The Immortal Path of a Commoner-Born Girl

What does this book say? Overall, it is a relatively good-looking novel. The good-lookingness is reflected in the character of the heroine. Along the way, she has paved the way for herself since she was born. She has experienced a lot. In the latest chapter, she finally gained freedom. But I always felt weird while watching it. In the few clips that impressed me, the first sentence "This is not a genius, but a monster" appeared at least four or five times, and then there was another sentence "She doesn't know and doesn't want to know" that also appeared countless times. One thing happened. When the heroine was 6 years old, she wrote four famous quotes and spread them to her family. She wrote about the reactions of her father and aunt. She felt so lacking. The reactions of the two people were exactly the same. They were both silent and didn't know what to say. The article is basically the psychological description and thinking of the heroine, and there is basically no dialogue between characters and plots. The plot of the story is uneventful. The most interesting part is when the heroine makes friends with a foreign aristocratic lady, and then uses her family's connections and knowledge to start studying crazily to enrich herself, and then becomes famous at the poetry festival. These plots are a little more interesting, but the rest are basically a mediocre line. Will it be more thrilling after seeing the plot of the world of immortality? At least I will have more interactions with people. Holy shit, I was trying to protect the sisters. Two of the heroine's senior brothers were a pair. I was a little caught off guard.

In fact, the subject matter is interesting, but the uncomfortable thing is that the author is too long-winded and procrastinating. In some places, she has to write some clichés many times... She has to fight for it all by herself every time, which is very long-winded. I also understand that the author wants to write about the heroine's difficult planning alone, especially walking on thin ice, but sometimes it is better not to be so repetitive and concise and leave blank space. Come on, author! Seeing that today the heroine is finally preparing to go to the world of immortality, I hope that the author's setting of water spirit root is not the cauldron constitution [Please update] [Please update] [Please update]

The subject matter is good, I suggest the author write more in his own words. The overall AI flavor is too strong, which greatly affects reading, which is a pity.

The writing is superb. Under the feudal system, the protagonist maintains goodwill towards women in his planning. In the end, when he left the mortal world, all the money and land deeds were given to the man, and the birth certificate was given to the woman. I really don't understand, and entering the world of cultivation is the practice of five senior brothers and a younger junior sister. Now that I see this, I feel stinky, and the same is true in words. There are only senior brothers and no senior sisters.

The story that touches me the most now is the story after entering the world of immortality. Although every step is planned in the mortal world, people who offend the heroine are treated with kindness in return. They pay the rewards they should get but only receive charity from the superiors. It is very frustrating and too pale as a chrysanthemum. Now I can still understand that it is because my heart is not here and I have no choice but to be controlled by others. When it comes to the environment of the immortal world, strength is respected. Even if I am still at the bottom of the food chain when I first enter the immortal world, there will always be a day when I stand up and make the decision. I hope to make the heroine feel more comfortable. If she has a grudge, it is not easy to provoke her and she dare not provoke her. Anyone can plot against the heroine at no cost, so what's the point of mixing it up with so much corruption?

The heroine is very calm and the plot is very logical. It just feels a bit boring overall. There are too few dialogue descriptions. It feels like everyone is watching from a third perspective, like watching a documentary. I hope it can be more lively. Author update soon

The rhythm is relatively slow, but it doesn't have the feeling of being in a piecemeal routine. The subject matter is also very novel. The heroine's design seems to be okay so far. She doesn't abuse women and doesn't have a jealous female counterpart. The heroine is a bit indifferent, trying to protect herself without anyone's help. The more obvious shortcoming is that there are often large sections of repeated descriptions. As long as a certain scene reappears, it will be repeated again, which is quite uncomfortable for me.

