[National Games Live Broadcast | Community Group Wear | Survival | Territory | Cards | Civilization Clash]
Overnight, the people and buildings in Tianjingwan Community traveled to a different world.
While others were screaming in panic, Zhou Linyuan, who had just been released from prison, activated the [Achievement System] - information, cards, achievement points, whatever he wanted. Relying on the precise coordinates given by the system, he moved directly into the most luxurious flat floor in the community, gradually widening the gap with everyone.
Blue Star can watch the live broadcast of the survivors, and the official asks for cooperation.
But Zhou Linyuan had been fooled once and had been in prison for three years. He had long since disbelieved in the words "unconditional trust."
I'll show you what I want you to see in the live broadcast. It's okay to cooperate, but don't try to trick me.
In this game designed by an unknown mastermind, 800,000 time-travelers compete on the same stage, and Zhou Linyuan has only one goal: to survive until the end.
By the way, the friend who cheated Zhou Linyuan still cannot escape the reckoning in Blue Star.
Reader comments
No one has commented. I will give it a first review and give it four and a half stars. The main reason is that the three golden chapters are not enough to retain people. Then the live broadcast is basically useless. The protagonist does not seem to intend to recruit people from the community. It is only used for trading. The development of the power is a bit slow. Otherwise, if there is news, some people can be integrated. The development of the power can be much stronger without using real people. There are good and bad.
Overall, it's okay. There's room for improvement. It's also a good grass that can be looked at. There are no big poisonous points.
Don't give up and keep writing. First of all, there are problems in the comment area, but they are not big. (I want to give it four stars, but the distinction between comments is too low, so I give you five stars for encouragement.) Secondly, the logic and IQ of each force and people are not bad, and their actions are not mentally retarded. There is competition in the beginning, but in the later stage, the protagonist has a great advantage, and there is no opponent to give away (quite reasonable). Functions such as buildings have great advantages and feel very cool, such as transporting materials, communicating in fantasy worlds, doing cross-border business, positioning teleportation, predicting the next world, etc. It feels logical and refreshing, and it should be quite difficult to write in the follow-up (if the advantage is so great, are you willing to collapse?) The author should not give up on the article, this article is getting better and better.
The old bookworm said it looks good
Are there too many ancient people to recruit? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
The subject matter is novel and the logic is clear
Come on. It's always there anyway.
It looks good so far, keep it up
There is a slight sense of despondency, which may be related to the protagonist's experience
I think it's quite interesting, but it's difficult to write a story about survival in a community. It's too confusing, so the rating may be low. I think the male protagonist is pretty good.
No one has commented. I will give it a first review and give it four and a half stars. The main reason is that the three golden chapters are not enough to retain people. Then the live broadcast is basically useless. The protagonist does not seem to intend to recruit people from the community. It is only used for trading. The development of the power is a bit slow. Otherwise, if there is news, some people can be integrated. The development of the power can be much stronger without using real people. There are good and bad. Overall, it's okay. There's room for improvement. It's also a good grass that can be looked at. There are no big poisonous points.
Don't give up and keep writing. First of all, there are problems in the comment area, but they are not big. (I want to give it four stars, but the distinction between comments is too low, so I give you five stars for encouragement.) Secondly, the logic and IQ of each force and people are not bad, and their actions are not mentally retarded. There is competition in the beginning, but in the later stage, the protagonist has a great advantage, and there is no opponent to give away (quite reasonable). Functions such as buildings have great advantages and feel very cool, such as transporting materials, communicating in fantasy worlds, doing cross-border business, positioning teleportation, predicting the next world, etc. It feels logical and refreshing, and it should be quite difficult to write in the follow-up (if the advantage is so great, are you willing to collapse?) The author should not give up on the article, this article is getting better and better.
The old bookworm said it looks good
Are there too many ancient people to recruit? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
The subject matter is novel and the logic is clear
Come on. It's always there anyway.
It looks good so far, keep it up
There is a slight sense of despondency, which may be related to the protagonist's experience
I think it's quite interesting, but it's difficult to write a story about survival in a community. It's too confusing, so the rating may be low. I think the male protagonist is pretty good.