su Li voluntarily give in, so she ran to another school. In order to prevent being harassed, she said that she already had a boyfriend. It was not pretending. If she told the little girl selling roses from behind, she just unilaterally regarded the male protagonist as her boyfriend. Is this considered cheating? I lied to you that I have a boyfriend, but the boyfriend I said was actually you. I am really looking forward to this part of the plot. The seedlings are still clearing the fields, waiting for the king to return. Gu Yao's outlook was shattered. It was a serious question whether to accept the harem or become a defeated dog. The last one is of course the plot about the younger sister. Apart from trying to break through the relationship, there is no other plot, but it is delicious, delicious, gkd. The title "Yandere" turns out to be really sick and really spoiled. What does it mean that I will never hurt my brother, but I will kill myself and make my brother regret it for the rest of his life! This kind of yandere is so appetizing! After the relationship is clarified, why don't you tell me if we are not close, what have I been struggling with for so many years? Then the story of my sister being crazy and gluttonous gkd The author of the supernatural part recently said that he would continue to reduce the sense of existence and separation. In this book, the supernatural is really holding back the story. The love plot is a god among gods, and the supernatural is... But it is understandable. If you don't add some miscellaneous things, there will be nothing to write later, so I hope it can be reduced as much as possible. Also, there are a lot of female protagonists. I feel like the author likes to write out the characters first and then re-appear later, rather than just dropping them from the sky. This writing method may vary from person to person. Finally, the front of this book is very dull, but all the trickles are for the big waterfall at the back! As long as you can watch it, it's definitely worth a closer look. I just took a look, and there are quite a few people who are giving rewards and urging updates. I guess I can write it down, right?

So cool, I felt so happy watching it. Su Li once liked Xia Tian, ​​but Qingmei noticed her feelings earlier than Su Li, because she felt that Qingmei liked Xia Tian earlier, so Xia Tian belonged to Qing Mei, so she left. But in Chapter 20, Su Li learned that Xia Tian once liked herself. If she had not left, would Xia Xia be with her? This feeling of regret, what I want to read is this mouth, and the characters in the book are both business-minded, and none of them are insensitive to emotions. What I want to read is a sweet love, not a few wooden people playing truth or dare. Shennong came over quickly to recommend it. It is a very good ration. The emotional line is very well written, and it depends on the power line. I hope the author can combine the power and the emotional line as naturally as possible, and let the power line drive the emotional line [Note]

From the front, it looks more like the Nikkei type. The female protagonists appear in turn. Different types have their own characteristics. The portrayal is really good. I like them all. It is still in the stage of declaring war between the parties, and they all have a loser atmosphere. But the author said that they should accept it all, then wait for a big counterattack. There are no obvious poisonous points. The plot is well connected. The male protagonist is a reliable character. You will never hate him, but there are no explosive points? The existence of the main system currently has no use for 100,000 words. It seems that deleting it will have no impact. It is also responsible for inducing a few plots? Looking at the back, there is a plot similar to the revival of spiritual energy that has been foreshadowing the rest. This kind of slowly unfolding story line depends on personal preference. The writing quality is indeed good, there is no sense of AI, and it is considered high in Tomato. If you like this style, you will find a treasure. It can be seen that the author writes very seriously. The gentle plot, this character is currently weird, not as good as Dana, the defeated dog who only appeared in a few chapters. If the author wanted to write a character who is gentle to everyone, then the writing is very bad, but it seems that there should be other stories. The author said that he has started writing the gentle plot, and will add more after reading it. The current plot of Sister is very good. Although it is not serious, the various descriptions and the psychology of struggling with blood relationships are very delicious, delicious, and delicious. The characters of He Miao and Gu Yao are quite classic. There is nothing special to say. One is Qingmei who dare not confess her feelings, and the other is an ugly duckling who is bullied. Currently at chapter 50, He Miao is about to be offline. It is said that the return will be full of glory, and the ugly duckling will turn into a swan? I guess there will be a reunion plot where the empress that everyone admires has already fallen in love with me. Also using He Miao's sister Mi Li, it looks like she will join the battlefield later, and the older sister and younger sister will grab the man's gkd. Overall, it's worth a visit, and it's a rare masterpiece in Tomato. The gentle plot has been solved, and I have completely changed my view on this character. I am a god among gods [laughing] I think the next step should be a sweet love plot, right? I didn't expect that my sister's hatchet would be activated directly. Please update it quickly. Don't do your bad powers. We are here to see how to fall in love!

Five stars means that there is no trace of AI, the female protagonist has a distinct personality, and the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is not bad, but there are still some problems. These problems can be easily solved by allowing the male protagonist to show his strength and action (not afraid of trouble, not quarrelsome, and dare to take action), giving readers a sense of security.

It is obvious that this is a relatively excellent book, at least it is considered good in Tomato. The heroines that have appeared so far do not have any bad points, and each has its own characteristics, and the character and image are all memorable. Unlike other novels, after reading more than half of them, there are no highlights. What impressed me the most about this novel was Wen's description. By using the characteristic of being gentle to everyone to write the subsequent plot of her having an emotional disorder, the author really made me feel that he really put his heart into writing the emotional line. As for the supernatural line... I think it can be polished a little more.

I feel that the writing is quite good, nothing shocking, and the character creation is quite good, but it doesn't seem to match the title of the book. At this point, I feel that every heroine looks like a loser [smile]. Overall, it's good. I hope the author will work harder and write more, it's quite good-looking [smile] [smile] [smile]

I have read Chapter 22 so far. The plot of Qingmei regrets is very good. It is not the popular plot of I left you and you regret it. It feels like mint lemonade to me. In short, except for the small number of chapters, it is a bit unreadable and has no shortcomings.

