The Story of a Couple Cultivation into Immortality

The heroine's brother killed innocent people indiscriminately and used people's lives to practice cultivation. However, the hero helped the heroine's brother to poison him.

After all, I can be considered a veteran reader. If you look at the writing of this book, it's pretty much the same. The last few books were so poisonous that they persuaded me to quit them. I hope this book doesn't have those poisonous points. The author's writing style is also quite in line with my taste, but there is too little written at the moment. I will give it five stars depending on the situation in the future [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

Out of 10 points, give it 6.5 Points. However, I saw that this book had a low rating, so I gave it 8 points, hoping to improve the overall rating. Let's talk about the advantages first: the overall structure of the novel is acceptable, the logic is clear, and the plot is sweet without any poisonous or shocking points. Can support reading the entire book. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. Perhaps due to reasons such as rating traffic, this novel was rushed to the end and the logic of the end is a bit unreasonable. Two points deducted here. 2. The plot is relatively bland, and overall there is no very big emotional fluctuation. I hope the new work can be polished. (A little more ups and downs) Finally 🎁Send it. Thank you for your story.

Come on, author, you can do it, keep it up. Some works are bad. It's not just bad writing. Maybe even the author himself didn't realize it or did it intentionally. It's adulterated, and you don't have this biggest shortcoming at all. If you stick to this advantage, you will get better and better as you write.

Invulnerable to all poisons, you can see how a weakling and a licking dog are trained~

I really like reading single-female articles. I encourage, encourage, and encourage the author. Don't be discouraged [blowing kiss] The heroine is cute and soft, and the hero is considerate and decisive. They look very comfortable😌

Why is such a beautiful book given such a low score by others? I'm really blocked. You don't like to read it. I like to read it. I rely on you to stop updating the author. Then I won't have to read it. You guys hurry up and give me a high score [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes]

Give me a good review and support. I really like reading this kind of novels. It's a pity that your last one was finished in a mess.

Come on, write more.

The author's writing is very good, and the plot is also pretty good. However, the character creation of the male and female protagonists in the early stage is not likable. I guess it is. It is a good book and worth reading.

There are novel ideas, and the emotional description is very nice and sweet.

It's still possible to talk to brain waves. The male protagonist still values ​​himself and the people around him more than whether he is right or wrong; the female protagonist is similar, but kinder. Example (contains spoilers): For example, after the heroine was kidnapped, the heroine's brother became a demon cultivator in order to become stronger. After the hero and heroine came back, their efforts to dissuade him failed. Later, when a Buddhist monk discovered it, he was silenced by the male protagonist and the female protagonist's brother.

It's toxic but you can read it. If you like sweet articles, you can accept it.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

I am the emperor and this is the emperor's uncle

Crying alone, pure love is invincible

Yellow tomatoes, Tai Chi Ba Huang

Pretty good, Gu Gu Gu Gu Ga Ga

Hey, it looks good. I love watching it.

No wonder I can't get results

OK OK OK OK OK OK OK

Looks good, I like this

It's okay if you don't have any colleagues, it should be unique. Such an awesome talent has been promoted to an old disciple in other novels

It's still okay for now. I see that there are no big poisonous points and the rhythm is okay. The author will continue to work hard and update more.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author

Well, it suits my taste very well.

Come on, I still feel like I can watch it now