Beast Control: I Became the Natal Snake of the Child of Destiny

I love watching it. I like the personalities of the two protagonists very much. They complement each other quite well. It doesn't matter if it's two male protagonists or a story about brothers' careers. I can relate to it myself.

For the sake of the two cute protagonists, I reluctantly give it five stars. The setting is very nice and novel. The characters of the two protagonists are very good The disadvantage is that the paragraphs are too fragmented. There are only one or two sentences in each paragraph, and there is even a part repeated in front of each page. It can be seen that it was written by AI. The reading experience is very bad and it feels very watery. Moreover, the pace of the plot is very slow. I have been writing about the source of pollution for many chapters, and the routines are very repetitive: for example, the little snake suddenly reacts to a certain place, and then the teacher keeps searching, and every time he says it is the last time for the little snake to smell it. As a result, the little snake has to smell it many, many times in each chapter. This kind of plot is OK if it happens once or twice, but it is basically repeated in every chapter. . . . In short, I quite like the setting of this novel. If the author can optimize those sentences with strong AI flavor, enrich the plot, and make the content less monotonous, this novel will definitely become popular! ! ! I re-read the article that the author revised, and it feels much better than before. At least the plot is not repeated as before. New characters have been introduced and the background story of another protagonist has been improved. It is worthy of recognition (•̀•́ The disadvantage is that the AI flavor is still very strong. I tried to recommend this novel to my friends around me, but almost none of them read it. Because the story description has no human emotions at all, it is difficult to empathize with it, just like one comment said, it is like writing an outline and running account. I feel that the data in this book is not very good, but I hope the author can keep it from beginning to end. You can also use this book as a practice. First, improve the characters and outline, work hard to write it yourself, improve the writing style, and write a novel with truly attractive writing style and characters.

Okay, okay, if this is the author's first book, then I think it is indeed well written, but there are really a lot of repeated content and repeated plots in it. But if it is the author's first book, it is not a big problem. This should be easily changed. And I think the well-written part is the source of pollution that is being investigated now. I think The writing is very detailed. There are many authors who are not very good at breaking down the clues one by one. They just go through it in a hurry. The writing is really detailed, not bad, and the battles are also very good. This one really has a sense of matching. I can imagine it in my mind. There are many details that can be thought about.

Maybe it's because I'm used to a lot of slap-in-the-face stories about cheating at the beginning, or maybe I'm used to some battles in beast-control novels that only rely on strength, numerical values, advanced skills, and the protagonist's crushing at the beginning. The author's description focuses on the real beast-control growth path between the two protagonists, such as fighting, training, and evolution. The emotional description is also very insightful. He does not use a lot of rhetoric or cumbersome adjectives to describe the protagonist's unwillingness and desire to become stronger. It is reflected through the investigation of previous cases and the description of minute details. The combat aspect described by the author is something I never thought of when I read this type of article before. The characterization and description of every minute detail of the event can also reflect the author's intention in writing the article. I haven't written many long reviews, so I may not express myself that well, but I still strongly support the author and this novel. Good luck, author!

I'll give it 4 stars, but the AI flavor is still too strong, so I'll deduct one star, but the setting is pretty good. I've only read chapter 88 so far, but please ask the author about how many words it will be when it's finished, and be mentally prepared. I'll read it after it's finished. Refuse! ! ! !

It's pretty good, I like this setting very much, but the AI ​​flavor in the combat part is beyond the limit. It doesn't feel like fighting a beast battle. Many of the terms are like playing a moba game, which is a bit weird...

I really like reading this kind of development story. Watching the two protagonists slowly grow together is really a sense of accomplishment. The author must work hard and keep writing. I really like watching it. I hope the two protagonists can continue to be strong. Stronger together.

The subject matter is very good. This kind of slowly upgrading looks more casual, and the plot is relatively novel, but the AI ​​flavor is too strong. It feels like watching deepseek talk, and the world background is not very clear (maybe I didn't watch enough and didn't get to the place introduced by the author)

I like this setting very much, but the AI ​​flavor is too heavy and makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. If I polish it up, more people will read it.

This type of movie is also pretty good to watch, but I feel like the main character, the Taming Beast, really suffers. Although he can break his bloodline and become stronger, he really suffers and his life is in danger at any time. An ordinary little snake can just be a pet for the rest of his life.

It's okay. I quite like the characters of the two protagonists. The only pity is that there is no system. The time traveler is really finished without the system. At least there must be another golden finger or something. To be honest, I still don't know what that tree is for. I can't figure it out.

It's beautiful. Why is there no one there? I hope the author won't cheat.

I use AI and prefer female-channeled novels.

Not bad, the pace is a little slow, but okay

Why do beastmasters ignore humans and don't hit them? Do humans have no fighting role or need in the setting?

It's good to watch, but as I'm used to reading cool articles, I feel like it's too slow to upgrade. [Thinking] It's not that cool, the content is quite old-fashioned.

I think it's very interesting, and this is also very novel, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I hope the author can work harder and make more improvements [Blow kiss]

Good, good, good

The writing is clear and thoughtful, but the shortcoming is the lack of background information and basic information.

It feels very good, the main plot is better, but there are relatively few explanations about the world view, so I still hope to mention it (such as the setting of beast-controlling levels, the division of forces in the world, spiritual patterns, etc.) As for the protagonist, Lin Ye has a very distinct personality. Gu Hanzhou feels that he lacks a sense of being alive, but it basically doesn't affect him. In terms of combat, I hope there will be more description of the overall environment, and sometimes the combat instructions are difficult to understand. For example, the meaning of "water line" is not clear, and it looks a bit confusing (it may also be my problem) The above is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, just ignore it. The article is still very interesting.

It's perfect, come and take a look.

It's a good book. The protagonist progresses step by step. The plot is not stiff and steady, and the progress is not slow. The snakes interact well with people. It's quite high quality. The more I read, the more fascinated I became. I felt like what the author knew didn't match up with what I knew. Didn't he explain clearly?

Not bad, but a bit like AI. Go to the full text search and search for the word "but" and you will know why I said that.

It looks good in front of me, but I hope the author will add the length of the protagonist after each evolution. Otherwise, they will only say that the body length increases after each evolution, which looks strange. I've finally grown taller, and I'm super good-looking. Come on, [blowing kiss]

The interaction between the two protagonists is interesting and the characters are very distinct. I hope the author can continue to do so.

It's pretty good-looking. The perspective is very novel. If you like watching beasts, you can try it.

All so cute. I like Lin Ye's grudge hhh. I also like Gu Hanzhou's character. Please continue to upgrade, you two! Fight for a price increase [laughing]

I'll give it a score of 8.5. It has a light sense of humor and its perspective is quite novel. The two of them help each other.

The potential is quite high, it's not mindless and cool, it's very good, it doesn't insult women, and there are no uncomfortable situations.

So far good, mark it