National Survival Challenge: Drifting in the Sea of ​​Clouds

It looks good. The process of changing the whale carcass into an airship is very interesting. The use of gray terms, the transformation of areas, and the conspiracy of the former civilization is just a background story. It is good that it does not fall into a long and inexplicable plot. However, the doctor is a failure. For the plot of more than 40 chapters of a doctor, she is still a virgin. She is surrounded by people. You save her. She talks to you for a few words and you give money and resources. She is driven away by natural disasters and you have to expose her and save her. Finally, they are all on the ship. Her patients have been attracting the attention of Daeye. You save her and then wait there to die, waiting for the author's big hand. It looks great. It feels so good to be repaired a little bit. But there is still a problem. I am so petty. Such a big whale. In the end, each repair only requires a small amount of materials and half a bottle of glue. There are too many plots in Fat Man, and one sentence can give him two to three hundred words of inner monologue. Now the plot in Whale is the dialogue between Fat Man, the doctor and the repairman. The protagonist is a tool man. He comes out to say something and make a decision in two or three chapters, and then it is gone. There is also a problem with the number of people. There are only 7 places, and 6 are used. Fatty, doctor, protagonist, repairman, Qin Ming, patient. Then in your plot, you always mention the patients sighing and causing trouble. What does it mean? Where does the "people" come from?

Not bad, but a bit AI-like

The story about the whale transforming the ark was particularly well written. I was particularly looking forward to the time when the cloud-swallowing ark could soar in the sea of ​​clouds, but I didn't understand the part about the wounded. I don't know why I stopped reading it again, or I didn't read it carefully. I hope the author can work hard. The writing is very good. I don't know why it is not popular. I hope it can become popular. I am especially afraid of stopping updating if it is not popular. In summary, it is worth reading [Sending Hearts]

From the 100% installation rate and orange core at the beginning, I thought this was another mindless and cool article, but later I realized that I was wrong. This author is really 🐮. The golden finger given to the protagonist at the beginning was just to help him survive. When I saw more than a hundred pictures, there was still a lack of materials. All the plug-ins were to set off the horror of natural disasters and people's powerlessness in the face of natural disasters. Generally speaking, this novel is okay. It has everything that a survival novel should have, and there is no numerical inflation. It is a rare masterpiece. [Eat melon]

Although it is an AI article, I like the subject matter. I don't care about his writing style, but the plot is still good.

In the early morning, the old locust trees at the entrance of the alley have fallen petals all over the ground. The cart selling breakfast is steaming with white steam. When the steamer is opened, the sweet fragrance of soy milk wafts out. The wild cats in the corner curl up in a ball to bask in the soft sun. The object you just bought is exquisite in appearance, and the details are polished smooth and moist. The more you look at it, the more you like it. It looks good and you deserve it! When passing by a small river, I saw small fish swimming after duckweeds. The old man on the bank shook his cattail leaf fan and chatted about his daily life. The wind blew a few willow leaves to his feet. The street windows are filled with colorful trinkets, children are laughing and running across the zebra crossing after school, and clouds are slowly floating in the light blue sky. There are countless small and tender beauties in life. The evening breeze will carry the fragrance of grass and trees, and the street lights will lengthen the shadows of pedestrians at night. There are countless small joys hidden in ordinary daily life. In your free time, make a cup of hot tea and sit in a daze, watching the light and shadow slowly move on the wall. The world is full of gentle scenes that heal people's hearts.

Does the author have a Douyin account named An Xiaohe?

Very good, already on the bookshelf. . . Please author greatly improve the

No system, no glitches, give it a good review. The rhythm of survival is very tight, and it looks like real survival.

The protagonist repairs the giant whale step by step in the sea of ​​clouds. The text is delicate and the writing ideas are good.

The writing is very real and beautiful.

You can take your time and look at it, take your time and look at it

The subject matter is novel and interesting to watch

This is real survival. You have to build everything by yourself using materials.

It's all interlocking and exciting without being sloppy. Don't be too rigid when revising it during review!

Not bad, this is the first time I read this type of survival article, not bad, not bad, come on!