Back from Summer Break, and Already a Professional Alchemist?

A very good novel, with a slow pace, distinct characters, no AI, and no heroine yet. It is a very good novel, but the chapters are a bit short. The pace is too slow, something always comes up for the protagonist in the early stage, and the protagonist has too little time to develop and can do very little. Then the author always writes the perspectives of other supporting characters. It seems that the proportion of the protagonist is getting smaller and smaller.

Give me an update! ! ! ! ! ! The content is very good, but there is currently no heroine. If we wait to see the silent heroine, I will continue to pursue it [Adoration] I withdraw my comment. The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. For example, if this is a game, the protagonist is the main plot that has been delayed and branched out. A lot of ink is spent on other people. There are not many highlights for the protagonist, and there are not many highlights for the supporting characters. It is like writing a group portrait but not knowing how to write, just like a running account.

Interesting. But you have a lot of typos and missing characters. It's nice to be able to see it (leaving aside the misfortune of my childhood). The golden finger is a bit wide open, and sometimes it's a bit messy to read.

It's well written, very immersive, and easy to read, and it doesn't feel like AI. (It doesn't just refer to AI writing, but refers to the kind of writing that feels similar to AI writing and has the same flavor) If nothing else, it's at least a good level in Tomato.

It's well written, but updates are slow. I also hope that the main player will not be exposed to very advanced things so quickly. There will be more plots that you can deal with directly so that the main player can grow. Nowadays, I don't often come into contact with this throne or that throne. I feel that the throne is rubbish. The throne should have its own calculations instead of letting the main players participate. It is better to witness it.

It's very good-looking. I like the fact that the protagonist is a genius. It's not too big and it's more appropriate.

There are a lot of typos, but it's okay

It can be seen that it was not written by AI. After all, AI will not have so many typos and omissions. In other aspects, the writing is still very good, keep up the hard work. I hope I can check it, it would be better if there are fewer typos.

I haven't seen much, but I have an inexplicable sense of déjà vu [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] Just personal thoughts

It's a very interesting novel, but the title is a bit discouraging. I suggest you change it to another one.