Shenhao System: I Gained the Top Spot on the Group Broadcast by Eating Melons

It's a pity to throw away tasteless food Advantages: The rhythm and concept are very good. It does not feel like a nouveau riche, but makes people understand the charm of wealth and the heroine's "sense of deservingness". The characters are deeply and step-by-step, and each has their own story that is very realistic. Disadvantages: Some plots are not ups and downs but are overly complicated. Eg: In order to portray the heroine's rationality and calmness, the online and offline boundaries are clearly defined, but a plot is arranged where Zhou Qiyue discovers the heroine's online identity. He was attracted by the heroine's ideas and experiences and started to feel frightened again. I read part of it and hope the author can improve it so that more people can stay.

It was very disturbing and not very satisfying. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a story about a happy melon-eating god. However, the whole text was full of calculations. The writing was very close, real and realistic, but it was different from the introduction. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a relaxing melon-eating story. It can be said that I was deceived.

I was actually very worried when I saw it, Zhao Zhao was really a bit too pitiful. I know that Zhao Zhao's pity has nothing to do with Xue Li, but I still feel very sad. Xue Li was written so smoothly. She is ignorant but is lucky enough to meet the heroine, who guides her step by step to move forward and get better. Without comparison, there is no harm. You can't say that Zhao Zhao is unlucky, because she actually has many sisters and brothers who are very good to her, but I still feel sad and aggrieved for her. I hope the author can treat her better in the future. After reading all of them, I got even more heartbroken [crazy] Zhao Zhao has never done anything bad, why do you treat her like this? The description of Xue Li's confusion and the heroine's disregard in the article are too condescending. It made me feel so uncomfortable when I read it [Crying]

It's okay, but it's just not exciting enough. I feel that the real-life male characters are not very likable, mainly because I don't like to watch offline real-life plots in Shenhao's live broadcasts, and the description of the live broadcast ecology is too detailed. Maybe it's because the heroine will open her own live broadcast company later, which is understandable. The core shortcoming is that the pace is too slow and gentle. The advantage is that the author's writing style is quite good, not a noob or embarrassing. I have been following the update for a few more days, and it is still full of stars. It is one of the few great novels in Tomato that I can read. The author has a positive outlook on life, does not insult women, and has no stereotypes about female anchors. It is quite good. I hope that the female protagonist will reward more anchors in the future.

The writing is quite good, but it may not meet 🍅many people's definition of cool writing: easy to understand, fast-paced, and open to the public. This may be the reason why this book is not rated highly. But overall, the author's description of the live broadcast circle is good, and the rhythm of the live broadcast is also good. It is indeed interspersed with a lot of the heroine's extended thoughts and understanding of life after she gets rich. Some parts are indeed a bit too much, which may be the reason why most people give negative reviews. Because many people read Shenhao's novels to escape reality, and too many heavy realistic topics will make readers feel depressed. However, the article belongs to the author, and it is up to the author to decide how to take the main line! ! Overall, Orange is great! ! I hope there will be lights throughout the night and for the rest of my life!

It's very well written. I read it in one sitting. I hope there will be more updates. Seeing that many people in the comment area are paying attention (distressed) to Chao Chao on the group broadcast, I am a little confused. No matter where you stand, you can't change her mentality. From a consumer's point of view, from an outsider's point of view, she is not dedicated and has poor maintenance of fans. She only wants to be in the C position forever. If she can't get the C position, she will collapse. When she collapses, she will be a stressed fan. In the end, she will continue to offload the responsibility. If she does not change her mentality, she will not be able to face the camera and face reality. This is not the heroine stepping on and supporting him, the heroine just speeds up the process. Xue Li was lucky. She was seen by the heroine and happened to become a research subject, so she walked faster and was not marginalized for too long. This was her luck.

Although the article is slow to gain popularity, the settings and angles are very novel, and the writing is also very good. Don't be discouraged, the author. The low scores in book reviews now are mainly because people want to read some fast-paced and intensive articles when reading Shenhaoshuang's articles, and the big data does not match the readers suitable for this article. However, it does not mean that the author is not good at writing. Just follow your own pace.

The character creation is indeed very three-dimensional, but the plot progress is very slow, and there are not many melons to eat, and the melons are not revealed. I keep pulling and pulling, and it is a bit unsatisfactory to watch. It is a great novel, but there is basically no sense of excitement. I hope it can be interesting and deep. Otherwise, it will always be very depressing and the plot is average. But the character setting and the performance of the creation are really a plus.

The writing is good, the author is very clever in characterization, the plot is interesting and the rhythm is also very reasonable. There is one thing, the language is very AI. I don't mind writing a book in AI, but the writing is very long-winded and looks very boring. She cried, but it was not sad and so on. It is not the parallelism, the superfluous explanations and narrations, which will make people tired and make the readers look like fools. Although the novel does not need to be written as literature for people to appreciate it carefully, it does not need to be written too thoroughly or too hard. But the book overall is still okay. Even with minor flaws like this, it's worth watching. I hope the author can improve it, because your grasp of the plot and character creation are really good. This is the soul of the novel.

It's good-looking, and the characters in the article are very well-rounded and diverse. The heroine is not just someone who spends money to have fun, but is very strategic and drives many things behind the scenes. Moreover, there are many places in the article where introspection and reflection are often carried out, and the author outputs some opinions. In short, it is good-looking!

