Greenery: the Empty Space After Three Seconds

There is no sense of excitement. There are details about the game but not many. It can be said that it is more like a running account. The English in it is no different than the number of words. But what is different from other football articles is that at least there is a growth trajectory in it. Unlike other football articles, it is systematic, giving attribute points and skills. Without a system, it can be understood by those with extraordinary talent. It is just like playing a game. Finally, I want to read this kind of football article that is not so exciting but has a growth trajectory. I will read it and cherish it, because the data will most likely not be good, and then the author will stop updating and end [Cool]

Compared with Shuangwen's cheating, this one writes a lot of real things about studying abroad, but it is still a bit boring. It feels like it should be controlled by AI and manual polishing. Some descriptions appear back and forth, and the character dialogue is also very mechanical and brief. It is readable but still has a bit of AI flavor. I hope it can pick up the rhythm. It's peaceful.

Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. It is a good book, I like it very much. The understanding and pursuit in it, as well as the arrangements for growth are quite meaningful. However, for the sake of elaboration, it is a good thing to carve and shape slowly, but in today's reading habits, there must be enough exciting points and climaxes to support the slow pace or maintain the attraction. Even a straight line should have enough jump, otherwise it will not be conducive to following the reading. If reading makes people unhappy or depressing, problems can easily arise. Four stars represent the present and five stars represent the future. I hope there will be more expectations. It is not easy to find a good football novel without violence nowadays.

I have read Chapter 15 so far, and I have a really refreshing feeling, not only about football games, but also about the life behind football. I hope this book can be read by more people who like this style, cheers for the author!

The age of the heroine could be explained more clearly. The article expresses rich emotions but the ups and downs are not well expressed. It is more of a prose novel, and the prose style makes the emotions vividly expressed. In the competition, in addition to adding more action descriptions and thinking from the perspective of the protagonist, growth can be better reflected. There are also parts of the plot that should be accelerated. Reasonable urgency is also very important, and the article cannot be flat. However, as a first work, it is already very good. As long as it is promoted, whether this novel can become a brand depends on whether it will be better in the future, but as long as it persists, it will be a new monument for football articles. For details on the storyline of the competition, please refer to Blue Reed. However, it is still easier to depict the competition in comics than in novels. The ups and downs of the novel are still very important. When writing about the main character not playing, the author can supplement it with more thinking and learning based on psychological description. When the main character does not play, the team falls behind and the main character relies on the help of a flash of inspiration after coming on the field. It does not necessarily mean that you are brainless. If the main character does not have talent, he will not be able to reach that position. Effort and training are just to maintain the level. Talent can really accomplish miracles. This depends on foreshadowing and writing skills. Whether it can be achieved is the final issue of the work. Time has become an issue. By the way, you can consider changing the title of the book. After all, it's the first one and it's already great. Come on, come on.

I already like reading slow-burning novels, and then I have been reading refreshing novels. I still feel good when reading slow-burning novels. After reading the refreshing novels, I have nothing to remember except the pleasure. This book is very suitable for my taste. I hope I won't stop updating it.

It is unique in football writing and written in a realistic way. It is very attractive to a football novice like me, the writing is very solid, and it is indeed an eye-catching work. However, there are some minor flaws that are innocuous and personal. Although the name of the protagonist somewhat indicates his talent, for someone who attaches great importance to names at first sight, it is a bit unacceptable to me. On the other hand, the author's friendship is very good, but there is no love line, which I personally regret. But overall, as the author's debut novel, I think it is very good. I really admire the author's courage and perseverance in writing about niche subjects. I hope the data in this book can be better.

I finished reading it in one go. It's a pretty good football novel. In the early stage, it was mostly about the youth training period, but then it picked up speed obviously. Now I have entered the Bundesliga with Dortmund. The description is more literary and artistic, but now it is getting better!

I read the first 10 chapters. As one of the many football practitioners in China, the description of daily details is quite realistic. The writing style of game processing is relatively simple. There are some problems with the description of actions on the field. Let's read again.

