In the Eighteen Years of Zangfeng, He Once Suppressed All the Geniuses

The writing is very good, and the character of the protagonist is very comfortable to watch. Don't imitate those novels that portray the male protagonist as a pervert and a pig. However, if you want to retain readers, you can consider letting the female protagonist appear earlier. The female protagonist should also be shaped according to the level of the male protagonist. Don't make the female protagonist an ordinary genius or a vassal of the male protagonist.

The author has a lot of ink and has a lot to say. He handles the characters well, and the multiple geniuses are well contrasted. The words are also very flavorful. It can be seen that he has literary skills. It's a pity that there are too many things to say, which makes it cumbersome. Many descriptions are different, but the meaning is the same. The performance of Tianjiao appears one after another, and there are many reactions but there are repetitions. Some can be deleted. Show more of their personality, such as unwillingness to admit defeat or personal experiences. Nowadays, there are many geniuses, but they only know that they are geniuses. In the end, they are just foils, lacking the rich side of the side characters, as if the world is for Gu Changyuan's script. However, according to Gu Changyuan's way, he must read countless people and write a few unforgettable characters. It may be as important as always paving the way for Gu Changyuan's performance. For example, if a very familiar character dies in battle, such as Qin Lie, the character's personality and emotions will be strong and alive. I don't dare to comment too much, it's really well written.

I dug it by accident and tied it in one go! Let me talk about my feelings first. The male protagonist is different from the fantasy immortal cultivators I have seen in the past. He looks bland, but it does not make people feel boring. I just feel quiet. You can breathe with him and look at the mountains together, and your heart will calm down. The author does not write about how evil he is in cultivation and how gorgeous he is. Peers, only about his soul, the growth of his consciousness and his physique are gradually at the same frequency. It may be a bit boring for those book friends who like to watch slaps in the face or forceful characters, but the new genre is also worth reading. It is still young in the early stage and there is no clear emotional line, but the feeling will be very good. I hope you continue to work hard! ! The content itself is written very rigorously and meticulously, and the world view is expanded bit by bit, and I am growing up with Chang Yuan, like I am exploring a map, which is very interesting! There are no big cliche disputes, everyone is a genius, competing with each other and pushing each other to make progress! Chang Yuan is not a standout, nor does he stand out from the crowd, but this era and the world chose him. He is neither arrogant nor impetuous, nor resentful nor suspicious. Chang Yuan has always walked steadily. The Gu family is also very good. They did not raise him to waste or pamper him. They watched him and protected him. They watched him take steps and which direction he went, and then moved his steps. He did not pretend to be smart. The really good atmosphere was Zhang Yuan's greatest confidence and support. Also, I really like Zhiwei's mother and Xiao Qingge! Cute! Several brothers and sisters of Zhang Yuan's generation and several geniuses of the same generation from other families are also very cute and interesting! Everyone has interesting souls! I want to continue to watch them grow! Come on, boss! ! ! !

The protagonist is of high character, but the writing is not overly exaggerated. There is no vilification or stupidity of the supporting characters. The people currently appearing are all very intelligent. The flow of writing is very comfortable. It's just that the first point of conflict fell a little flat. But it doesn't matter. It's looking good so far. I don't know if it's a harem story. At present, it seems that both my cousin and Luo Jinghuang have a crush on the protagonist.

It's not the kind where our imperial clan has a peerless emperor who is so talented and arrogant, but the kind of bland one where he is indeed very powerful, but so plain that you don't think he is very powerful, but you know that he is the one who is destined to die. The writing is really novel and better than those mindless cool articles.

Overall, I feel like this book is quite good now. The text has a strong sense of pictures, and many scenes can easily form pictures in my mind (I am a book listener, and I read less and listen more), especially some big scenes, character appearances and atmosphere foreshadowing, and there is a sense of immersion. When listening to the book, it doesn't feel dry, but you can follow the plot, which I think is a plus. However, some passages in the book are not completely without problems. There are some repetitive descriptions in some places, or the details can be polished. But overall, the flaws outweigh the advantages. The rhythm of the plot, the momentum of the characters, and the development of the world view are all strong. It is a type of book that gets better and better the more you listen to it. According to Tomato, it is still a good book. I hope that the author can continue to optimize the details, reduce some repetitive expressions, and continue to write the characters and plot solidly. I think this book is still worth pursuing. [Sending Hearts]

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

Very good. I also hope that the heroine will be a new and attractive character that people like. At the same time, I also hope that it will continue to be good-looking. Big boost for the author.

Light, everything is light. This kind of writing style is generally difficult and tends to be slow and steady. It is suitable for describing characters and plots in detail to win. There is still too much content missing, and the description is too bland and not profound. It may be necessary to strengthen the description of group portraits and details, but it needs to be avoided from being written into a running account. In addition, I have a small suggestion. The audience for this article so far should not be suitable for having an affair or having a harem. Is it possible to refine the protagonist's personality, enhance his personal charm, and attract die-hard fans?

