[Apocalyptic City➕Monster Hunter World➕Double Penetration➕Multiple Heroines]
You said the Gray Shadow Wolf is going to attack the convoy? Okay, okay, I'm worried that Brother Zhongfen has no food rations.
You said the alien swordsmanship is superb? Then can he afford to eat in my Zhanlong residence?
Is the gryphon too tough and difficult to beat? My bleating son expressed dissatisfaction!
Reader comments
The rhythm is very good and the writing is okay, much better than me.
I have a little suggestion:
When writing about monster hunting and beast control, you can refer to Monogatari a lot, but you should not introduce ancient dragons too early. After all, the middle and low-level ecology of monster hunting is still very rich. Introducing ancient dragons too early will make readers get bored quickly, and it is easy for the writing to collapse.
According to the current situation, the overall combat power of your book is moderate. It is best to focus on the main monsters. After all, those border gods are still too supermodels. Apart from the few who have become regulars, forget about the rest.
The overall combat power in Monster Hunter is relatively high. Generally speaking, the backbone force, mainly the map king, is relatively abundant. You can add more different monsters of the same level. It is a bit too repetitive to just focus on the popular monsters. You can write more monsters that the author likes.
There are no big problems with the plot at the moment. The only thing I don't understand is that there is no actual master-slave contract in this world of beast control. Even if other people's war pets are fed for several years, they still can't get rid of their feral nature, and they have to be fed remotely to ensure safety. How is this different from training wild beasts in reality? At least in the text, for this reason, few of the entire city defense army have tamed large war pets. So how was this beast control world promoted and developed?
The article says that the heroine can easily lift hundreds of kilograms of objects, and that more cracks can increase personal strength. So it seems more in line with the law to develop personal force.
The writing is very good, the plot is relatively compact, and there are no poisonous points. It belongs to this kind of article about pet shops, but don't worry, all the protagonist's dragons are for rent, and there is no buyout system. You can travel back and forth between Monster Hunter World and modern times.
The monster hunting dragon was very weak. The front part was fine, but the tail of the female fire dragon in the back was cut off with a knife.
The classic pet stream is okay, but I feel that the others are not very strong and have no sense of substitution. Maybe I've watched too many of this type, come on!
A very nice article about monster hunting. I hope Tomato will provide more traffic and not let the author stop updating [crying]
Most of them focus on monster hunting, and the other ones open pet shops in different worlds. The character creation is carried out in both worlds. However, as a derivative of monster hunting, many systems are incomplete and the combat power is unclear.
I just started reading it and I think the setting is very interesting. Will the author of this rare monster hunting theme join El Cat as a partner in the future? After all, it is also a cute point of monster hunting.
It looks great, but why can't the rating go up?
It's delicious. Although I'm not a fan of this hunting industry, it doesn't affect its health.
Fortunately, I didn't miss this fundamental treasure novel. It's really a miracle that this kind of book can appear in this era of AI literature. Please support me. Please continue to write [crying][crying][crying][crying]
It's okay, but the pace is a bit too slow
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, but it's a pity that there are too few. I heard others say that five stars don't count, so I gave it four stars. It's very beautiful. Now I'm curious whether the exploration team is still alive [Thinking]
So, can you post a picture next time of what the big thief dragon looks like?
There are too few themes about monster hunting and beast control. I need five stars to support it.
A very, very, very nice monster hunting fanfic
Very interesting start [laughs]
Great, I like this
This article is very historical
Looks good, is this a break?
The new author is already very good
Actually, Chocobo is also very suitable.
Since it is a beast control, why not link it with the story? The secret of the beast control skills that connects the hearts can allow ordinary dragons to deal extremely high damage.
Great monster hunting fanfic, makes my sword spin
This is the best monster hunting article I have ever read.
It's probably the best book among monster hunters.
It must be perfect. There are still too few people watching. Please support me with more people [crying]
Love watching it, but there are too few
Do you have any recommendations for this kind of realistic beast-controlling novels?