First of all, I really want to ask a question, is the author really a male? Because the character Yunlan is really well written. OK, here are the reasons why I gave this book five stars: 1. The author's writing style is rigorous and he is good at writing down details. It can be seen that he has some experience as a foundation. These can all be seen from the things that the character Cui Yunlan handles, her thinking and context. After watching it, I believe that no one will not be moved by the protagonist's hard and rigorous way of thinking, because it's scary to think about it hahaha. 2. The rhythm is very good. It can be seen that the outline is really good! (Dooling with envy) The protagonist's struggle in the mortal world is one after another, and it feels very satisfying to implement it step by step, and it really feels like she is finding a way for the rest of her life. The most exciting part is the part about whether the immortal will come as promised. Even if the immortal doesn't come, she can go and find it herself. If the immortal comes, her hard work in the past few years will be able to lift her up steadily. Moreover, she increased the favorability of Master Yin, which was worth every penny, one for four! Super good idea! Not only did it solve the problem of the prince's spying and marrying, but it also solved the problem that she could withdraw from the palace before the immortal came, and she could also use Master Yin's method to test her spiritual roots when he came. Very good! I really like this feeling of taking one step and seeing three steps! 3. The protagonist's character and behavior are very palatable! He has a lot of energy! Keep your feet on the ground, stay calm in the face of danger, be well prepared, be self-disciplined and cautious, and use peace to turn enemies away. Her words and deeds tell us that the most important thing is to keep your mouth shut and work hard. Having real skills is the most important thing, so she can stay calm in times of crisis. Oh, her self-discipline is incredible. Failure to succeed is simply impossible. Of course, if I really saw such a person in reality, would I think she was a god? Being able to completely overcome human laziness without slacking off at all, I really feel that I can be called a god. The most important thing is that she resolved her subtle hostility towards Cui Yunyao. What she practiced was that a gentleman should judge his deeds regardless of his heart, and she still helped Cui Yunyao. Oh, not just a handful, but a lifetime. It is very different from many ancient versions of novels. When seeing the brainless female partner showing hostility, the heroine's first thought was how to kill the female partner, instead of thinking that multiple friends are stronger than multiple enemies. It is really novel. That's why I wanted to ask if the author is really a man? Here are my picks and personal preferences: 1. The traces of god-making on the protagonist's body are too heavy. Although the knife and gunpowder have a step-by-step record, it is still too dangerous. The wood is as good as the forest wind and will be destroyed. The main reason is that she is too young. Although it is due to the age limit for women in ancient times, it is still too unusual to become a female official at the age of 8. 2. The protagonist's psychological activities are too restrained and indifferent, and his emotional rendering power is insufficient. 3. The other characters are a bit stereotyped, but there is no deep memory point, especially the five senior brothers. It's just that I'm all thinking about myself, and I'm forced to get together because of hatred and urgent tasks. I don't have time to get along with each other on a daily basis. I'm in a hurry. You have to know that relationships are born out of love. I feel a bit uncomfortable to adapt to it. The pace is too fast. 4. Because the article is more realistic, when you are in the mortal world, the unreasonable things will become more and more prominent, making people unable to help but jump out. This may be because the fusion of realism and romanticism is not good enough.

The heroine Cui Yunlan was born in the Southern and Northern Dynasties (partly fictional). Step by step, he understood the sorrow of women of that era and provided help. He is a noble person to those around him and his own guide. Knowing what you want (freedom + cultivating immortality), and working hard (learning knowledge + practicing martial arts + meditation), every step will be difficult and steady. An unknown concubine from a side branch → The well-behaved and precocious daughter of the head of the family → The daughter of the Cui family who is famous in Yecheng → The ceremonial female official who shines on the lintel (left the Cui family) → The genius of cultivating immortals Heat slowly.

The writing is so good. The heroine is neither humble nor arrogant. She moves steadily towards her goal in a difficult environment step by step. Very inspiring to read! The author's writing style is good. There are many metaphors in the first one or two chapters. My wild boar couldn't eat the fine chaff and almost ran away. The writing becomes better and better and more stable and organized in the following chapters. In particular, the protagonist's talent appears reasonable and talented with the author's writing style. The plot starts to get interesting as the heroine develops, I look forward to the following chapters!!!