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It's okay. The setting is quite new. The protagonist always describes her as very white and skinny, delicate and weak,? I know what the author wants to express is that the heartthrob is very beautiful and cute, but it is always a bit uncomfortable to look at it, and it feels a bit like being stared at by an object. In fact, this is the setting. Those men should feel more like being stared at. Overall, it is not bad, and the forum is also quite interesting. The author will keep up the good work, yes

What an interesting subject. Also, the heroine is a puppy-type sunny heroine. I feel that there are very few such characters. In the novels I have read, the puppy-like flavor is generally used to describe boys. So it's quite special to see the heroine as a puppy. The plot is very delicate and smooth, with no strange sense of inconsistency. It can be seen that the heroine was loved and cared for and grew up in the Hehuan sect. The setting of the Hehuan sect is also very good, and the woman's intentions are very good. Therefore, our baby's three views are also very good, which will attract more people, not only for his appearance, but also for his personality charm. Da Da is very detailed and delicate in terms of emotions. The reasons why everyone has good feelings and feelings are easy to understand, and it doesn't feel inexplicable. It makes people feel that it is natural for the baby to be liked. And then again, can Lu Ming and Yayoi be the main palace? [Top post]

The puppy sister is so cute, she just charms everyone. But there are really few female protagonists of this type. It's rare to have such a fragrant and delicious meal. I decided to add it to my bookshelf. Hehehe

! Nice! The best book I've read in a while! It's just too short. I thought I had an average impression of the protagonist, but actually I just didn't encounter this book () Really, sense of proportion is very important! The writing is super good, I want to see hundreds of thousands of updates. The author's emotions are very delicate, and the logic and emotion of each character are very thoughtful, and they are all like living people. The heroine, especially Little Sun, is not an industrial Little Sun, but a real little Sun with a pure heart. I feel so good eating it, so good eating it! Regarding the pacing issue mentioned by others, I read the author's special mention at the beginning of the chapter and thought it was something like that. In fact, it's nothing to worry about. The long-lasting love is quite good. If you need to pursue a fast pace in the emotional flow, then watch Kuai Chuan. If the emotions are not foreshadowed or described carefully, it will be like an industrialized assembly line. Love will be fast and refreshing, but there will be no memory points. At least I personally think this rhythm is good from my reader's perspective. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers, which I feel is extremely comfortable. I haven't had such a good experience in Tomato for a long time. It makes me feel so warm.

Shocking. Tasty. . Is the ball a god? I can't help but eat one bite after another. When can I wait for the explosive update? It's almost tied. The puppy girl is great! There are also siblings and masters and servants, which is very exciting. .

What a delicious character... The heroine is like a cute puppy, but she is not stupid and sweet. She is very sensitive to some things but ignorant about emotions. She is like a blank sheet of paper haha. She also has her own set of principles and bottom lines. Hmm... And the male characters' designs are also very delicious! ! I really like big-breasted male mothers and gentle husband types. Yulian is also delicious, and the little tsundere one is here. I think everyone is delicious. I really can't name my favorites. The one with low self-esteem and dankness, the one who loves brainstorming, the one who is silently protective and the one who is coquettish and seductive (*ꈍ꒙ꈍ*)

The heroine is a very cute and sunny puppy design, very cute! ! ! This system is bad enough, it is still a human trafficking system. It just feels that the heroine does not have a deep understanding of the world, she always has a sense of dissociation, and she does everything for the sake of cultivation, which gives people the impression that the heroine is single-minded but does not care about herself, or that her skills have created a physique that is popular with everyone. This physique really has a serious impact, and it kind of blocks the characteristics and brilliance of the heroine. It is too buggy. Instead, it makes people feel that other people's favorable impression of the heroine is more because of her skills and physique, rather than the heroine's personality charm. (Meditation. Jpg) And once you have this idea, the more you look at it later, the more awkward it becomes. Come on, author, four stars for the heroine's character, so cute

The heroine is a puppy girl who is not too smart. The author's writing is quite delicious, and the interactions with other people are also very cute. However, I personally don't like the stupid puppy character, so I gave it four stars. People who like it will probably like it.