What a rare book! Well, not bad. Because there are too few monster hunters, especially those who keep pets.
It was a pleasure to read, a rare monster hunting novel
The rhythm is very good and the writing is okay, much better than me. I have a little suggestion: When writing about monster hunting and beast control, you can refer to Monogatari a lot, but you should not introduce ancient dragons too early. After all, the middle and low-level ecology of monster hunting is still very rich. Introducing ancient dragons too early will make readers get bored quickly, and it is easy for the writing to collapse. According to the current situation, the overall combat power of your book is moderate. It is best to focus on the main monsters. After all, those border gods are still too supermodels. Apart from the few who have become regulars, forget about the rest. The overall combat power in Monster Hunter is relatively high. Generally speaking, the backbone force, mainly the map king, is relatively abundant. You can add more different monsters of the same level. It is a bit too repetitive to just focus on the popular monsters. You can write more monsters that the author likes.
There are no big problems with the plot at the moment. The only thing I don't understand is that there is no actual master-slave contract in this world of beast control. Even if other people's war pets are fed for several years, they still can't get rid of their feral nature, and they have to be fed remotely to ensure safety. How is this different from training wild beasts in reality? At least in the text, for this reason, few of the entire city defense army have tamed large war pets. So how was this beast control world promoted and developed? The article says that the heroine can easily lift hundreds of kilograms of objects, and that more cracks can increase personal strength. So it seems more in line with the law to develop personal force.
The writing is very good, the plot is relatively compact, and there are no poisonous points. It belongs to this kind of article about pet shops, but don't worry, all the protagonist's dragons are for rent, and there is no buyout system. You can travel back and forth between Monster Hunter World and modern times. The monster hunting dragon was very weak. The front part was fine, but the tail of the female fire dragon in the back was cut off with a knife.
The classic pet stream is okay, but I feel that the others are not very strong and have no sense of substitution. Maybe I've watched too many of this type, come on!
A very nice article about monster hunting. I hope Tomato will provide more traffic and not let the author stop updating [crying]
Most of them focus on monster hunting, and the other ones open pet shops in different worlds. The character creation is carried out in both worlds. However, as a derivative of monster hunting, many systems are incomplete and the combat power is unclear.
I just started reading it and I think the setting is very interesting. Will the author of this rare monster hunting theme join El Cat as a partner in the future? After all, it is also a cute point of monster hunting.
It looks great, but why can't the rating go up?
It's delicious. Although I'm not a fan of this hunting industry, it doesn't affect its health.
Fortunately, I didn't miss this fundamental treasure novel. It's really a miracle that this kind of book can appear in this era of AI literature. Please support me. Please continue to write [crying][crying][crying][crying]
It's okay, but the pace is a bit too slow
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, but it's a pity that there are too few. I heard others say that five stars don't count, so I gave it four stars. It's very beautiful. Now I'm curious whether the exploration team is still alive [Thinking]
So, can you post a picture next time of what the big thief dragon looks like?
There are too few themes about monster hunting and beast control. I need five stars to support it.
A very, very, very nice monster hunting fanfic
Very interesting start [laughs]
Great, I like this
This article is very historical
Looks good, is this a break?
The new author is already very good
Actually, Chocobo is also very suitable.
Since it is a beast control, why not link it with the story? The secret of the beast control skills that connects the hearts can allow ordinary dragons to deal extremely high damage.
Great monster hunting fanfic, makes my sword spin
This is the best monster hunting article I have ever read.
It's probably the best book among monster hunters.
It must be perfect. There are still too few people watching. Please support me with more people [crying]
Love watching it, but there are too few
Do you have any recommendations for this kind of realistic beast-controlling novels?
What a rare book! Well, not bad. Because there are too few monster hunters, especially those who keep pets.
It was a pleasure to read, a rare monster hunting novel