[Time travel + harem + delicate emotional lines]
(Those who haven't played it can also watch it. I will explain the background story completely, roughly.)
Except for combat, most of the articles are dialogue-based. I'm sorry if I don't like it. Sometimes the author short-circuits and complains about things that feel silly... Because I really don't know what to say. Comments are welcome.
After all, the emotional line is delicate after all, and the female character will definitely not throw herself into her arms, so the journey of the strategy is a bit long and the early stage is a bit boring. Please forgive me.
"Why did my gaming chair travel through time with me?"
I was still playing Overwatch, but after using Tracer Blink, I suddenly traveled to the world of Overwatch.
I'm convinced, at least give me a decent ability... What's the use of the ability to teleport randomly? Go in front of the enemy and give him kd...
After traveling through time, I was picked up by Shadowwatch, chased by Black Claw, studied by Moira, and targeted by Widowmaker.
This is not a game. Heroes will be confused and die, and the future will slowly collapse.
When "space-time anomalies" begin to erode the body.
When the concepts of Shadowwatch and Overwatch gradually split.
When encounters that shouldn't happen again and again begin to change the world line.
I finally realized that traveling here might not be an accident.
Despite the difficulties I encountered, I still wanted to go on unswervingly and witness the future shaped by me.
This is a story about ordinary people who mistakenly enter the age of heroes.
It is also a story about war, ideals and emotions.
Reader comments
Seedlings, although the first-person narrative can deepen the protagonist's actions and sense of involvement. But the viewing experience is not as good as normal narrative.
The main plot is okay. It's just that the protagonist's skills are a bit useless, they overlap with Tracer's, and they don't have the potential to be very powerful at a glance.
In terms of direction: the harem is right, support it with both hands. Tracer, Song Hana, and Mist who are involved in emotional OW are all pretty good. Others require accumulation over time.
Overall, it's pretty good. It's been a fan of Overwatch heading in the right direction since the game was released. (I don't understand people who write about e-sports. There is no reason or popularity and I can only enjoy myself. At least there is a guy from the 3D area in the harem who can smell it.)
I am the author. Before you read it, I want to state that this book does use AI. I feed the AI a detailed outline, let it generate each small chapter, and then slowly modify it myself.
In fact, a large part of the reason for writing it at the time was to entertain myself. Unexpectedly, some people were interested, which made me surprised and a little guilty at the same time. After all, this book does contain elements of AI.
My writing is not very good, I may have some whimsical ideas sometimes, but that's all.
So I want to apologize to everyone here. I may continue to use AI and then modify it. You can complain if you don't like it, but I'm a glass-hearted person and may secretly cry in the middle of the night, just kidding.
This is my first book, so I will treat it well. Even if no one reads it, I will continue writing and give this book a perfect ending. (Because it was originally used for entertainment, not for profit)
Then, I have no experience in the first few chapters, so the editing was a bit messy, which made me feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. The later chapters felt too concise, which is a big problem anyway.
In short, the purpose of my comment is to say sorry to everyone and express my determination. Seeing as I am so sincere, I can't give it four stars. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]
I saw the latest chapter, what can I say? Not bad, pretty good. Some details in the plot don't match up, which is also one of the characteristics of the fandom. Overall the writing is actually very good, really. Although it is said to be AI-powered, it is much better than most tomato articles that have no clue about the front and back. At least he's very reasonable and emotionally descriptive. It really gives me a feeling like the characters in the game are in love, without OOC. Of course, if you insist that you don't accept the character's orientation, then it may not be suitable for you.
It seems like there aren't many people, but actually all the people playing OW are here [face covering]
My first reaction when I saw this book was that I was very excited. After so many years, I finally saw an author write the background story of Overwatch. I love Overwatch very much and am very interested in and even yearn for its background story. So I have always fantasized about what would happen to you if I traveled there. But now someone has put my fantasy into words. Now, I am really excited and happy. I am very grateful to the author for his willingness to make this attempt. I will keep reading. I also want to say to the author that this road will most likely be difficult. It may be selfish, but I hope you can persevere and complete this work completely. I will always support you. I am really grateful to the author recently. Thank you that he also loves OW.