Who can resist a heartwarming and cute puppy girl [full] is really cute, cute and interesting, both her personality and appearance are super cute, falling in love with her is human nature [shy] like it

So far, everything looks good, especially the heroine's personality is very sunny, which I like very much. The only thing that is a little inconsistent is that the heroine becomes beautiful as fast as riding a rocket. Personally, I don't like this kind of constantly evolving monster with incredible numerical values. I'm afraid that she will be as beautiful as Tomie.

I'm going to kill Feng Feng, it's so pretty. The subject matter is very new, this is the first time I have seen this. Every male protagonist is to my liking, including their appearance and personality, which makes me feel angry. [Screen licking] The heroine is also very cute and naturally silly. It would be great if I could see this book on some website, it's such a pity Well, I stayed up late to finish reading it. Anyway, the current plot, I think, is going to be a big one in the future. I thought it was a pure sweet story, and the male protagonists who currently have relatively few plots should be supplemented in the future. Still looking forward to it [Code]

This book is really the top one among the new works of the same type in my mind. Qiuqiu can be called a rising star author in the girls list [almost crying]. When I first clicked on it, I thought that the two completely different world views of Hehuan Sect and ABO could only be forced together, but Qiuqiu integrated very well, and the most valuable thing is that it still maintains logical self-consistency. The story line is very complete, and the characters, large and small, are all three-dimensional and vivid. Characters other than the heroine are not used as backgrounds to set off the halo of the protagonist. The writing style is also very beautiful, and the ambiguous tension is well controlled. There is no immature feeling of a novice author at all [I almost cried] I sincerely thank the author for creating such an interesting world and the character Ji Ling. I have been reading novels for a long time, and it has always been my habit to read the text or just read the ending. But after opening this book, I will update it on time at three or four o'clock every afternoon. Every time I look forward to it like opening a blind box [send my heart] and hope that Qiuqiu's inspiration will continue hahaha, please continue to update, I will always be your most loyal reader [please update] [please update]

This novel is very good. It has no insulting words and makes people feel comfortable reading it. The author's idea is also very novel. Cultivation of immortals can actually be linked with abo. And the heroine's character is very good. She makes people feel soft when looking at it. In short, it is very beautiful. I hope the author will update quickly and in large quantities.

The author is good at creating attractive characters, and the characters are quite interesting. They are not cookie-cutter characters. I am more interested in the one from the church now. I feel like I am more mature than ever. The part where he and the heroine were kissing was very good. I want to see the heroine and him have more sex.

Finally, there is a book where both men and women like the heroine. If both men and women like the heroine, then they are the real heartthrobs. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] If only men like the heroine, that's not called a heartthrob but a millionaire fan. [Smile]

Although the subject matter is not new, the setting of the heroine is very good. Overall, the writing is pretty good, with a sense of coherence, and it doesn't suddenly jump from environment to atmosphere, but some places may be relatively cumbersome, especially when telling some things. Then I looked at the heroine after I tied it, and I felt that the heroine was raised very well by her master and senior sister (?, That was before... (I won't say any spoilers. As for now, her character is Wei Wei's simple but little sunshine, and her abilities are good and unique. After reading several chapters, the most impressive thing is the inner monologue of the heroine at the opening ceremony at the beginning. The characters who appear are not impressive yet. The other thing is to put it on the bookshelf, hope to update it.

Everyone appreciates it seriously! The heartthrob puppy girl is so cute... Come on, who doesn't want to be stared at by her little sister with her shining eyes? She's so cute. Everyone will fall in love with the heroine. . Completely succubus, all kinds of characters are delicious and super delicious😋Nian Shang teacher, a silent big dog with a mask, a tsundere beauty, and a ghost roommate. .

Overall, it was pretty good. The story was pretty good and I evened it out one night, and then I kept up with it for a few days. The only drawback was that there were too many descriptions in the article, which caused several articles to be written about a very simple thing, which seemed rather procrastinating. The descriptions accounted for most of the story in one chapter and there was very little plot, making it difficult for people to immerse themselves in the plot. But the author still writes very well and the plot is very novel, which is very suitable for stocking up and reading at once.

Delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious. Before I clicked on it, I thought there would be a lot of... Plots, but after reading more than 60 chapters, there are none. If you are worried that the heroine will be bullied, you can rest assured! ! Very beautiful! (Personally, I don't think there are many words to describe the heroine's appearance, but she created a very cute and contrasting baby. Good reviews!!

It looks good, it looks good, I think it's totally okay. The author likes the female grandmother (more descriptions of her appearance), but the heroine is not the delicate and weak type. The heroine is simply cheating in this world! And there are so many types of male protagonists, hahahaha. The female protagonist is eating well. I look forward to the follow-up development. The author, please give it a try [Blow a kiss] [Please give me more updates]

Hey hey hey [licking the screen] [shy] [shy] It's nice to watch. Hey hey 😁 The capital letters are very good. The heroine and the original "heroine" are also very good, and the heroine and the one who gave the collar to the heroine are also very good [shy] [shy] [blowing kisses], and the etiquette teacher is also in middle school for the first year, hehe. Is it served?

Nice! The setting, plot, and writing are all great. The plot and emotions are all progressive. The main plot is more about the daily life of the heartthrob. There is a conspiracy surfacing in the subplot, but it is well-controlled. It is neither too childish nor heavy enough to affect my taste of male sex. The main reason is that the portrayal of the heroine and male supporting characters is really delicious and three-dimensional, and the emotional lines are also very tense. In short, I recommend you to watch it! Come on, author, please continue to produce food, okay?

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭I love you so much, the author. This article is so perfect. It suits my taste. Help. It's so delicious. It's the first time I want to find the author through the work😭😭😭It's so comfortable. I like you 😭

It's so cool to write, and I feel so comfortable reading it🥺💕 The puppy girl is so cute But I have to make a small point. There is a female A guest in the latest chapter, which is a highlight for me personally >ㅅ< Let's put it in order for those who are also concerned. I still can't accept the abomination of beautiful women, I will skip this part.

I finally tied this book between feeling sleepy and wanting to sleep, and reading it so well that I wanted to continue reading it. How could it be so good to read? From the characters to the plot, everything is perfect! So powerful! As a person who loves to watch heartthrobs, I have read The Immortal, The Interstellar, and The Interstellar The Immortal, but this one really still gave me a lot of surprises! Setting the basic writing style is not basic! The puppy girl heroine is really, really, really cute! I love watching puppy girls the most! Baby Ji Ling, we love you! And all the male guests are really special, each one has its own flavor! Moreover, the emotional line part is really written very well. After reading it for a long time, you will feel that a lot of the writing is just a pile of settings, which is just a pile of settings that everyone loves to read. It may be fun for a while, but it is really easy to get bored because there is no detailed polishing of various developments. Before this book, I had not seen a heartthrob with themes such as Star Wars, ABO, etc. On Tomato for a long time, because many of them are really not very delicate, but this one is really different! I really want to marvel at the descriptions of many authors, how they can write such delicate, touching and appropriate words! I was deeply impressed by the hugging ceremony between Ji Ling and Alos. "The groove of the sword process just fits the girl's face" and "I wonder if my body was specially made for her." It was completely shocking and delicious! This is a shocking expression about the big throwing man that will last a lifetime [Thinking] All in all, it is a super delicious, super good-looking article! I can eat meat tomorrow. Looking forward to it!

It's a super, super good-looking and delicious book. The protagonist is so cute and cute, and the interactions with everyone are so real and cute. It's a fairy tale. This is simply a fairy tale. Come on, please update, update, update, update! ! ! ! [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

The heroine is not silly and sweet, not a virgin. Although it is a Hehuan sect, the plot is not clichéd, the plot is smooth and natural, and the training techniques are just right and not flattering. The single arrow is very fragrant!

The setting is very good, the pheromones of cultivating immortals into the body are simply crushing in the abo world view, the heroine is very good, and the plot is also well written... I just want to know when the author's wife will update it... I couldn't finish reading it in one sitting

The author is like a god and it is so shocking and delicious! ! ! ! ! I eat, I eat, I eat, eat, eat, eat, eat, eat! ! ! My dear handsome men and beautiful women, please always exude charm like this and attract each other. So cool! ! ! ! I really want to experience [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's beautiful, the writing is great, it's absolutely fine, and there are so many characters. It's dancing on my xp. I hope the author will update it more! !