Zero Zone: Greed? Then Be Punished!

Overall, it's okay, but some plots are a bit inexplicable, and the protagonist is a bit of an idiot. I hope the author will continue to hone his writing skills.

I have an assignment to write a book review myself, so I will write one. This book is a yandere novel, but yandere is slowly developed through various events and the author's subjective thoughts. Then there is the preference for interaction with the female characters from the Zero Zone. The battle plot is a lubricant. In addition, regarding the protagonist's combat power setting, the more his own energy in the body, the stronger he is, and the more the original energy is distributed, the weaker the protagonist will be. There is also the fact that the etheric energy in the Zero World will corrode the protagonist's body. If it can be refined slowly, it will be fine. However, absorbing a large amount of etheric energy at once during battle or because of certain things will cause emotional and physical problems. As for yandere and accepting girls, because I have to write about yandere, if I accept too many girls too early or too many, the author may not be able to control it. Also, the protagonist has to die several times. The multi-threading in the title of my novel refers to different choices after being reborn at the same time. Of course, the yandere female character will gain memories and emotions in some form. In short, the yandere fight will only happen at the end, so the author should try his best to write it well. There is a problem, because I wrote a general outline, but I did not write down the specific chapter details, which means that I may forget some of the pitfalls I dug, or I may find that I no longer need them after writing them. This will happen, and the emotional progress of the female character may be grasped too quickly. The other thing is the interaction between the protagonist and the female character. Maybe the protagonist is more passive. Because the initial liking level is somewhat different from other characters, such as Miss Ya, Xiaoguang, Vivian, um, and Master Yi. That should be enough for a hundred words, right?

Give me a four-star encouragement [blowing kiss]

The content is very exciting

I looked at a few and didn't like the passive ones. If you like to be passive, you can watch it.

Although I don't know what to say, it's really pretty. It's my xp

It must be updated😋, I want a machine girl

It's great. There are so many charming girls in the Jue District! Finally found a book [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Yandere writing like this looks the best

Just don't stop updating, it's so good, I love watching it.