Passerby A, She Just Wants to Do the Task

To be honest, the reason why it is controversial is because the author's writing is too true. When I watched the first world, I didn't feel anything. It felt like it was just an assembly line. But the depiction of young people in the second world is too real. The second male lead is not a simple label or a tool, but with the blessing of being difficult to calm down, it will make people even more uncomfortable. Not to mention that the reason why the male protagonist can become the male protagonist is because a God's perspective gives him the trait of not betraying the female protagonist. However, because the author's portrayal of feudal society is very accurate, even if he only slightly opens the door, many readers can resonate and feel the suffocating, repressive, and unbiased imperial power. Love makes it live, disgust makes it want to die. Without the blessing of the male protagonist's identity, it would be difficult for the female protagonist to achieve happiness under normal circumstances. There have been too many in history. In this case, everyone prefers the second male protagonist, which is also a very human thing. But this is a novel, and the reason for some of the quarrels is that the author's writing is too good. However, I also hope that everyone can respect the author's creative content and ideas, not to mention that it is the author who has the final say in changing the male protagonist. The author must have his own writing logic, but it does not prevent readers who like the male protagonist from expressing their own ideas. If you can't accept it, you can abandon the article and find other tastes. Don't attack each other, let alone the author.

The author usually cannot see himself when he looks in the mirror! ! ! Why are there such delicate brushstrokes that are so logical and consistent with the development line of the character's behavior? (Except for the consummation of the marriage in the first chapter, which is a bit magical) The daily life is really super graphic. There are no words that insult the female, there is no female competition. It ensures that everyone is flesh and blood while also taking into account the xp work. The heroine's baby is super cute. Note that it is not as warm and cheerful as a "little sun", nor as gentle and gentle as a "little moon", but the reaction of the most living person. Who knows? There is no label-like behavioral logic, but it is a protagonist who conforms to an ordinary "person" who likes small money but is not a super rich man. How rare is it? All I can say is "God has no form" ah ah ah ah ah

It's nice to read, and the author writes it very well. In the first world, the author thought it might be too long, but I thought it was okay and didn't feel too long. The author's ending was a bit too hasty. Well, it doesn't matter if he continues writing. I didn't think it was too slow. If it didn't work, the author could change it to slow time travel. Because the composition and photos were so good, the sudden ending might be a bit hasty. I'm looking forward to the author's second world. I think the second world is very unique and the idea is very good. I've never seen anything like this. Come on, author! In fact, the author can put more words in each page. In this way, the chapters should not be too long, because the number of words in one page can be worth two chapters. I think the author has written it very well. Well, the emotions are also very delicate. The first world may be because the author feels that it takes up a bit too many chapters. So it ended in a hurry? But it actually doesn't matter if you keep writing. Because it's really good, I didn't feel like I had read it for a long time. Come on, the author. I really like it, so I'll write a comment first to encourage and encourage the author. Come on [laughing][laughing]

The writing is very good and I just read it for a while. It has the atmosphere of the era and it depicts the shyness of men and women of that era. The part where Zhou Yanchuan writes a letter is also very well described. His emotion of being anxious to hang up the phone and then regretting it is very delicately portrayed. Moreover, the protagonist is not a headless person who is liked by others. There is a foreshadowing and process. I am looking forward to the following stories. I hope the author can write better and better. The four stars are to stress the score because I heard that new books have to control the score. I will wait for the rest to read and then comment.

This book can be regarded as one of the most delicately written books I have ever read. I really like this slow, steady flow of emotions, and the characters are very well-written. And no one is brainless, everyone has brains and sense. Although there are only two worlds at present, both worlds particularly touched me: the first world is a period novel, which is particularly warm, with the interaction between mother-in-law and brother-in-law and Jiang Sui, and the changes in feelings towards Jiang Sui between the brother-in-law and her husband who are far away in the military camp... It really feels like home (⺣◡⺣)♡; and the second world The world is ancient literature, whether it is the true love of the heroine's family for Jiang Sui, the supreme friendship between An Yingxue and Jiang Sui, or Gu Mingxiu going to Hedong to perform meritorious service in order to be qualified to protect and marry Jiang Sui, Xiao Jiu changes himself for Jiang Sui, and learns how to love step by step... Everyone's love is very good. Including Jiang Sui herself is also very charming. She is not only beautiful, considerate, and gentle, but also keeps everyone warm like a little sun. Sure enough, the female protagonist of a really good female video will make readers fall in love with the female protagonist before the male protagonist (◠◠) The only shortcoming is that the ending of the first world is a bit too hasty. However, the author also explained that it was because his original label was fast travel, but he felt that the writing of the first world was too protracted for fast travel, so he ended it hastily, but now it has been changed to slow travel ~ So overall, this book is still very, very worth reading ~ That's why the rating is so low. Personally, I feel that it can be regarded as a Tomato 9.0 Or above.

