[No system + protagonist from "Dark Zone Breakout" + multiple women (some humble and some serious)] "Teacher, you don't seem to be a teacher in the traditional sense..."
"Huh? What do you mean?"
"Does the profession of teacher... Have the ability to command us in combat?"
"I have learned a little before..."
"Teacher, what did you do before?"
"…A bastard."
Reader comments
Very good, the narration is good, the rhythm is on point, the 10,000-word chapter is well received, and it is a good guide from Carmona to the Azure World. It is not like other authors who inexplicably travel through time and space and talk about it a lot. The protagonist's current character image is very comfortable, and the story in Azure is not written according to the plot like other authors. Come on, it will be a good book. I suggest you write more details about the protagonist's equipment. Which gun does the protagonist use?
Oh my god, the teacher is simply superman. I suggest this book be changed to superhuman teacher and his mascot students.
I enjoyed reading the 10,000-word chapter. I'll wait and see for now, and I'll make up for it later. There's nothing wrong with the plot. It's pretty good.
Let's talk about the conclusion first: a big chapter with 10,000 words every day, a large amount of content, a three-dimensional and full protagonist, and a strong evaluation. Secondly, S1 veterans like me can skip the first chapter. The first chapter is an introduction to the background of the dark zone. If you know it, just read the second chapter.
I feel good after reading it. This book is actually more like a prose than a novel. The collision between those who survived the battlefield and the girls who are intertwined with the troubles of youth. There are also various events where you meet the gods of Kivotos to do a big job, and you need physical and economic crushing from the "super battle king" - the teacher. All in all, it is a good thing worth watching. Come on, the author [punch out]
Yes, but it reads a bit like a composition
Large portion, filling, good reviews!
Nothing much to say.
Ten thousand words updated once a day
It's very beautiful, a big chapter of ten thousand words.
No need to say more about this masterpiece!
Real, the introduction in the first chapter is very good
The writing is quite novel.
This is so good looking I go.
Good looking
Also, when will the author rewrite the Red Wolf book? I like to read that book.
A big chapter of 10,000 words. I haven't seen so many words in a long time. It feels pretty good. Let's talk about it later.
Ninety-nine percent, rare item! I originally came here for the Dark Zone, but I didn't expect it to be quite well written. I don't know much about the specifics, so I could only read it in one go over hundreds of thousands of words, and then give it a five-star review.
Nice! The description is vivid but not verbose.
Very interesting, ordinary everyday, but still interesting to watch
Damn it, bro. The number of characters is large and the writing style is quite good.
The plot and character settings are very good
Large quantities, good management, daily updates, good writing, so far it seems to be okay
Very good, the narration is good, the rhythm is on point, the 10,000-word chapter is well received, and it is a good guide from Carmona to the Azure World. It is not like other authors who inexplicably travel through time and space and talk about it a lot. The protagonist's current character image is very comfortable, and the story in Azure is not written according to the plot like other authors. Come on, it will be a good book. I suggest you write more details about the protagonist's equipment. Which gun does the protagonist use?
Oh my god, the teacher is simply superman. I suggest this book be changed to superhuman teacher and his mascot students.
I enjoyed reading the 10,000-word chapter. I'll wait and see for now, and I'll make up for it later. There's nothing wrong with the plot. It's pretty good.
Let's talk about the conclusion first: a big chapter with 10,000 words every day, a large amount of content, a three-dimensional and full protagonist, and a strong evaluation. Secondly, S1 veterans like me can skip the first chapter. The first chapter is an introduction to the background of the dark zone. If you know it, just read the second chapter.
I feel good after reading it. This book is actually more like a prose than a novel. The collision between those who survived the battlefield and the girls who are intertwined with the troubles of youth. There are also various events where you meet the gods of Kivotos to do a big job, and you need physical and economic crushing from the "super battle king" - the teacher. All in all, it is a good thing worth watching. Come on, the author [punch out]
Yes, but it reads a bit like a composition
Large portion, filling, good reviews!
Nothing much to say.
Ten thousand words updated once a day
It's very beautiful, a big chapter of ten thousand words.
No need to say more about this masterpiece!
Real, the introduction in the first chapter is very good
The writing is quite novel.
This is so good looking I go.
Good looking Also, when will the author rewrite the Red Wolf book? I like to read that book.
A big chapter of 10,000 words. I haven't seen so many words in a long time. It feels pretty good. Let's talk about it later.
Ninety-nine percent, rare item! I originally came here for the Dark Zone, but I didn't expect it to be quite well written. I don't know much about the specifics, so I could only read it in one go over hundreds of thousands of words, and then give it a five-star review.
Nice! The description is vivid but not verbose.
Very interesting, ordinary everyday, but still interesting to watch
Damn it, bro. The number of characters is large and the writing style is quite good.
The plot and character settings are very good
Large quantities, good management, daily updates, good writing, so far it seems to be okay