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Personally, I think it's pretty good. There are two female protagonists and I feel like they're a little bit awkward [laughter] For example, Su's, why do you always add something out of thin air to this type, pretending to have a boyfriend, various misunderstandings, etc., Chasing a husband, it's too cliche, in fact, there is nothing pure jealousy. It's just warm. The type of central air conditioning is the same as that of the male protagonist, Asasi. The feeling of being gentle to everyone and never rejecting it. Personal senses are not good. Diaphragm. There will be changes last time. I will refuse some things, but this is the premise that the male protagonist reminds me, otherwise I feel that Wen will not take the initiative to make it clear. The type of central air conditioner for the male protagonist does not matter, but the central air conditioner for the female protagonist [laughs][laughs] The other heroines feel good [like] Overall, it feels good. It just depends on how it develops later. I have double standards

The writing is quite good, but don't write about Wen Wan being confessed by a passerby that he likes you, but Wen Wan replies that I am also this kind of poisonous plot (although it can come back later, most people will run away when they see the poisonous point, who will continue to watch it)

Okay, I personally still like this kind of heartwarming writing style. I personally think the plot is not bad. As for the heroine lying to the hero that she has a boyfriend, the joke is that I have read Tomato, and I still care about this.

The writing is okay. It's not like a newbie. It's quite good in Tomato. If I have to say it, it has a little bug in modern life, but it's not a big problem. The slow and obvious progress of the love line is quite to my liking. It's much better than the love at first sight. What about the Shura field? My sister is not easy to deal with. The superpower is okay, but it's not necessary. I'll look at the rest later.

It's very beautiful. Come on, author.

Gkd, at least five updates a day, right?

After watching it, I felt it was okay. If this quality can be maintained, it will be around 9.1.

The rhythm is slower and the volume is smaller. I still prefer this style. Just keep working hard and don't stop. I will keep up with it [Chigua]

This is probably one of the top two books I've read on Tomato. It has a gentle storyline, complete characterization, and a good rhythm. The other female protagonists have relatively few roles.

It's really good-looking, and the writing is super good, but it's just too little, so it's not easy to read. It's really good-looking, and the writing is super good, but there's just too little of it, so it doesn't look good to me. Beautiful package

Why is it only 6.2? This rating is very bad, but this book is not bad. I feel it is well written. No matter how low it is, it can still get an eight score. Well, it's like the superpower written by the author is not important, it is just an auxiliary device to monitor and extend the life of my sister, Wen Wan (one of the heroines in the article) and others. Then the heroine has a younger sister, a childhood sweetheart, a school belle in the same class, a rich girl, and a country girl (laughing). Maybe they will be added later, but that's all I saw. The author does a good job of balancing. Strong heroes are immediately weakened, weak heroes are strengthened, and heroes who exceed the standard are banned. The content of the book can probably be guessed from the title, but there is a slight thorn in the side: Wen Wan was agreed to by someone when she confessed her love on campus, but this is used to promote the plot and complete the logic. Hmm... I'll just write these for now, and I'll comment on the others when I encounter them.

The writing is quite beautiful, and it's very heartwarming to read on a daily basis. I didn't really like the flame man after he appeared, and I just skimmed the rest of the plot. Moreover, in the previous plot of Flame Man, the official people actually said that the male protagonist died because they did not want to expose the existence of the monster. If it were not for the snow girl, would it be a waste of a resurrection opportunity? This is too frustrating. The subsequent emotional scene with Su Li was so tense that it made me feel sick to my stomach. The previous plot was very interesting, but why was the subsequent plot so uncomfortable╯╰

It's pretty good. The characters are all very distinct. I don't know how many female protagonists there are. I think the ones that appear now are quite enough. If there are too many, it's easy for a female protagonist to not appear for a long time and readers won't remember it. I also feel that the male protagonist is still too weak. Only Asasi, after the emotional line of hope. If you can handle the situation well, you don't need a knife. In terms of combat power, I feel that the protagonist's combat power has been improved too little, but the villain and the official look very strong. I hope that the protagonist's combat power can be improved quickly in the future, and there will be no situation where he is pressured by official personnel or has a hard time fighting monsters. After all, the main plot is still an emotional drama [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very good. It's relatively easy to read. It doesn't feel frizzy. It has a slightly literate style. The plot has no careless changes and is more about daily emotions. The overall experience is really good. It can be seen that the author is very serious about writing. The main reason is that there is not much flow. I hope I can keep writing. The lack of flow is probably due to the number of words and the few comments. It's okay. There are too few storylines about the younger sister, and the portrayal is not natural enough, which seems a bit deliberate. No, why are there so few storylines about the younger sister?

The plot is very good and the emotional description is very delicate. It makes me feel that the heroine I am watching is a real person and the story is a real story. Maybe the performance of the book is not ideal at present, but now that I have read it, I can definitely say that this is a good book. I hope the author can give this beautiful story the ending it deserves. Come on [love] [love] [love]

It feels like the male protagonist is surrounded by all kinds of hair [covers face] pink hair, white hair, red hair, yellow hair. Is this a team building? I can't make a comment. It seems that the male protagonist has a natural affinity for Wen, which makes other people very clownish and care about Wen no matter what they do. Although it can be said to be the reason for suicide, the preference is real. This is very contradictory. The others were chasing, but Wen seemed to be being chased. You, Sister Wen, beat up the remaining areas severely.

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It's pretty good, a little toxic but acceptable. Even Su only appears once, and there are huge misunderstandings and toxic points, but the article is quite comfortable to read. I hope the author can keep writing and finally open a beautiful harem.