Blue Archives: the Unbroken Laurel

The writing style is very delicate, but there are too many peripheral descriptions. The author seems to want to give each character an end, but excessive splashing is excessive waste. Perhaps the author should focus the peripheral descriptions on the process of the story, or the content of the story, rather than describing the characters all the time. We are like reading a novel written by everyone. Everyone's fictions are suppressed together, and everyone's fictions are written together. Everyone feels that everyone must write delicately, everyone must write exquisitely, and everyone must write one-on-one. This has caused a lot of waste of writing. To simplify it, it is: "There is no need to write too much, like hydrology and AI literature." [I learned it] But it is still good, come on, this is a reader's suggestion [I learned it] [OK]

This book is quite good, but the background of the protagonist is a bit scattered. From the beginning, the protagonist turns into a villain to target the protagonist. Secondly, I feel that the author always likes to use statements like "It's not... It is". I hope it can be reduced. The writing is still good. I hope it will be updated more.

Good looking, good luck to the author

It's my favorite book, so I give it five stars

It's okay, but it's a bit more literary and cumbersome. Overall it's good.

Just looking at the previous content, it's a bit confusing┗(´∧｀)┛ But if you put it all together, it's very delicious [like] [laughing]

To put it simply, it's not bad. Although it's not very good-looking, it's still good to take a look at it in your spare time.

Seeing ceramite reminds me of Astaq. So which world is the male protagonist of this book from?

It covers a lot of content, the writing is very good, the writing style is a bit stiff, but that's not important, the most important thing is that you like to read it

The writing is delicate, although the chapters are a bit stiff

It looks good, but the settings of the students seem to be lost, but it does not affect the consumption [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

I've been reading this so much that I've been following it, but why hasn't the author updated it recently?

The writing is okay, but sometimes a certain sentence is repeated. Good, but don't say "it's not…"

A very good novel

I think it's pretty good, keep writing.