The writing is very good. I particularly like the fact that the heroine is not a big heroine, a villain, or a delicate one. Because of the length, it is not like reading a fast-travel novel. The presence of the system has been very low since the beginning of the second world. I rarely read slow-travel, but this one is readable. It is quite long, but it is not a very streamlined one. The more emotional lines in the second world currently make me think of Allin. It is too difficult to make a choice. 1V1 is a bit regretful for any one. The baby heroine must be matched with the best of them all. I also like the fact that the female characters appearing in Nojojo are all very positive.

It looks good. I saw some controversy, that is to say, I prefer the second male protagonist to be the protagonist, but in fact, there is no need to argue, because what we mainly see is the second male protagonist. Compared with the male protagonist, we seem to cherish him more, but in terms of power, the male protagonist is better than the second male protagonist, and in the author's writing, the male protagonist cannot betray the female protagonist, he will only I love the heroine more and more, and the author loves his protagonist, so the author will not let him endure hardships, and what we are seeing now is the transitional stage. Oh, I really want to say, the writing is great, why is the writing so good, I like it, the author must not be just angry or sad, I just like reading this book, continue to write according to your own ideas, it is great Don't talk about my author because of a male protagonist. If you tell him to run away, what will I eat? [Crying] If you don't like it, just leave silently. Don't pick up the bowl and scold the cook, okay? [Crying]

The first story is pretty good, and the second story is good, with well-developed characters. Our relationship between best friends and family relationship are very good, especially the relationship between best friends. I think I can write a rebirth novel with An Yingxue as the protagonist (not for revenge, but with saving my best friends as the main line). It's the character Lin Zhiyan that I didn't fully understand. I thought he was the villain, but he didn't appear later. I haven't watched the third world, so I won't make any comments. These four points are mainly for the story of the second world [you taste it carefully]

I have finished reading the first story now. It is very attractive, especially the emotional scenes. The descriptions are very touching. I like the step-by-step plot. I can't say much about the writing style. I can feel the author's delicate writing style. I believe it will get better and better as the writing continues. Come on! ! !

The author's cover is so beautiful that I was drawn in by the cover. The content of the article is also very logical and the plot is substantial.

I have been following updates in the early stage and I have always liked this book. The development is a bit slow and delayed, but overall it is not bad. The characters and logic are quite good. Although I don't know why the previous paragraphs were deleted, I wish the author better and better writing.

Super pretty! The friendship lines, love lines, and family lines are all very well written! And I feel like there are no villains, I like ordinary daily life~ Looking forward to the next update The second world is not over yet, it is tied... But please give me an OE, please update the lines of the crown prince and the crown prince again qwq, it is good to be with anyone, but I feel that there will be regrets, I look forward to a big update

Ah ah ah, come on, ah, faster and faster. The first world is really written very well. Hey, look forward to it. I would like to ask if the male protagonist of the second world is the prince. . I'm really looking forward to what happens next. Hehe, it's really nice.

The writing is quite good. The ancient chapters are better than those written in the past. The heroine is a complete piece of cake. I like it very much. This kind of slow travel will give me a stronger sense of immersion.

It's so good. The plot logic is very clear. Each character's behavior is very reasonable and makes people understand why they do what they do. The new book is great.

A very delicious book

Like the second world [shy]

[Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Cherish the flowers, pity the flowers, love the flowers and protect the flowers

As soon as I use the AI ​​character design, it flies away

Boss, what did you add in the article🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

I wrote about two worlds, both 1 v1.

I stayed up all night to read it. It was so well written that I cried when I read it. Can't both girls accept it? It's so sad. I want to see the author suddenly update a hundred chapters and it scares me.

The second world is super beautiful, the author greatly requests updates [crying]

The second ancient essay is particularly beautiful, and the author can write a separate book.

The author writes very delicately. I recommend everyone to read it.

Very nice, very nice.

I really like the heroine's character, she's so cute! [Please update]

A very good book, the second world is very hilarious, everyone is nice😘Everyone has their own personality charm

It's beautiful, the emotions are delicate, and the heroine's personality is so cute

It's very interesting, especially the male protagonist in the second world. His married life is light and warm.