The level of detail far exceeds the level of 6.3. From an objective evaluation, it has a rating of 8.5. Maybe it's because OW is an unpopular subject in online articles, so the score is a bit low, so don't worry about this number, it's pretty good. But don't believe too much in the title of the book. The pace of the guide is very slow, slower than most novels in Tomato. More than 100 chapters are considered half of the guide [learned]. Also, the protagonist is not invincible, but has great ability potential. At present, the actual combat ability still needs to be improved. In short, the general situation of this novel is basically consistent with the author's introduction, and there is no falsehood. Narrative: **** Ideas: **** Rhythm: **** Strategy speed: * Sweetness: ** Overall impression: **** ps. Can the author improve some practical abilities for the protagonist? At least he won't be crushed to death by Lily's slap🙈.
The character description of this book is great, and the style is very unique. It is not a linear story, but more like a network sandbox record, recording the actions, growth and relationship changes of a group of people in the face of the turbulence of the world.
Well, it can be seen that the author's writing style is improving. Although the heroine's character is a bit repetitive, it still makes me watch it, and there is no stomach-churning plot or green content. As for a series of issues on the timeline that some people say, I don't think it matters, but maybe some people are more sensitive to it.
I hope the heroine's character traits can be more distinct, and the emotional lines between the male protagonist and the other female protagonists are somewhat similar. Also, the male protagonist is a bit weak. The uncle t0, the prisoner t1, Genji t2, and the male protagonist t3 all feel strenuous. I won't say how strong it needs to be, but at least the spatial ability and danger perception should not be too far-fetched.
But at least it's written by an Overwatch fan, so it's okay and I'll keep reading it. Come on, author!
The best OW fanfic I have ever read. The characters have almost no OOC, and the emotional scenes are also well written. Although traces of AI can be seen, the flaws are not hidden. You must keep writing [cry][cry][cry]
The protagonist's combat power is a little stretched, but the emotional line makes up for it a lot and is delicate enough. This first-person perspective gave me a very different sense of immersion. Although AI is used, it is a dimensionality reduction compared to other AI novels in Tomato. Give me a five-star encouragement, and cheers for the author.
Overall, it's very good. The writing is simple and powerful, but there are too many repetitions. For example, you are very stubborn. Many people say that, which is correct. It affects the perception a bit, but it is understandable. The rest of the plot is quite good. It can appropriately enhance the protagonist's combat power and save repeated plots. That's it.
It's so painful. I have an OW novel about love that I like. I can still read about seven chapters every day. It's quite refreshing. Now I open Tomato every day and see that I have finished reading it. It's really uncomfortable. I really like it. Will the author write more sweet OW novels in the future? [Crying] I beg you, for you, I am willing to give you all my hormones, saints, positions, and bells. I'm going to write another one [crying]
If this was made into a game CG, it would feel comparable to Double Dragon. If the author's name was changed to Last chair26, he would be truly a god.
There are already very few articles about Overwatch, and even fewer that are well written.
Why did you just take it off?
It's rare to see Shouwang's book, keep up the good work
Keep up the good work, it's rare to see a book on Watch News.
Wow! I love this baby so much! I couldn't wait to take it apart after receiving it. The quality is great, the material is very environmentally friendly and has no odor, the design is also very user-friendly, it is super convenient to use, and the effect is beyond praise. It is much easier to use than the ones I bought before, and the price is so affordable. I really found a treasure. The seller delivered the goods very fast, and the logistics is also very powerful. It was delivered quickly. The packaging was also very careful and there was no damage at all. I will definitely choose this store in the future. I must give it a good review.
The writing style is really good, and the emotions are also well written. I just want to add some physical descriptions sometimes. Although everyone sees the game characters every day, the look and feel will be better if they are described. Come on, I won't give you a big reward from the supervisor after finishing the game.
The newcomer's new book is very well written👌🏻You should read it as a pure love novel👀
First of all, there are few daily characters in OOW, and when I watch it, I feel like an ancient love story; the rhythm and plot between major events and daily life are good; the protagonist has the ability to grow, which is good, you make me feel that he is alive; and the ending is not perfect for the so-called "satisfaction".
As an OW player, the self-heated articles are undoubtedly excellent.
It feels a bit like AI, but there are too few Overwatch articles. I could use some encouragement.
It's pretty good, but it always smells like AI
A good watch, even I feel excited
It's beautiful, and there's something very human about it. I wouldn't even notice it if the author didn't say it.
Please update more from the author. How come the number of chapters has been reduced from 6 chapters a day? Can you update it at 12:00 in the morning?