It's really super pretty! ! ! It's really different from any book I've read before! ! The characters are created very well, and although the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not many yet, they are really well written! It just felt very comfortable and after the male lead came out, he kept thinking about the female lead! ! I would like to see the mountains and rivers of Wuzhou with her! ! I really can't do it anymore! So pretty! ! I have read so many books and am writing a book review for the first time.

It's clear and quiet, the plot doesn't drag out, and the protagonist's character design is okay. It's a bit refreshing but not completely brainless. However, the ink is very heavy and there are many repeated descriptions. It feels like AI, which makes me feel weird.

It took me a day and a half to finish this book. The more you read, the more addictive you become. He really shows the scene where the golden world and the geniuses appear together, because when the stars of mankind shine, it will never be a single star, and our protagonist Gu Changyuan happens to be the most shining one among them. He has a very, stunning appearance. When he was born, he had many strange phenomena, which shows that his talent is extraordinary. Later, from one to 18 years old, his family and He escorted him and cultivated him to have a calm and calm character. He is like jade in strangers and has an unparalleled son in the world. However, at an age like 18, one should be young and frivolous. Being calm and calm does not mean that he will not have the pride of a teenager. Therefore, in more than 130 chapters, it is shown that he also has the pride in his heart. He crushes everyone and appears in the nine palaces. I have to say, it is a bit refreshing. Talking about the group portrait of the geniuses, I think the portrayal of the group portrait is pretty good. Young Master Pixiu's character belongs to the atmosphere group. Every time I see his shameless side, I laugh a little. Besides, what is Young Master Xuanyang doing? I kind of forgot that he is also one of the stars, but it is hard not to be proud of a genius. This can be seen in the evaluation of everyone in The Source. He has great contempt for people who are not as talented as him. He is indeed very talented, and is stronger than most of the other people in the current protagonist group. When he ascended the stage, two sections away from the protagonist, his Taoist heart was a bit broken. In fact, being broken is good, and it can make him more powerful. He recognizes himself, but he fails to truly face himself. Instead, he keeps making excuses for himself. Maybe for him, and for a genius like him, failure is difficult to accept, so I still feel a little sorry for him. He can obviously have a better future, but there are inevitably positive and negative characters in a work. I think the author's portrayal of the conflict and psychology of the two is okay. Then I can see that the world view that the author wants to write about in the whole article will be very big, first the first six realms, and then the starry sky world mentioned, or the starry sky continent. In the previous article, when the male protagonist was reading some of the history of the family, it was briefly foreshadowed, so I am also looking forward to the development of the later chapters. I hope it will not collapse. The above are all positive reviews Now there is a shortcoming, and I believe this is also mentioned by many readers, that is, some sentences are too repetitive and wordy. Although such a repeated sentence can save us from looking for it when we forget, but it appears too many times and it really has a bad impression. Secondly, the author has marked in advance that this article is about a single female protagonist, so I hope he will not pretend to be a harem, because there has been a certain description of Luo Jinghuang and Yue Zhaohan. In the latest chapter, our male protagonist Nine Palaces appear together, which is amazing. The author also described that it left an indelible impression on these two girls, because they did meet a special one when they were young. People who are not powerful will indeed have some special feelings, some admiration and admiration. This is something that strong people will have. I also understand that since this is the golden age, the genius will definitely not be a pure boy. There will always be some outstanding women among them. So, the description of girls is definitely inevitable. I just hope the author will not draw these on the emotional line, because there are many male stories. It is inevitable that the male protagonist will have many confidantes. I don't like this very much. Maybe it's because I personally can't accept it. The author said in advance that this is a single female protagonist, so I hope this girl is also a stunningly talented person, because excellent people will attract each other. It's not that the first two girls are not excellent, but the author mentioned that these two are not female protagonists, like I don't really like the heroine's character to be cold or aloof, because it's very common. I personally like it. It can be a little lively and cute, and at the same time, it's also very sensible. This is my personal fantasy. I hope the author can write the emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist beautifully, not too abrupt, because originally this tattoo is more suitable for non-CP, but if there is an emotional line, it must be written well. This is the first time I have posted such a long comment since I read the novel, so I also hope that the author can feel the readers' expectations and support for you, and keep writing well [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

Very beautiful! ! ! The protagonist feels bland, but the strong point is just the rhythm of being happy and done. As for the big world view, I feel that the author wants to write a long story with more foreshadowing and the plots of other characters will also be written very clearly (it feels like I want to write out the stories of other characters as much as possible. The supporting characters are not only supporting characters but also the protagonists of their own lives). There is no big problem with the overall plot. But the main reason is that there are too many repetitions (there are almost the same words many times, which is very monotonous, and sometimes different words have the same meaning). The author can pay attention to this aspect! ! ! Otherwise, the viewing experience is not very good and some may abandon the article after just reading a few chapters. Insertion: In fact, I don't think it's suitable to have a female protagonist, but when I saw the author said that there will be one, I still look forward to it. I hope it will be super strong and cool, and there will be an exception for the male protagonist, hahaha. Don't be lively and talkative! ! !