I think it's very interesting. If the author keeps writing, I will keep reading. I don't know how to describe it. I just jump to read other football articles, but so far, I have been reading this book carefully. To put it bluntly, this book is written so that I feel very comfortable. Come on, author [laughing]

When I read the third chapter, it's not a cool, slow-burning type, but the writing is solid and meticulous, and it's well worth reading. Just from the first three chapters alone, I'm sure he's already a fairy! Come on, author! And for Messi, because of his attitude towards China, it can be set as the idol or goal of the protagonist, but it would be better to surpass him and defeat him as a long-term villain. Just like Cristiano Ronaldo, defeating various powerful targets in the novel can be used as a stepping stone to get started.

The word count so far (67 chapters) is about 7,500 words per chapter. It is a large online article. The style is quite unique (describing the protagonist's growth process and behind-the-scenes aspects). If it weren't for the AI, I would think that the author has played football and knows a lot about traveling in Europe. The protagonist is talented and works hard to improve and has strong adaptability and is in line with reality. You can read this book slowly. I personally like it better.

This is a realistic football article with delicate writing style, full of emotion, and rich characterization. The content of the story is about the various growths encountered on the road of football. It is recommended for those who are quiet, reflective and empathic. It is not recommended for those who like refreshing articles.

I stopped when I read the fourth chapter because I felt that the speed was wrong. I called up the table of contents and took a look at the word count. The first chapter was 4,000 and I knew this book was worth reading. It was a pleasure to read, even if some English sentences may not make sense for a while, the emotions are still there, and it depicts a young man, which is very good

It's a very good book. Although there are currently relatively few chapters, it looks very real and allows people to feel the emotions in it. However, it would be better if there were fewer emotional scenes (personal experience)

The writing is very real, it is a very good football novel. The details in the front are depressing and very immersive, but if it continues like this, it feels boring. This is a novel, not life, and life is not so ordinary.

This football novel is the most detailed and realistic one among the many football novels I have read. There is no system, no sudden success, no hat-trick or invincible assists right away. Some of it is the hesitation and struggle in a foreign country, and some is about correcting one's own shortcomings bit by bit, bit by bit from substitute to main player to the team's thigh. Now that I have finally reached the front of Dortmund, I have to adapt again and climb up step by step. The expectations are high! Come on💪

Although it is an AI text, it is a rare good book in football sports. I have seen too many brilliant achievements of the system. This time I really relied on myself and hard work.

Good article, because it is not a systematic article, five stars

It's not a cool article, it's not systematic. It tells a story about a player's growth. There's no tedious process of playing football. You can see the gradual growth of a midfielder from youth training to the second division to the Bundesliga. The story at each stage is very interesting. Each stage has different growth. No need to skip long paragraphs.

Very good article, very detailed. It is recommended to reduce foreign language, there are several in one chapter. It looks detailed, but it's not necessary.

The fresh writing style has the delicate description and lyricism of traditional novels. The characters, scenes, actions, and dialogues are all on point. It's not a traditional cool novel, it's very literary. The low rating is probably because the pace is slower compared to Shuangwen. But it is very friendly to people who really read books.

Author, please tell me, in fact, you have finished writing it and can publish it all tonight, right? I really want to read it [crying]

I deliberately went to see the situation in the 19/20 season. The author even tried to follow the real game conditions even when scoring goals. It's really very rigorous. It feels like the author is like that reporter.

Nice. I have read too many systematic articles. This kind of article is not systematic and feels a bit refreshing.

I enjoyed reading the first football novel, but after catching up with the big team, reading other football novels was boring.

It looks okay. The language style is not like Tomato's and the content is bland.

The writing is very realistic, and there are not a lot of messy tricks. However, it feels a bit slow to read in some places. Overall, the flaws are not concealed.

The pace is very slow, but the reading is very charming. It feels more like a personal autobiography of a young player. It is completely different from the traditional competition article. It is very interesting.

I hope to continue writing. It is a bit fast to go directly from the second division to Dortmund. In fact, you can first go to the middle and lower reaches of the five major leagues to practice at the lower level and then go to a wealthy club like Dortmund.