Returned from Summer Vacation and Became a Professional Alchemist?

A very good novel, with a slow pace, distinct characters, no AI, and no heroine yet. It is a very good novel, but the chapters are a bit short. The pace is too slow, something always comes up for the protagonist in the early stage, and the protagonist has too little time to develop and can do very little. Then the author always writes the perspectives of other supporting characters. It seems that the proportion of the protagonist is getting smaller and smaller.

Give me an update! ! ! ! ! ! The content is very good, but there is currently no heroine. If we wait to see the silent heroine, I will continue to pursue it [Adoration] I withdraw my comment. The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. For example, if this is a game, the protagonist is the main plot that has been delayed and branched out. A lot of ink is spent on other people. There are not many highlights for the protagonist, and there are not many highlights for the supporting characters. It is like writing a group portrait but not knowing how to write, just like a running account.

Interesting. But you have a lot of typos and missing characters. It's nice to be able to see it (leaving aside the misfortune of my childhood). The golden finger is a bit wide open, and sometimes it's a bit messy to read.

It's well written, very immersive, and easy to read, and it doesn't feel like AI. (It doesn't just refer to AI writing, but refers to the kind of writing that feels similar to AI writing and has the same flavor) If nothing else, it's at least a good level in Tomato.

It's well written, but updates are slow. I also hope that the main player will not be exposed to very advanced things so quickly. There will be more plots that you can deal with directly so that the main player can grow. Nowadays, I don't often come into contact with this throne or that throne. I feel that the throne is rubbish. The throne should have its own calculations instead of letting the main players participate. It is better to witness it.

It's very good-looking. I like the fact that the protagonist is a genius. It's not too big and it's more appropriate.

There are a lot of typos, but it's okay

It's a very interesting novel, but the title is a bit discouraging. I suggest you change it to another one.

It can be seen that it was not written by AI. After all, AI will not have so many typos and omissions. In other aspects, the writing is still very good, keep up the hard work. I hope I can check it, it would be better if there are fewer typos.

I haven't seen much, but I have an inexplicable sense of déjà vu [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] Just personal thoughts

Looking forward to the next plot

It's pretty good, but there are too many typos and they won't be corrected.

I've read a few chapters and there's nothing poisonous about it. 5 Stars to encourage me and read it when I reach 1 million words.

Is this revised content or original work? It's considered good food and grass

5 Stars, can you correct all the typos? [Thinking]

Judging from the current chapter, it is at least solid food and can be read.

It looks good, but it's too little. Give me 10,000 per day, Kou Ya

Good, good, very good, the title of the book can be changed, it's very good! The pacing at the end is slow and troublesome. The protagonist is still a newcomer. He helps this and that every day. There is no description of the growth of his strength. He is about to steal the dragon bone. It is really boring. Doing this and that every day.

Very nice, not bad, good cheers, author

This is so beautiful, I can't get enough of it [Adoration]

The characters in the novel are good, the story is vivid and very good-looking, and the worldview looks particularly stable from the perspective of the protagonist.

It's pretty good to watch, the plot is good, just don't ask for a female lead [Adoration]

Come on, read more of this book. I feel that this book is more spiritual. Although there are some poisonous points, they can be ignored.

The photo was pretty good, even a little out of place with Tomato. I thought it was a starting point. Please update more

This book is really good, it has a sense of déjà vu!

Come on! Ollie to Ollie to Ollie to Ollie to Ollie to

Not bad, why are there so few people?

To be honest, I really thought what I opened was the starting point [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Can the author correct his typos?

It looks good so far, not much to say.