[National Fortune Livestream | Entire Neighborhood Transmigrates | Survival | Territory | Cards | Clash of Civilizations]
Overnight, everyone and every building in the Tianjing Bay residential complex transmigrated to another world.
While others screamed in panic, Zhou Linyuan, who had only recently gotten out of prison, activated the [Achievement System]. Intelligence, cards, achievement points: it had everything he could ask for. With the precise coordinates provided by the System, he moved straight into the complex’s most luxurious penthouse, gradually leaving everyone else far behind.
Blue Star could watch the survivors’ livestreams, and the authorities asked to cooperate.
But Zhou Linyuan had been fooled once and spent three years in prison. He no longer believed in the words “unconditional trust.”
I’ll show you what I want you to see on the livestream. I’m willing to cooperate, but don’t try to play me.
In this game, designed by some unknown mastermind, 800,000 transmigrators competed against one another. Zhou Linyuan had only one goal: make it to the end alive.
Meanwhile, the friend who had once betrayed Zhou Linyuan still couldn’t escape retribution back on Blue Star.
No one has commented. I will give it a first review and give it four and a half stars. The main reason is that the three golden chapters are not enough to retain people. Then the live broadcast is basically useless. The protagonist does not seem to intend to recruit people from the community. It is only used for trading. The development of the power is a bit slow. Otherwise, if there is news, some people can be integrated. The development of the power can be much stronger without using real people. There are good and bad. Overall, it's okay. There's room for improvement. It's also a good grass that can be looked at. There are no big poisonous points.
Don't give up and keep writing. First of all, there are problems in the comment area, but they are not big. (I want to give it four stars, but the distinction between comments is too low, so I give you five stars for encouragement.) Secondly, the logic and IQ of each force and people are not bad, and their actions are not mentally retarded. There is competition in the beginning, but in the later stage, the protagonist has a great advantage, and there is no opponent to give away (quite reasonable). Functions such as buildings have great advantages and feel very cool, such as transporting materials, communicating in fantasy worlds, doing cross-border business, positioning teleportation, predicting the next world, etc. It feels logical and refreshing, and it should be quite difficult to write in the follow-up (if the advantage is so great, are you willing to collapse?) The author should not give up on the article, this article is getting better and better.
The old bookworm said it looks good
Are there too many ancient people to recruit? 😂😂
I think it's quite interesting, but it's difficult to write a story about survival in a community. It's too confusing, so the rating may be low. I think the male protagonist is pretty good.
Come on. It's always there anyway.
The subject matter is novel and the logic is clear
There is a slight sense of despondency, which may be related to the protagonist's experience
It looks good so far, keep it up