It's pretty good. The characters are full-bodied and all aspects of their personalities are quite to my liking. I've read so many fantasy novels, and this one seems to be no weaker than those long-famous masterpieces! Why is it so small? When should I keep up with the update [face covering], I hate catching up on the update and want to read it all in one go. Big boost, author✊, please update more chapters every day!

A book that perfectly suits my heart. It has images, stories, growth, humanity, struggle, and warmth... As for good or bad, everyone's standards are different, but for me this is a rare good book. So if there are new friends who encounter it, please go to the book and experience it in person. Other people's comments can be used as a reference (of course, for you, the words I am writing now are also "other people's comments"), but they are not our personal feelings. I hope you can take a look before deciding whether to stay or not. As mentioned above, I really think this is a rare and good book, so it should be seen by more people. This is also my true thought when writing these words. I also want to thank the author for taking me into such a book world [please update]

I rarely write book reviews, but this book is really good! I accidentally discovered it by accident. After reading the first few chapters, I was left with it successfully. The male protagonist was really cute when he was a child❤️. The plot rhythm of the whole book is well controlled. The male protagonist has always followed his own path, neither arrogant nor impetuous. He is not alone along the way. He has relatives, friends, and lovers. The atmosphere is very good. The supporting characters also have their own shining points and distinct personalities. In short, it is worth recommending!

The female protagonist Fan Xingli is three levels higher than the male protagonist. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is very good, the water flows smoothly and is very comfortable.

I'm halfway through this book. The pace is very good and it's very comfortable to read. Just don't have any cliche poisonous points or plot. It's a good book. Don't let it end badly. If you keep writing it, it will become popular. The author should keep working hard, believe in yourself, don't run away and update it carefully, the ratings will get better.

Except for the fact that the update is a bit slow and I need a book, everything else is fine. Unlike other cool articles that are just fun all the way to the end, killing, killing, killing, killing, this one is fun when it should be fun, but relatively dull when it shouldn't be. Now it feels like a roller coaster ride, not all the way, ups and downs, with some stable stages in the middle to allow people to adapt and relieve themselves. After the relief, they will continue to feel refreshed and continue to feel relieved. I'm not talking about the ones that are always fun, I can't say that, but I'm just saying that watching too many of them will give people a sense of fatigue. And if you read too many of those kinds of books, you will find that other books are boring and cannot satisfy you. If you cannot satisfy yourself, you will not be able to read other books.

I give you the most direct, the most naked, the harshest, the sharpest, the most unadorned, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least tortuous, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the neatest, the most straightforward, the most decisive, and the least inked, The least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most poignant, the least merciless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about face, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct, the most direct to the core, the most Tearing away the appearance, the least pretense, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least redundant, the least The words that are the least hollow, the least roundabout, the least detour, the least grindy, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, and the least pretentious are words that tell you: it's huge and beautiful. I just realized that after watching it for so long, I didn't get a good score, so I'm going to make up for it now.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist has a light personality and is stable in everything he encounters. But the most important thing is the female protagonist. She is simply my favorite novel. The female protagonist has a cold and beautiful personality. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist like it. They love it so much [Adore][Adore][Adore]

The writing is very good, but I don't know if it is a personal problem. I personally think that the author often wants to highlight the theme. The problem is that he highlights it too obviously and deliberately, which gives people a very deliberate feeling. (Don't spray if you don't like it)

This book has a grand layout and is full of traditional fantasy flavor. There's a lot of foreshadowing, it's super cool, can't wait for the update! So pretty! Worth recommending!

Not bad, not the kind that only knows how to exaggerate, it has some connotation. The protagonist was quite lovable when he was a child, but he didn't seem to know that he was very strong. When he grows up, he will probably be jealous of other geniuses like Tiantian Versailles.

Color! Remember to write a novel when you can't sleep. Remember to write a novel when you feel uncomfortable. Remember to write a novel when you encounter bottlenecks. Remember to write a novel when you are hungry, Hope everyone knows.

It does feel pretty good, at least for now, it's okay, and it's also a kind of emotional drama where the protagonist and the villain give me a new kind of kiss. Alas, it's still good, but it's a bit short. I still want to raise her as a heroine. Can I recommend her mother's position? It's the one named Yue. I only want this one to be the heroine, is that okay? I want to see two danren.

I really like to read career stories without CP, whether it is a big female protagonist or a big male protagonist. This story is said to have a single female protagonist. I am also willing to read it. One is because the appearance is very late, and the other is because the early foreshadowing makes me feel that the male protagonist is a weak person. I have not seen the female protagonist appear, but in the early stage I think it is watchable and the writing is very good. I will comment again when I see the female protagonist appear.

🉑, It looks good, and as for the emotional line, I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very well done.

The structure is clear, the content is detailed, and the writing is excellent. This is an excellent book both in terms of the depth of content and the fun of reading. It's been a long time since I've read such a heartfelt book, and it has been added to the annual recommended book list!

The author's writing style is profound and his words are moral. It is rare to find a good book.