All Heavens: Rebuilding Lobotomy Corporation from the Destruction of Corpses

In my opinion, this novel is excellent. Features: 1. The concept is novel and does not follow the traditional lobe writing route. If you are tired of the traditional writing, you can give it a try. 2. The plot is not procrastinating, and it would be better to write more than ten chapters about any one thing. However, there are also areas for improvement: 1. Previous staff have barely mentioned it, and the characterization is a bit thin. From my point of view: it's very beautiful, I hope there will be more, and the author's progress is obvious. The writing style in Chapter 1 is childish, but it gets better and better from later on. [Shy]

It feels like I'm wearing a shell, and there's nothing like the original abnormality.

It looks good, but it's probably not AI. It's a pity that there are too few people and no comments.

All I can say is that it is very consistent with the original work, this depressing feeling.

I come to Tomato every day just to pick out history books that others don't want, for the one-in-a-million difference. This feeling is as pleasant as picking up an unopened bottle of Coke in the trash.

It's good-looking. It doesn't stick to the framework of Lobotomy Corporation. It contains all original abnormality. But why is the popularity so low? There are not many reviews. I looked at the writing record and it's full attendance. I've updated almost 200 chapters.

It looks good, they are all new Abnormalities, but the main plot is not clear yet.

Very good innovation, I hope the author will continue to work hard! 😁

It seems that you will gradually start using AI later? Around Chapter 38 It's okay later on, with less traces of AI, but when will the suppression come out? It's not a problem for the protagonist to squat in a corner every day.

A+, that's the seal of approval from the Ring Master

Not bad, it's just that there is some AI-assisted writing in the early stage, but it will be much better in the later stage.

It looks good, but does it have a female protagonist? [What]

The writing is okay, but the second world is probably an original world. I haven't seen any comments, but I don't like to read original and fan fiction, so I just edited it.

Boss, I think your writing is pretty good, but why are so few people reading it? [What]

I still need to support Lobo's new book, cheers for the author. As we get older, our memory gets worse.