After reading the latest chapter, I compared it with my fourth brother. So far, I feel that it is in my taste. It is obvious that it is not one of those AI articles. The rating is a bit low. I give it a five-star support. If the subsequent article is bad, the rating will be revised.

Apart from irregular updates, there are no other problems. Who says Shenhao can only spend money on others, but can't use money to improve himself? Every baby girl should have her own career, be like the old lady! ! !

The author has ideas, but the writing style and rhythm need to be more controlled. The self-improvement part is really very human-machine, and the sense of preaching is a bit strong, but it is still recommended. You can watch [Adoration], come on, teacher.

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Tied, so far it looks good, it's not AI writing, it's full of life. The process of gradually improving wealth, quality of life, influence, etc. Is written in a substantial and attractive way. I hope the author can maintain this pace and slowly improve the protagonist to a top rich man with quality.

It looks good, come on. I don't know much about the live broadcast industry. I used to open Shenhao Wen and see all kinds of jokes and hard brushes, and I felt that it was exaggerated and unrealistic and I couldn't stand it. The perspective of this book is very different, and I can see the author's thinking. Haha, let me talk about my feelings about the characters. I feel that the protagonist has a stable core. I like this kind of control and calmness. As for the male characters, I feel that the younger brother is average, probably because the attitude of the protagonist affects the readers' senses. The puppy is very cute, and now it is just cute. Although Cen has not been written much, he is indeed the most attractive one so far, probably because the conditions are the best (dog head). These are just small embellishments, so I don't even remember the names (sweat) Then Xue Li, who has more ink, is very cute. I don't know how far she can grow. Chao Chao Xiao Yu and Qing etc. Look a little emotional... But I feel that the images of these anchors are not as distinct as those of the eldest sisters on the list. Yes, the ones I remember are all the eldest sisters. The eldest brother remembers Ting Yu Lou because he just read this chapter... Come on, please update more. Why did I open such a shallow pit? Hold your head...

This is the first time I have read a Shenhao novel from this angle. I feel it is very innovative. The character descriptions are very good and delicate. The handling of some characters is also very comfortable to watch. It is different from the traditional cool novels that are just for the sake of being happy. When I read the latest chapter, there is no traditional slap-in-the-face literature. It is a slow-paced and comfortable novel. I am not very good at judging the quality of the writing. I can only say that I can read it. I hope that the future updates will become better and better.

It's not like playing pk in a dark way. It seems to be a kind of thing. After the system is established, the protagonist raises himself and his girlfriend. It is essentially a redemption for his own growth. As for the love line, he may have a few puppies. I don't know how it will develop in the future. The protagonist is a very rational person.

There are only 79 chapters of 500,000 words. You are still too honest, the author, and successfully deceived me. I thought there were at least 200 chapters before I came in to read it. I love the detailed narrative and the heroine's character, and I hope Zhao Ning can grow better (•́⌄•́๑)૭✧I also hope there won't be a break in updates!

My wife's writing is very good, very real, and more realistic, not exaggerated, and very logical, detailed and very beautiful. Come on, madam! ! Keep writing [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. I've always wanted to read this kind of slowly developing novel. The heroine's character is well created, and the author's writing style is quite smooth and won't make people feel embarrassed. The article is a bit short, so I read it in one go. After reading it, I still felt reluctant to click on the author's homepage to see if there were any similar articles. It turned out that the author had updated two articles at the same time, which was amazing. Also, why do you feel that so few people read this article? Everyone who likes this kind of writing should read it!

Fortunately, I read the article first and then the book review, otherwise I would have clicked x when I saw the comment section. I don't understand why the author is thoughtful and thoughtful, and the protagonist has grown up, instead of just buying, buying, buying, and having fun, but the article is criticized for being too AI-heavy. First of all, there must be this type of powerful article to be successful! Each updated chapter is very long, and I am very satisfied with it. I look forward to seeing the growth of Cheng Zhaoning, Xueli, and Chaochao. I also hope that the author will not be affected by the book reviews and writes well!

In fact, it is a very good-looking novel. The only drawback is that the pace is a bit slow. Shirley is the main character who has appeared so far. The details are quite good, including some forums and the like. The writing is also very real. I hope the author can keep writing and stick to his own ideas. It would be better if the pace could be faster.

The one I like better in Shenhao's novels is not a big show, but light and not too outrageous. The heroine is good at calculations and knows how to get the best effect. It's a bit pretentious. This kind of feeling is quite exciting to me. It's more realistic and systematic than the one that requires tens of millions of rewards at the beginning, but the sense of presence is not high. It's more about the melon-eating forum and the heroine's money-making method, like an investment feeling.

I feel very sorry for Chao Chao, and the relationship between Chao Chao and Mu Mu is even more touching than the heroine holding up Little Transparent.

I've struck gold. I finally found another article (live broadcast) that is well-written, in-depth and thoughtful, instead of the other nouveau riche-style articles about throwing money and looking for men. It's a very refined article that's worth reading. It would be better if the author was more diligent in updating it.

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This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't stop in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.

Can you please stop updating? It's very beautiful.

I don't know why the score is so low. I think this book is already up to par with Lujiang's signing level.