Beast Taming: I Become the Fated Protagonist's Spirit Snake

I love watching it. I like the personalities of the two protagonists very much. They complement each other quite well. It doesn't matter if it's two male protagonists or a story about brothers' careers. I can relate to it myself.

For the sake of the two cute protagonists, I reluctantly give it five stars. The setting is very nice and novel. The characters of the two protagonists are very good The disadvantage is that the paragraphs are too fragmented. There are only one or two sentences in each paragraph, and there is even a part repeated in front of each page. It can be seen that it was written by AI. The reading experience is very bad and it feels very watery. Moreover, the rhythm of the plot is very slow. I have been writing about the source of pollution for many chapters, and the routines are very repetitive: for example, the little snake suddenly reacts to a certain place, and then the teacher keeps searching, and every time he says it is the last time for the little snake to smell it. As a result, the little snake has to smell it many, many times in each chapter. This kind of plot is OK if it happens once or twice, but it is basically repeated in every chapter. . . . In short, I quite like the setting of this novel. If the author can optimize those sentences with strong AI flavor, enrich the plot, and make the content less monotonous, this novel will definitely become popular!!! I re-read the article that the author revised, and it feels much better than before. At least the plot is not repeated as before. New characters have been introduced and the background story of another protagonist has been improved. It is worthy of recognition (•̀ •́ The disadvantage is that the AI flavor is still very strong. I tried to recommend this novel to my friends around me, but almost none of them read it. Because the story description has no human emotions at all, it is difficult to empathize with it, just like one comment said, it is like writing an outline and running account. I feel that the data in this book is not very good, but I hope the author can keep it from beginning to end. You can also use this book as a practice, first improve the characters and outline, work hard to write it yourself, improve the writing style, and write a novel with truly attractive writing style and characters.

Okay, okay, if this is the author's first book, then I think it is indeed well written, but there are really a lot of repeated content and repeated plots in it. But if it is the author's first book, it is not a big problem. This should be easily changed. And I think the well-written part is the source of pollution that is being investigated now. I think The writing is very detailed. There are many authors who are not very good at breaking down the clues one by one. They just go through it in a hurry. The writing is really detailed, not bad, and the battles are also very good. This one really has a sense of matching. I can imagine it in my mind. There are many details that can be thought about.

Maybe it's because I'm used to a lot of slap-in-the-face stories about cheating at the beginning, or maybe I'm used to some battles in beast-control novels that only rely on strength, numerical values, advanced skills, and the protagonist's crushing at the beginning. The author's description focuses on the real beast-control growth path between the two protagonists, such as fighting, training, and evolution. The emotional description is also very insightful. He does not use a lot of rhetoric or cumbersome adjectives to describe the protagonist's unwillingness and desire to become stronger. It is reflected through the investigation of previous cases and the description of minute details. The combat aspect described by the author is something I never thought of when I read this type of article before. The characterization and description of every minute detail of the event can also reflect the author's intention in writing the article. I haven't written many long reviews, so I may not express myself that well, but I still strongly support the author and this novel. Good luck, author!

I'll give it 4 stars, but the AI flavor is still too strong, so I'll deduct one star, but the setting is pretty good. I've only read chapter 88 so far, but please ask the author about how many words it will be when it's finished, and be mentally prepared. I'll read it after it's finished. Refuse!!!!

I really like reading this kind of development story. Watching the two protagonists slowly grow together is really a sense of accomplishment. The author must work hard and keep writing. I really like watching it. I hope the two protagonists can continue to be strong. Stronger together.

The subject matter is very good. This kind of slowly upgrading looks more casual, and the plot is relatively novel, but the AI ​​flavor is too strong. It feels like watching deepseek talk, and the world background is not very clear (maybe I didn't watch enough and didn't get to the place introduced by the author)

It's pretty good, I like this setting very much, but the AI ​​flavor in the combat part is beyond the limit. It doesn't feel like fighting a beast battle. Many of the terms are like playing a moba game, which is a bit weird...

I like this setting very much, but the AI ​​flavor is too heavy and makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. If I polish it up, more people will read it.

It's okay. I quite like the characters of the two protagonists. The only pity is that there is no system. The time traveler is really finished without the system. At least there must be another golden finger or something. To be honest, I still don't know what that tree is for. I can't figure it out.