It's finished. Although there are some shortcomings, overall it's still worth watching. After all sentient beings return to their dreams, the handling of Zhan Qiu and Jin Yu is very good. I'll give it five stars.
In my heart, she is second only to Piggy Nono [laugh][laugh][laugh]
Boss, write it down
The literary drama is very good, the fighting drama is average, and the plot is still great. At least I can't think of such a plot. That's all ow can write. The author is very good at finishing it.
It's beautiful, and the emotions are quite delicate.
Love you boss, see you tomorrow
I have been playing Overwatch for a few days, starting from Junkrat to Anran Fortress, and I was beaten to death. The matching mechanism is not good at answering, and several level 4 and 5 players were matched up against the opponents who were over level 90.
Seedlings, although the first-person narrative can deepen the protagonist's actions and sense of involvement. But the viewing experience is not as good as normal narrative. The main plot is okay. It's just that the protagonist's skills are a bit useless, they overlap with Tracer's, and they don't have the potential to be very powerful at a glance. In terms of direction: the harem is right, support it with both hands. Tracer, Song Hana, and Mist who are involved in emotional OW are all pretty good. Others require accumulation over time. Overall, it's pretty good. It's been a fan of Overwatch heading in the right direction since the game was released. (I don't understand people who write about e-sports. There is no reason or popularity and I can only enjoy myself. At least there is a guy from the 3D area in the harem who can smell it.)
I am the author. Before you read it, I want to state that this book does use AI. I feed the AI a detailed outline, let it generate each small chapter, and then slowly modify it myself. In fact, a large part of the reason for writing it at the time was to entertain myself. Unexpectedly, some people were interested, which made me surprised and a little guilty at the same time. After all, this book does contain elements of AI. My writing is not very good, I may have some whimsical ideas sometimes, but that's all. So I want to apologize to everyone here. I may continue to use AI and then modify it. You can complain if you don't like it, but I'm a glass-hearted person and may secretly cry in the middle of the night, just kidding. This is my first book, so I will treat it well. Even if no one reads it, I will continue writing and give this book a perfect ending. (Because it was originally used for entertainment, not for profit) Then, I have no experience in the first few chapters, so the editing was a bit messy, which made me feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. The later chapters felt too concise, which is a big problem anyway. In short, the purpose of my comment is to say sorry to everyone and express my determination. Seeing as I am so sincere, I can't give it four stars. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]
I saw the latest chapter, what can I say? Not bad, pretty good. Some details in the plot don't match up, which is also one of the characteristics of the fandom. Overall the writing is actually very good, really. Although it is said to be AI-powered, it is much better than most tomato articles that have no clue about the front and back. At least he's very reasonable and emotionally descriptive. It really gives me a feeling like the characters in the game are in love, without OOC. Of course, if you insist that you don't accept the character's orientation, then it may not be suitable for you.
It seems like there aren't many people, but actually all the people playing OW are here [face covering]
My first reaction when I saw this book was that I was very excited. After so many years, I finally saw an author write the background story of Overwatch. I love Overwatch very much and am very interested in and even yearn for its background story. So I have always fantasized about what would happen to you if I traveled there. But now someone has put my fantasy into words. Now, I am really excited and happy. I am very grateful to the author for his willingness to make this attempt. I will keep reading. I also want to say to the author that this road will most likely be difficult. It may be selfish, but I hope you can persevere and complete this work completely. I will always support you. I am really grateful to the author recently. Thank you that he also loves OW.
The level of detail far exceeds the level of 6.3. From an objective evaluation, it has a rating of 8.5. Maybe it's because OW is an unpopular subject in online articles, so the score is a bit low, so don't worry about this number, it's pretty good. But don't believe too much in the title of the book. The pace of the guide is very slow, slower than most novels in Tomato. More than 100 chapters are considered half of the guide [learned]. Also, the protagonist is not invincible, but has great ability potential. At present, the actual combat ability still needs to be improved. In short, the general situation of this novel is basically consistent with the author's introduction, and there is no falsehood. Narrative: **** Ideas: **** Rhythm: **** Strategy speed: * Sweetness: ** Overall impression: **** ps. Can the author improve some practical abilities for the protagonist? At least he won't be crushed to death by Lily's slap🙈.
The character description of this book is great, and the style is very unique. It is not a linear story, but more like a network sandbox record, recording the actions, growth and relationship changes of a group of people in the face of the turbulence of the world.
