Warm reminder: The author's writing style is not good
[Unlimited streaming + no CP + he + no brainwriting]
Su Xiaoyun died at the age of nineteen. After his death, he was forcibly pulled into this dungeon world where all bosses cannibalize people. Because his ability during the test was stronger than the other five, Su Xiaoyun was selected as the captain.
The dungeon is in its initial stages, and even the information about the dungeon requires players to enter the story and explore it on their own. Su Xiaoyun used her own prop, Life Red Line, to perfectly clear the pre-plot of the dungeon. Therefore, the Qingxue team she belongs to has become a god-like existence among everyone.
Facing the predecessor of the boss who was saved by her in the pre-plot
"Jiang Xueran! You must die a happy death!"
"I'm sorry to disappoint you!"
Facing the predecessor of the boss who was betrayed by him in the pre-plot
"Xiao Ciyu, you have no heart!"
"I don't need any sincerity, because I'm just here to pass the level."
Su Xiaoyun relied on the top prop Life Red Line to make the boss completely devoted to her, and then stepped on the boss to successfully pass the dungeon.
"I'm not a good person, so I can't be merciful to them. Since they have done something outrageous, they should be punished."
Reader comments
It doesn't matter if the author gives himself five points, right?
I know, the unlimited flow I wrote is actually quite bad and quite strange.
I can't tell what's wrong, but the overall feeling of reading it is very awkward. The pace is as fast as being whipped with a whip - the protagonist is thrown into the dungeon as soon as he opens his eyes, and the plot is triggered before the rules are figured out. Before the reader has time to be nervous, the BOSS has already been hastily taken. All the suspense that should have been progressively advanced was pushed forward in a hurry, as if I was rushing to finish the story, for fear that I would not be able to finish the story if I was too slow.
As for the plot, it is even more terrible. The water paragraph is like soup mixed with ten times boiled water. It is bland and tasteless. The key plot is mentioned in one stroke, but half a chapter can be filled with nonsense. The logic basically belongs to the wild state of "you get what you want" - whatever the protagonist lacks, he will pick it up on the roadside; if he gets stuck, the enemy will automatically drop his intelligence and send it to his door. The emotional lines that should be foreshadowed were so blunt that it made people touch their toes, and the foreshadowing that should be buried was simply forgotten by me.
In the final analysis, I just didn't have enough skills and wanted to be quick, so I ended up writing such a weird thing.
I like it very much, it's a bit strange. This is the first time I've seen a pre-plot.
It's good-looking, the settings inside are interesting, and the writing is not bad.
It doesn't matter if the author gives himself five points, right? I know, the unlimited flow I wrote is actually quite bad and quite strange. I can't tell what's wrong, but the overall feeling of reading it is very awkward. The pace is as fast as being whipped with a whip - the protagonist is thrown into the dungeon as soon as he opens his eyes, and the plot is triggered before the rules are figured out. Before the reader has time to be nervous, the BOSS has already been hastily taken. All the suspense that should have been progressively advanced was pushed forward in a hurry, as if I was rushing to finish the story, for fear that I would not be able to finish the story if I was too slow. As for the plot, it is even more terrible. The water paragraph is like soup mixed with ten times boiled water. It is bland and tasteless. The key plot is mentioned in one stroke, but half a chapter can be filled with nonsense. The logic basically belongs to the wild state of "you get what you want" - whatever the protagonist lacks, he will pick it up on the roadside; if he gets stuck, the enemy will automatically drop his intelligence and send it to his door. The emotional lines that should be foreshadowed were so blunt that it made people touch their toes, and the foreshadowing that should be buried was simply forgotten by me. In the final analysis, I just didn't have enough skills and wanted to be quick, so I ended up writing such a weird thing.
I like it very much, it's a bit strange. This is the first time I've seen a pre-plot.
It's good-looking, the settings inside are interesting, and the writing is not bad.