The Pitch: An Open Man Three Seconds from Now

There is no sense of excitement. There are details about the game but not many. It can be said that it is more like a running account. The English in it is no different than the number of words. But what is different from other football articles is that at least there is a growth trajectory in it. Unlike other football articles, it is systematic, giving attribute points and skills. Without a system, it can be understood by those with extraordinary talent. It is just like playing a game. Finally, I want to read this kind of football article that is not so exciting but has a growth trajectory. I will read it and cherish it, because the data will most likely not be good, and then the author will stop updating and end 😎

Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. It is a good book, I like it very much. The understanding and pursuit in it, as well as the arrangements for growth are quite meaningful. However, for the sake of elaboration, it is a good thing to carve and shape slowly, but in today's reading habits, there must be enough exciting points and climaxes to support the slow pace or maintain the attraction. Even a straight line should have enough jump, otherwise it will not be conducive to following the reading. If reading makes people unhappy or depressing, problems can easily arise. Four stars represent the present and five stars represent the future. I hope there will be more expectations. It is not easy to find a good football novel without violence nowadays.

Compared with Shuangwen's cheating, this one writes a lot of real things about studying abroad, but it is still a bit boring. It feels like it should be controlled by AI and manual polishing. Some descriptions appear back and forth, and the character dialogue is also very mechanical and brief. It is readable but still has a bit of AI flavor. I hope it can pick up the rhythm. It's peaceful.

The age of the heroine could be explained more clearly. The article expresses rich emotions but the ups and downs are not well expressed. It is more of a prose novel, and the prose style makes the emotions vividly expressed. In the competition, in addition to adding more action descriptions and thinking from the perspective of the protagonist, growth can be better reflected. There are also parts of the plot that should be accelerated. Reasonable urgency is also very important, and the article cannot be flat. However, as a first work, it is already very good. As long as it is promoted, whether this novel can become a brand depends on whether it will be better in the future, but as long as it persists, it will be a new monument for football articles. For details on the storyline of the competition, please refer to Blue Reed. However, it is still easier to depict the competition in comics than in novels. The ups and downs of the novel are still very important. When writing about the main character not playing, the author can supplement it with more thinking and learning based on psychological description. When the main character does not play, the team falls behind and the main character relies on the help of a flash of inspiration after coming on the field. It does not necessarily mean that you are brainless. If the main character does not have talent, he will not be able to reach that position. Effort and training are just to maintain the level. Talent can really accomplish miracles. This depends on foreshadowing and writing skills. Whether it can be achieved is the final issue of the work. Time has become an issue. By the way, you can consider changing the title of the book. After all, it's the first one and it's already great. Come on, come on.

I have read Chapter 15 so far, and I have a really refreshing feeling, not only about football games, but also about the life behind football. I hope this book can be read by more people who like this style, cheers for the author!

It is unique in football writing and written in a realistic way. It is very attractive to a football novice like me, the writing is very solid, and it is indeed an eye-catching work. However, there are some minor flaws that are innocuous and personal. Although the name of the protagonist somewhat indicates his talent, for someone who attaches great importance to names at first sight, it is a bit unacceptable to me. On the other hand, the author's friendship is very good, but there is no love line, which I personally regret. But overall, as the author's debut novel, I think it is very good. I really admire the author's courage and perseverance in writing about niche subjects. I hope the data in this book can be better.

I finished reading it in one go. It's a pretty good football novel. In the early stage, it was mostly about the youth training period, but then it picked up speed obviously. Now I have entered the Bundesliga with Dortmund. The description is more literary and artistic, but now it is getting better!

I already like reading slow-burning novels, and then I have been reading refreshing novels. I still feel good when reading slow-burning novels. After reading the refreshing novels, I have nothing to remember except the pleasure. This book is very suitable for my taste. I hope I won't stop updating it.

I read the first 10 chapters. As one of the many football practitioners in China, the description of daily details is quite realistic. The writing style of game processing is relatively simple. There are some problems with the description of actions on the field. Let's read again.

I read the first few chapters. Um. Although some parts are a bit repetitive. But well written. Most of modern football is cheating. People like you are actually rare. So I feel like your data is not very good. Especially now it seems that tomatoes have introduced new regulations. The reality is very cruel. Including me, most people read novels to seek that kind of pleasure.