Well, it can be seen that the author's writing style is improving. Although the heroine's character is a bit repetitive, it still makes me watch it, and there is no stomach-churning plot or green content. As for a series of issues on the timeline that some people say, I don't think it matters, but maybe some people are more sensitive to it.
I hope the heroine's character traits can be more distinct, and the emotional lines between the male protagonist and the other female protagonists are somewhat similar. Also, the male protagonist is a bit weak. The uncle t0, the prisoner t1, Genji t2, and the male protagonist t3 all feel strenuous. I won't say how strong it needs to be, but at least the spatial ability and danger perception should not be too far-fetched. But at least it's written by an Overwatch fan, so it's okay and I'll keep reading it. Come on, author!
The best OW fanfic I have ever read. The characters have almost no OOC, and the emotional scenes are also well written. Although traces of AI can be seen, the flaws are not hidden. You must keep writing [cry][cry][cry]
The protagonist's combat power is a little stretched, but the emotional line makes up for it a lot and is delicate enough. This first-person perspective gave me a very different sense of immersion. Although AI is used, it is a dimensionality reduction compared to other AI novels in Tomato. Give me a five-star encouragement, and cheers for the author.
Overall, it's very good. The writing is simple and powerful, but there are too many repetitions. For example, you are very stubborn. Many people say that, which is correct. It affects the perception a bit, but it is understandable. The rest of the plot is quite good. It can appropriately enhance the protagonist's combat power and save repeated plots. That's it.
It's so painful. I have an OW novel about love that I like. I can still read about seven chapters every day. It's quite refreshing. Now I open Tomato every day and see that I have finished reading it. It's really uncomfortable. I really like it. Will the author write more sweet OW novels in the future? [Crying] I beg you, for you, I am willing to give you all my hormones, saints, positions, and bells. I'm going to write another one [crying]
If this was made into a game CG, it would feel comparable to Double Dragon. If the author's name was changed to Last chair26, he would be truly a god.
There are already very few articles about Overwatch, and even fewer that are well written. Why did you just take it off?
It's rare to see Shouwang's book, keep up the good work
Keep up the good work, it's rare to see a book on Watch News.
Wow! I love this baby so much! I couldn't wait to take it apart after receiving it. The quality is great, the material is very environmentally friendly and has no odor, the design is also very user-friendly, it is super convenient to use, and the effect is beyond praise. It is much easier to use than the ones I bought before, and the price is so affordable. I really found a treasure. The seller delivered the goods very fast, and the logistics is also very powerful. It was delivered quickly. The packaging was also very careful and there was no damage at all. I will definitely choose this store in the future. I must give it a good review.
The writing style is really good, and the emotions are also well written. I just want to add some physical descriptions sometimes. Although everyone sees the game characters every day, the look and feel will be better if they are described. Come on, I won't give you a big reward from the supervisor after finishing the game.
The newcomer's new book is very well written👌🏻You should read it as a pure love novel👀 First of all, there are few daily characters in OOW, and when I watch it, I feel like an ancient love story; the rhythm and plot between major events and daily life are good; the protagonist has the ability to grow, which is good, you make me feel that he is alive; and the ending is not perfect for the so-called "satisfaction". As an OW player, the self-heated articles are undoubtedly excellent.
It feels a bit like AI, but there are too few Overwatch articles. I could use some encouragement.
It's pretty good, but it always smells like AI
A good watch, even I feel excited
It's beautiful, and there's something very human about it. I wouldn't even notice it if the author didn't say it. Please update more from the author. How come the number of chapters has been reduced from 6 chapters a day? Can you update it at 12:00 in the morning?
It's finished. Although there are some shortcomings, overall it's still worth watching. After all sentient beings return to their dreams, the handling of Zhan Qiu and Jin Yu is very good. I'll give it five stars.
In my heart, she is second only to Piggy Nono [laugh][laugh][laugh] Boss, write it down
The literary drama is very good, the fighting drama is average, and the plot is still great. At least I can't think of such a plot. That's all ow can write. The author is very good at finishing it.
It's beautiful, and the emotions are quite delicate.
Love you boss, see you tomorrow
I have been playing Overwatch for a few days, starting from Junkrat to Anran Fortress, and I was beaten to death. The matching mechanism is not good at answering, and several level 4 and 5 players were matched up against the opponents who were over level 90.